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Whether you’re relaxing into an airplane seat, a deckchair at the beach, or a cozy couch near a fireside Down Under, settling down to read is one of life’s great pleasures. Today on FanFiction Fridays, we have quite the mixture of entertaining fics for you: three complete fics, a one shot, a wondrous WIP, and a drabble, bringing not only romance, friendship, and the supernatural from both human and vampire worlds, but Edward/Bella, Alice/Jasper, and Edward/Emmett. 

We are also delighted and honoured to have the talented Raum and Camilla10 join us today.

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*Review by Raum and Camilla10*

The Brandons by jmolly

*Made by Raum using art by Alicexz on Deviantart*

*Made by Raum using art by Alicexz on Deviantart*

The Brandons ~ Edward gives Alice the key to her past and future: a phone number for her sister. Companion fic to ‘I Hunger’, but stands alone easily. Vamps/humans, somewhat AU.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Family/Romance – Alice & Jasper – Chapters: 20 – Words: 98,369 – Reviews: 386 – Favs: 70 – Follows: 70 – Updated: 12-07-11 – Published: 05-29-10 – id: 6008317

In the Twilight Saga, the passage from human to vampire represents a very important theme — just think about Bella’s desire to become like Edward, or Edward’s views about his soul. But there’s another passage that is not less important: the one from vampire to human. In this case, the body or the physiology of an immortal creature aren’t going to change, but the vampire gets the possibility to discover some traits of his humanity again. It happens to Edward, through his love for Bella, and it happens to Alice in an amazing story by the talented Jmolly.

Jmolly is a very prolific author, and her stories feature our beloved vamps, with a bunch of very original and intriguing twists. She has a very fine ironic trait, but she can also make you cry in front of the screen (if you don’t trust me, go read “The Sad Story of Woof”). She can describe the characters’ feelings very well, and in her fics they often admit and talk about their most hidden fears and desires.

In “The Brandons” Jmolly focuses on Alice.

Alice’s human past was a mystery for herself and the Cullens, because the pain of the venom had erased all of her human memories during her transformation. It’s through Bella that Alice finally gets back something about the human, broken girl she once was: when Bella is attacked by James at the ballet studio, he tells her about Alice, who once escaped him.

In Jmolly’s fic, Edward gives Alice the key to her past and future: a phone number for her sister. Let’s read how the author describes this pivotal scene

“Alice? I have something for you.” Edward reached into his pocket and pulled out his wallet.

“What is it?” I wondered, nonplussed.

“You haven’t Seen?” he asked hesitantly. A very old, very tiny old lady,grinning and refusing to let go of my hand. Sticking out her other hand for Jazz to kiss.

I shook my head, confused, and waited for my brother to enlighten me. “Who is she?”

“Cynthia,” he informed me kindly. I shot to my feet, anxiety and something suspiciously like anger engulfed me. Both Edward and Jasper recoiled.

“It can’t be. It can’t be! I saw the gravestone. She’s been dead since 1945, Edward. I looked for her. She was the only Brandon I found in the records.”

“It’s her. She was thinking about your mother and wishing that her family’s birth and death notices were available. They’re planning a reunion. I guess there was a fire at the church and a lot of history was lost. That’s how I caught on. Your father had a sister named Cynthia, too. It was her grave you found. Her gravestone only lists the date of her death, because the records were lost and your parents had already passed on. Only your sister remained, and she didn’t know the date of birth, only death.”

I stood stiffly, trembling, and my breath huffed out in a whimper. “My sister’s not dead,” I said numbly.

“She’s not dead, and she wants to meet you.”

My eyes flew to Edward’s face. “How?”

Are you already curious to see how will Alice reconnect not only with her much alive sister but with a bunch of endearing “descendants”? All this while a hurricane threatens to sweep the new found family away. So they need to be rescued by human and non human means, but it is still necessary to keep the secret. You will laugh, you will bite your nails, and at the end of the journey you will be happy for them.

Jmolly’s story is complete, so you’ll get all your answers in a timely manner.Happy reading!

Camilla and Raum

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*Review by Raum*

The Decision by windchymes

*Made by Jaime Arkin*

*Made by Jaime Arkin*

The Decision ~ Edward made a decision after that second biology lesson. Two years later that decision is challenged.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 9 – Words: 96,613 – Reviews: 2,382 - Favs: 2,325 – Follows: 1,770 – Updated: 10-15-11 – Published: 03-05-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6797418

Don’t miss it because…

I could list many reasons why The Decision is one of my favorite fics. I’ve reread it several times, and every time I end up savoring each word and noticing new details. I’m going to give you just five reasons why you can’t miss this story; feel free to add yours!

1. Edward 

I know, Edward Cullen is always a good reason! This story features an amazing Vampward — sweet without being sappy, mature without being a controlling jerk. Vampires are supposed to be unchanging, but in Windchymes’ stories they do change. Edward is open to discussing his beliefs with Bella, and chapter by chapter his views on his soul–and on Bella’s choice to become a vampire–change. This takes us to the second reason…

2. Characters

The Decision features the Cullen coven, other canon vampires (we meet Tanya, and traditional vamps), but also a bunch of great original characters. Each of them is well developed. Forget the clichés. Forget a Bella who spends her time just taking care of her parents, or a brooding Edward. Both Edward and Bella make–or have already made–new experiences in this story. They talk about the places they’ve visited and the ones they’d like to discover, they have many interests and projects. Edward and Bella work wonderfully well together, but they’re capable of being apart as well. I absolutely love the way the author shows how the characters’ psychology change as the story progresses.In Chapter 2, we read:

Edward breathed in her scent and let his throat burn while his heart rejoiced. She was here.Of course he had called for her, and as they’d set off from her front door he had wanted to offer her his arm. And if it had been 1918 he would have. But it wasn’t 1918.

So they walked side by side, talking about her new history assignment and his transfer, while they both balled their hands tightly in their pockets.They sat on the grass by the lagoon and Edward showed off, skimming stones perfectly across the surface of the water, making them bounce and dance.

“Impressive,” Bella smirked and Edward smiled.

“There’s a lake in Switzerland, in the Bernese Alps, that’s perfectly still,” he said. “It has perfect reflection and they say if you skim stones across it, it looks like glass breaking.” Edward actually knew this because he’d done it.

Bella smiled. “That sounds beautiful,” she said. “I saw a lake like that in France. I tried skimming, but my stone just sank.”

It took a fraction of a second for Edward to realise what Bella had just said. “You’ve been to France?”

“Uh huh.”

“When?”

“Between graduation and starting college.” She had been sitting with her legs curled under her, but she stretched out now, leaning back on her hands. She tilted her head to look at the sky and extended her neck as she did so. She breathed deeply. And while part of Edward’s mind was still absorbing the fact she’d been to France, another part marvelled that she felt comfortable enough with him to expose herself that way. Even unwittingly.

She made another shift, changing her position and curling her legs beneath her again, the opposite way this time. Her movement broke Edward’s gaze. Now he stared at her profile, her eyes downcast as she plucked at the grass, and he focussed on what she’d just said.

He had questions, so many questions, and he didn’t know where to start. So he summed it up in two words.

“Tell me?”

3. Travels

I mentioned that Edward and Bella have many travel experiences to share in this story; it’s well researched, and the places where it’s set play a role in it. The main part of the story is set in Chicago, and you’ll be able to discover many of its important landmarks. Some European cities are mentioned, and the characters will become your guides, making you see those places through their eyes, sharing their emotions. A part of the story is set in Greece, and it makes it an ideal reading for the summer. But I can’t tell you more…

4. Writing

The writing is elegant, smooth, and captivating. Every word is like a gem, carefully chosen and with many facets to discover. I love the way the author describes objects that play a role in the story–a certain purple cashmere blanket, for example–and the way the characters voice their feelings. Windchymes’ words will stay with you.

5. Angst-free

This story has a good plot, and it’s very well told. There are moments when you’ll be worried for the characters, or when you’ll be afraid, but there’s no angst-for-angst’s-sake. This is another reason why I’m sure it will be a great fic for the holidays.

- Raum


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6797418/1/The-Decision

Windchymes is now a published original fiction author under name Suzanne Carroll, with her books, The Thunderstorm, and Over the Edge.  Congratulations to her!

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Thanks so much to Raum and Camilla for taking the time to share these favourite fics with us. MWAH!

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*Reviews by Cared*

Fill Me With Your Poison  by Nolebucgrl

*Made by Jaime Arkin*

*Made by Jaime Arkin*

Fill Me With Your Poison ~ Bella Swan’s intrigued by vampires. Edward Cullen’s bored and alone. What happens when they meet? AU, vampire. Rated M. Inspired by Katy Perry’s ET.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Supernatural – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 2 – Words: 12,965 – Reviews: 526 – Favs: 838 – Follows: 665 – Updated: 05-27-13 – Published: 05-20-11 – id: 7007740

A/N from Nolebucgrl: Hi there! Here I am again with another story, something I just couldn’t get out of my head. From the first time I heard it, “E.T.” by Katy Perry screamed Edward and Bella to me. I love the song and I loved the image I had of the two of them to go with it, so I sought to put it on paper. This is different for me. Third person, not really humorous, but it’s exactly as I saw it. I hope you enjoy!

Nolebucgrl told no lie by saying this is different for her.  Roll over Brothers Grimm; there is a new storyteller in town!   Fill Me With Your Poison doesn’t start with “Once Upon A Time” and I don’t know if it will finish with “And they all lived happily ever after,” but somehow, I feel as though Nolebucgrl is recounting a fairy tale to me.  Not a children’s one mind you – given what Edward has in mind to do with Bella – no 107-year-old virgins exist in this story!  That thought sparked my interest, and so I looked up the definition of fairy tales to see if vampires have ever been included in the genre. I discovered “A fairy tale is a type of short story that typically features folkloric fantasy characters, such as fairies, goblins, elves, trolls, dwarves, giants, mermaids, or gnomes, and usually magic or enchantments.”  Pfffttt!  They are going to need to reconsider their definition to include vampires, and IMHO, the mating bond…magic doesn’t come any more wondrous than that.

The story opens with Bella and her friends Lauren and Jessica getting dolled up for a daring night-out in Venom – a vampire club!  I’m not talking fancy dress night-club here, I mean a place you could go to meet vampires in a social setting, perhaps even be changed upon agreement of both vampire and human.  Vampires have become tired of hiding their true existence; they want to live in public without hiding behind a façade, and so following negotiations with the human leaders, deals were struck that allow them to do just that.  This whole premise of the story is unique, and one of the lures that sucked me in. (Pardon the pun.) I was completely captivated, and a bit in awe of Nolebucgrl, actually; how she came up with the methods of these vampires entering and co-existing in peace in the human world.  The thought process and precision that Nolebucgrl  must have gone through to think this up and make it all work is astounding.

Edward Cullen is the owner of Venom, but it’s obvious his power and influence stretch way beyond those four walls, and I suspect he has his own agenda for how the power balance between vampire and human will eventually play out.  His brothers Jasper and Emmett turn humans for pleasure, but the only humans Edward has ever turned were poor unfortunates he used for practice.  Then the delectable Isabella Swan walked in the door…

It was then that Edward saw her. The girl that wasn’t sure she should be there. His red gaze turned black as his eyes moved over her perfect face. Her skin was so light that it was almost translucent. Edward immediately regretted the flashing lights of the club, for he wanted to see her luminous skin in white light and in total darkness. Anywhere, really. Her wide, frightened eyes captured him, and he felt his hand tighten around the table’s edge. He wanted to touch that skin, feel that softness between his fingertips, and take the fear off her face.

He watched as she bit her lip and looked around uncertainly. Her friends had already abandoned her for his brothers, and he could tell, even without focusing on her thoughts, that she was thinking of hightailing it out of the club. He could not have that. He stood abruptly and ran down the steps, past his bodyguard. Nobody was allowed onto the second level of the club without a special invitation from Edward, and he had yet to grant one, though he was thinking of rectifying that immediately for the gorgeous girl in blue.

He ignored the writhing bodies as he walked slowly through them. Though he was impatient to be near her, he savored the path to get to her. It felt to him like something momentous was happening, and he almost swore that he felt his dead heart pounding in his chest. Too soon, and not soon enough, he was in front of the girl, and she was even more glorious up close. His eyes moved over her hungrily.

Bella saw the man-no vampire-with the strange hair approaching. It was hard to tell, with the strobe lights going off everyplace, but she swore she could see a mix of brown, blond, and red there. His eyes were black, which frightened her, but something about the way he was looking at her told her that she had nothing to fear. She felt as if she were a priceless painting or something, the way he watched her. She held her breath as he approached, for she knew he was coming for her.

When he stopped directly in front of her, she gasped at the utter beauty of the man before her. The vampire at the front door had been handsome, and the two vampires that had absconded with her friends had been even better looking. But this vampire, right in front of her, looking at her like she was the only person in the room, was the most gorgeous thing she’d ever seen in her lifetime.

He’s beautiful. Edward smiled at her thoughts.

“Hello, my name is Edward Cullen.” …

And with that “Hello,” masterful, complex, enigmatic, sexy Edward has me; he has the uncharacteristically bold and daring Bella, too.  Instead of being frightened by Edward’s vampire nature, Bella is intrigued by him and surprisingly, even to herself, she feels safe.  Edward, for his part, is dazzled and aroused by the beautiful, shy human, but more importantly, she awakens feelings he didn’t know existed.  Ah, the emergence of the mate bond…a thing of beauty to behold!  Nolebucgrl says she plans to explore the mate bond; that is akin to a melodic vampire voice to my ears, as it’s the other aspect of this story that immediately ensnared me.  From what I’ve read so far, I gather that both the fathers, Aro – yes, I said Aro – and Charlie, will prove to be forces to be reckoned with in their own way; that’s yet another element of interest to this already absorbing story.

And then they all lived err… I don’t know…but I definitely want to find out.  So, why not set off on this fascinating and delightful journey with me, and we’ll explore it together.

ET by Katy Perry – the inspiration for Fill Me With Your Poison.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7007740/1/Fill-Me-with-Your-Poison

Nolebucgrl is also a published original fiction author.  Her first book is called Code Red and her pen-name is Amy Noelle.  I recently read this book and loved it. Congratulations and I look forward to many more!

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She’s Royal by halojones

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She’s Royal ~ The Cullens are in Hawaii on holiday, but only Alice knows the reason why they are there-she’s had a premonition that Edward would finally meet his true love. But when their meeting is ruined by unforeseen circumstances, will Alice set things right again?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Supernatural – Chapters: 20 – Words: 110,148 – Reviews: 2,663 – Favs: 2,202 – Follows: 1,214 – Updated: 03-27-09 – Published: 06-08-08 – Status: Complete – id: 4310111

Alice had a dream.  No sparkling vampires were harmed or even featured, and she didn’t make enough money to pay off her minivan loan.  What she actually did experience was a tantalizing glimpse of the perfect woman for Edward, and instead of the aforementioned good financial fortune – she maxed out Carlisle’s credit card in an effort to turn the dream into reality.

Alice’s Dream…

Edward was in a dark, crowded club. The music wasn’t the usual club music you hear in the states-it was a reggae/dancehall style. And among the sea of tanned, after beach clubbing, swaying bodies, Edward looked out of place. He was overdressed, undertanned, and standing alone. Then something caught his eye- a girl with her back to him was dancing gently to the music. Her thick, long, brunette hair swayed about a beat behind her moving hips. She was alone too, and Edward started closing the distance between them. In the background, a musical refrain could be hear loud and clear:

“she’s royal yeah, so royal,

and I need her in my life,

I never knew anyone, so one of a kind

until the night that I seen your eyes,”

Edward softly tapped her on the shoulder, smiling so widely and openly as she turned around to meet his gaze. I couldn’t see her profile as she turned, because a flower behind her ear blocked my view– but I heard Edward clearly say, “Finally.”

Sometimes in fanfic…okay… quite often in fanfic, Alice is portrayed as an annoying but likeable, interfering pixie with shopaholic tendencies.  IMHO, she is one of the hardest Twilight characters to portray somewhat canon, without turning her into a caricature.  In She’s Royal, Alice is indeed a vertically challenged, meddling, visionary, but she is perfectly balanced, and it didn’t take long for halojones to convince me to sign up for both Team Alice and her crazy plan.  Alice moves Heaven and Earth to persuade the Cullen Clan to travel en masse to Hawaii for a holiday, just so Edward can meet his mystery brunette – the woman she believes is his destiny.  Edward and Alice may be twins with a freaky special connection, but in this case, Edward is clueless and messes up – carefully laid plans of mice and Alice are trampled underfoot by him dancing with a cute girl who had…shoulder length blonde hair.  Men!  What a time for usually reserved Edward to come out of his shell!

Alice is very mindful of Edward being the loner among happy couples, and it concerns her; she insists on sharing accommodation with Rosalie so that Jasper and Emmett can bunk with Edward.  Needless to say, Jasper and Emmett are not keen on the sleeping arrangements and are determined to hook Edward up so they will be off the…err…hook IYKWIM.  Their meddling once again throws a spanner in the works, but fate is not one to give in easily; they say fate is a fickle mistress, but I say fate is stubborn as a toddler in the sweet aisle in the supermarket, – she wants her HEA for Edward and Bella and sets up another opportunity for them to meet.  Cliff diving no less…

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They both laughed-knowing I was stalling. I didn’t care though-I needed a moment to get the urge up to jump. I watched the water until a new set of waves came in-the water was definitely not shallow now. And yet my feet were stuck to the rock.

“Excuse me, ” said a little boy about 10 years old. He hopped right in front of me, and leapt into the sea. Jasper and Emmett were cracking up below.

“You just got owned by a second grader, Edward,” Emmett called out.

I tried one more time to will my feet to jump-but they wouldn’t. The dread was evenly spread throughout my body now, and I seriously began to consider just walking back down the rock. I didn’t want to do it.

The light pressure of a hand was suddenly on my shoulder. “Are you okay? ” a soft voice asked gently.

“Uh, yeah.” I mumbled as I continued looking at the water-and the mocking faces of Jas and Emmett.

“Don’t look down like that. Whatever you do, don’t look down. You won’t jump if you keep staring at the water.”

I finally looked to my side to acknowledge the voice. A girl with long, brown hair was beside me, with a flower behind her ear. She had almond shaped, dark brown eyes that seemed to empathize with my situation.

“What a chicken shit you are,” Emmett cackled out from beneath.

The girl looked down to see where the voice was coming from and glared at Emmett. “Don’t listen to that idiot. People can be so rude sometimes.”

I let out a small laugh. “Actually, I sorta have to listen to that idiot. He’s my older brother.”

Her nose scrunched in disbelief. “Well, I’m sure he’s nice most of the time, but he’s not being very nice right now.”

“But that’s a big brother’s job, isn’t it? ” I countered with a smile, trying to keep the conversation going-which kept me on the rock that much longer.

“I don’t know what a big brother’s job is since I don’t have one. But if you want to jump, you need to not look down AND not listen to your big brother-doing his job apparently.”

I let out a small laugh, but I was only half listening. She bit her lip while looking at me-she looked like she was trying to figure out how to approach me.

“I came here for the first time yesterday, and I was frozen in this very place just like you. I just couldn’t get my feet to move. I was this close to just walking back down the rock and calling it a day.”

I tried to not look down and focus on her instead. “And did you get over being frozen?”

She nodded enthusiastically. “Some nice boy came up beside me, told me to stop looking down, and offered to jump with me. He held my hand, and without giving me time to think, he leapt off with me.”

Before I could respond to her, she grabbed both my hands and said, “Your turn.” 

Edward and Bella develop a fascinating bond but even with supernatural intrigue weaving its way through to bind them tight, their relationship is not the without normal human misguided decisions and some heartache.  This mystical tale of romance is all human though, with enough of a supernatural twist  to bring us into the AU realm, and is a lovely short read – perfect for a lazy day.  Take Edward by the hand and jump!

And to get you in the mood…

halojones says if Bella’s lullaby was a reggae song, it would be this:


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4310111/1/She-s-Royal

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Mo Chroí by SweetDulcinea

*Made by inside-the-disarray*

*Made by inside-the-disarray*

Mo Chroí ~ Summer of Smut Contest Judge’s Pick – Summer camp romance is put on hold when Edward returns home to Ireland & ended altogether after a misunderstanding. Will the next summer be torture for Bella, or will she be able to forgive & move forward? AH

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Friendship – Bella & Edward – Words: 10,495 – Reviews: 51 – Favs: 157 – Follows: 33 – Published: 08-21-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5319855

Mo Chroí was awarded a Judges’ Mention in the Summer Smut contest in 2009.

Mo Chroí is a very well-written one shot and contains a perfect blend of friendship, with a sprinkling of angst, and a bucket load of love.  Many of you ladies share my love of Irishward, but being Irish myself, I set the standard for them quite high, and believe me, this gorgeous example does not disappoint.  In fact, none of the characters do; even Garrett in the usual Jake role, made me warm to him and want to fix him up with a nice girl.

The story is set in an American summer camp where the usual suspects work as counselors.  It’s obvious from the opening scene, where Bella discovers that Edward is once again on staff for the season, that the previous year’s romance between Edward and Bella is in tatters…

June 2009

“Mary Alice Brandon, I can’t believe you,” I fumed at my best friend.

“Bella, I swear to Prada I didn’t know! Jasper told me that Edward wasn’t working this summer.”

I threw my last bag down on my bunk and glared at her. How on earth my little fashionista BFF ever came to work at a summer camp is beyond me. You would never believe someone like her could be interested in camping, wilderness, and water sports, but she somehow managed to last each summer in Tommy Hilfiger and Sperry’s. It was slightly less formal than her usual designer wardrobe, but for Alice, it was her version of camp wear. All my camp clothes came from Target.

Alice and I met at camp three summers ago when we were co-counselors in the same cabin. It was the last summer before we both started college and we bonded immediately. By midsummer, she changed her undergraduate plans and was enrolled at Texas A&M with me. That’s where she met her boyfriend Jasper, and the second summer, she dragged him to work at camp with us.

That second summer – last summer – is when I met him.

Edward and Emmett McCarty were the Irish born wonder brothers, sent by the devil himself to torture and tantalize every female staff member and camper to step foot onto the grounds of Camp Chautauqua Lake. In reality, their American mother had worked here when she was a teen, many years before meeting Edward and Emmett’s father and moving to Ireland. According to the guys, they attended a week of camp one summer when they were kids. Deciding to work there had been a last minute excuse to spend their summer in the States, and the camp director ate up the idea of having two “international” counselors on staff.

The thing you have to understand about working at a summer camp is that everything moves in fast forward, especially relationships. You spend twenty-four hours a day with a staff of less than fifty people for ten straight weeks. Every meal, every experience, and every night off are spent together. Friendships are formed quickly, and in such a small social circle, the bonds run deep and intense. In most cases, boyfriend-girlfriend relationships only take days to form from the point of initial flirtation to exclusivity.

That is exactly what happened with Edward and me.

While that is what happened the first year, this time around Edward needs to earn Bella’s forgiveness and win her back.  There is a lovely slow burn as he woos Bella.  *I’m pausing here to sigh as I let the romance of the story wash over me again.*  Their back-story is revealed as the story moves forward and we see how sweet and right they are together; beautifully passionate too.

Mo Chroí is Irish for My Heart – take five minutes to swoon over Irishward and discover why it’s the perfect title for this charming story.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5319855/1/Mo-Chroi

Author’s Blog can be found here.

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One Summer Night by  karenec 

*Made by Falling Stars*

*Made by Falling Stars*

One Summer Night ~ When Edward Masen gets stood up at his sister’s wedding, a surprising confession from his friend Emmett might just turn the whole night around. Edward/Emmett, AH. Slashy drabbles.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Friendship – Edward & Emmett – Chapters: 2 – Words: 803 – Reviews: 30 - Favs: 17 – Follows: 32 – Updated: 06-12-13 – Published: 06-10-13 – id: 9376336

The story opens with Emmett having witnessed Edward being stood-up by his date to his sister’s wedding…

“Besides, you should thank me. Now you’re not the only single guy at this shindig.” Edward winked.

Emmett hummed in agreement as the two men walked off the elevator. Part of him wanted Edward’s date to show; clearly, his friend’s feelings were slightly dented at being stood up on such an important evening. A darker, secret corner of Emmett’s heart was glad that Alec had gone AWOL, though; Emmett had always suspected that a jackass lurked under Alec’s handsome face. He felt a smug satisfaction that Alec had finally shown his true colors … until dejection flashed in Edward’s eyes.

~oOo~

Edward put on his game face. He pushed his disappointment with Alec away, covering it with an easy laugh.

He escorted Alice down the aisle, placing her hand in Jasper’s with a feeling of satisfaction. His throat ached as the couple said their vows, and afterward, he laughed when his baby sister threw her arms around his neck in a fierce hug.

At the reception, Edward paid attention to everyone as only he could, ensuring that champagne glasses were full, that his mother had a comfortable seat, and that Alice and Jasper had food to nibble; that everyone was content.

~oOo~

“Buy you a drink?” Emmett asked when Edward finally joined him at the bar.

Edward nodded gratefully, casting a glance over his shoulder at the party in full swing. He turned back when something cold brushed the back of his hand, and accepted a glass of beer from his friend.

“Relax, Ed. It’s a good party.”

Edward’s head snapped up at Emmett’s gentle tone. The affection in his friend’s expression warmed him. “Yeah, you’re right,” he agreed with surprise. “Mom’s happy. And Alice and Jasper love it. Everyone’s having a good time.”

“The real question is,” Emmett asked, “are you?”

We are all familiar with the scenario where Edward and Bella are best friends and one of them is secretly in love with the other.  There are a myriad of ways for awareness to dawn on the oblivious party and for the relationship to morph from purely friendship to more. I’m so looking forward to the different dynamics in this story, though – in case some of you haven’t guessed it, this time, the developing relationship will be between Edward and Emmett – making this story a completely different ball-game altogether. (Sorry, I couldn’t resist it.)

One Summer Night is really only starting out, and whilst I haven’t learnt too much about the characters yet, I know Emmett is a loyal and caring friend, that much is obvious, and Edward is a wonderful, loving brother and son; for some reason I suspect he is a sensitive soul. I wondered how else to describe them to entice you to read the story, then in a review reply to me karenec said,  ”Honestly, I have no idea how someone could not have feelings for Edward or Emmett — they’re way too easy to love.”  So, all of you dear readers who don’t normally read slash, I entreat you to take a chance on this couple. Why? Quite simply – these are two people who are easy to love.

I asked karenec to share her inspiration for One Summer Night ~ “ I got the idea for the story from a tumblr photo that I reblogged at some point – it is very simple, just two men in tuxes on a city sidewalk, but I thought there was a story there. When Les16′s birthday came around, I thought I’d write some drabbles as a gift. I liked the birthday offering enough to keep going into another two parts.

When I set out write something, I just go whatever pairing fits the story. The guys in the photo look like they could be Emmett and Edward to me, so that was that.” 
 
*Sweet Inspiration!*

*Sweet Inspiration!*

*This story is in three parts, it is entirely prewritten, and karenec plans to post 3 times a week Mon-Wed-Fri.  Given that schedule, it will take about 8 weeks to post, start to finish.*

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Mmmmhhhh!  This is my vision of Summerward and below are three of my all time favourite summer fics.

Summer of Salt by lola-pops 

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Summer of Salt ~ The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick. Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other. Until it’s not.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Angst – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 26 – Words: 88,646 – Reviews: 4,245 – Favs: 4,947 – Follows: 1,869 – Updated: 07-05-10 – Published: 12-18-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5589694

Read this for the carefree days of summer that LoloPops allows you to relive, for the strong Bella, and for a Douchbagward that you will love to hate – even while you love him.  There is no denying the heartache along the way, but it serves to make the ending that much sweeter.

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For the Summer by camoozle

*Made by MisforMarisa*

*Made by MisforMarisa*

For the Summer ~ Every year Bella waits for the ‘Pay Checks’ to roll into her sleepy river town and every year Edward’s hers, just for the summer. AH, AU, OOC, B/E

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 19 – Words: 176,780 – Reviews: 8,640 - Favs: 6,936 – Follows: 3,766 – Updated: 08-19-10 – Published: 04-30-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5934882

Another story that will take you back in such a delightful way to a simpler time, to friendship and first kiss, then all the way to first love and sad goodbyes.  For The Summer is just adorable and unforgettable; it’s full of longing and love – a story definitely not to be missed!

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Summer Nights by Jenny0719

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Summer Nights ~ Bella Swan moves to Chicago with her son and Jacob Black. She then meets Edward Cullen and falls in love. But someone doesn’t want Bella and Edward to be together…

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Angst – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 47 – Words: 234,648 – Reviews: 2,748 – Favs: 2,325 – Follows: 874 – Updated: 04-26-10 – Published: 07-13-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5215869

Oh my!  This Edward is a former naval officer, a surgeon, drop-dead-gorgeous, and for me, the pièce de résistance… an IrishAmericanward!  This story is so much more than a simple romance between Edward and the wonderful woman that is Bella.  I don’t just mean the juicy lemons either – this story has as many twists and turns as the maze at Hogwarts.  Enjoy!

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So, ladies, Edward is waiting for you to take the plunge with him, but first, please dive right into the comments and tell us what you’ve been reading this week.

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Countdown to Summer – Part 1

blinkie2Happy Fanfiction Friday, ladies!!

Since summer is just around the corner, we decided to do a series of posts to celebrate “comfort fics.” You know, we all have a few stories that we’ve read more than once or even twice. Stories that are so familiar, that we can just open them up on any chapter and start reading because we know them so well.

Just as summer is easy and laid back, so is reading a comfort fic. There’s no rush to get to the end. Every word can be savored. Every lemon can be Tasted more than once. Even the angst and UST can be cherished because the reader already knows the outcome.

So, let’s start off a glorious summer by showcasing some of our favorite “go to” stories.

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*Reviews by Cared*

OME, I have to confess my TBR list is as long as the list of women worldwide who are in love with Edward, yet, there are some fics that I’ve read more than once.  Please, don’t judge me when I tell you there are fics I’ve read more than twice, in fact, there are fics I’ve read…err…I’ll leave it at that before I embarrass myself any further.

As I looked though my list of my comfort stories to decide which to share today, something struck me about my choices and consequently about myself.  I must surely be a hopeful romantic as all of my chosen fics have a special Edward and Bella connection – you know the one that makes your toes curl and if I’m being completely honest with you – makes me want to be that Bella.

Stay by Crimsonmarie

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Stay ~ As an actor, Edward Cullen is surrounded by people that he couldn’t really care less about. What happens when he buys a house in the middle of nowhere and meets his new neighbors? AH, AU, ExB, rated M for future chapters and language.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 38 – Words: 276,486 – Reviews: 5,413 - Favs: 7,544 – Follows: 2,756 – Updated: 06-27-09 – Published: 12-30-08 – Status: Complete – id: 4756566

I read Stay in 2009, it was the first of many, many Actorwards for me, and you know what they say about never forgetting your first. *Wink* TBH, even if Stay was the 101st Actorward I read, it would still carry the status of a comfort fic as it ticks all my requisite boxes.

Edward is a famous actor who buys a bolthole in Upstate New York’s Lake George.  Bella is the girl next door…all right…to be precise, she is literally the girl across the road, but she is the girl next door in the metaphorical sense.  Bella and her boyfriend Jake do the neighbourly thing and befriend the new kid in town.

The shy, timid girl with vivid brown eyes and flowing brown hair had been the first to approach me when I’d bought this place. I’d been slightly apprehensive about strange girls just waltzing up the porch steps – it hadn’t been the first time that an over obsessed fan had found out where I lived and tried to get into my good graces – and had hesitated to open the door when she’d knocked. Instead of flinging the door open like I should’ve, I mashed my face against the peephole and eyed her.

She was attractive. At least, as much as the skewed vision of the peephole allowed her to be. She’d had a twelve pack of Heineken gripped tightly in one hand as she nervously stole glances across the street and bit her bottom lip. She didn’t have a purse with her and when I lurched up on my toes to get a better glimpse at the small woman waiting for me to answer the door I was pressed against, I saw that she was barefoot.

The last two things were very important factors to me. They meant that she probably lived close by and although she might’ve been a fan of some sort, she obviously wasn’t going to attack me with a camera or demand an autograph.

Plus, she had beer. And I had nothing but a loaf of bread and a few bottles of water from the Cumberland Farms convenient store down the road in my refrigerator.

So I’d opened the door and she quickly introduced herself as Bella Swan, fumbling over her words as she jerkily handed the beer to me, her face beginning to redden.

I invited her in and she refused, which made me grin like an ass at her as her cheeks positively flamed red.

This was the first woman I’d met in the past year and a half that hadn’t wanted to come inside my home to see what it was like, or if I’d make a move on her, or to see what she could stuff in her pocket while I wasn’t looking to either keep for herself or sell on eBay.

I thanked her for the beer, promising to pay her back. She shook her head, her face even redder – if possible – as she crossed her hands in front of her and shyly looked down at her feet as she made an excuse about a ‘Welcome to the Neighborhood’ gift.

So I ended up thanking her again and she darted off the porch after a stuttered response and possibly some excuse about leaving, almost tripping over her own feet as she ran across the road and disappeared into the cabin across the street.

I’d repaid her in kind a few days later by finding a bottle of red wine in the small and cramped local liquor store and marching my ass over to her place to give it to her.

She was slightly more comfortable when it was me standing on her porch, and had invited me in, her smile bright and open as she moved out of the way so that I could step in.

A man fifteen times bigger than she was was sprawled across the long blue couch in the living room I stepped in to, immediately jumping up to introduce himself as her boyfriend, Jacob Black.

They both insisted that I stay over for dinner and the thought of eating one more peanut butter sandwich as one more meal made it easy to accept their offer.

Bella barbequed out in their large backyard and we sat at a round white picnic table, getting acquainted and laughing over beer and perfectly grilled steak.

Neither of them ever mentioned anything about my career or even knowing who the hell I might’ve been. And when the meal was over, I watched almost gleefully as Bella and Jacob stuck my plates and theirs in the dishwasher, turning it on when it was full.

There had been a few fans that had kept the silverware I’d eaten with, so watching as Bella slammed the dishwasher door and turned the knob to start it was one of the most relieving things that had happened to me in a long while.

And by the end of the night, I was strutting across their yard and back to my own with a mile wide smile on my face.

It had been a very long time since I’d been able to have dinner – or any meal, for that matter – with people that either didn’t know or didn’t care that I was a famous actor. It was glorious.

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At first, the three of them are friends, providing Edward with a rare taste of normality, but that leads to Edward and Bella falling in love, and eventually accepting they have fallen, and fallen fast.  Don’t worry, there is no cheating involved, and tbh, by then Jake was on my shizz list, and I just wanted him out of the picture.  There is the familiar Averagella falls for Famousward, she thinks she is not enough for him, while he thinks he is selfish to drag her into his world, but it’s realistic and not unnecessarily prolonged.  Add in their protective friends and loving, interfering families, crazy-ass employees, some obsessed fans, a douche of an ex, paparazzi and you have a dramatic and entertaining story.  The most important element, the one that speaks to me, is despite Edward and Bella having vastly different lifestyles and living in different states, they both recognise the rarity of true love and are willing to fight for it.  They put their love first and foremost, thereby making Stay a sweet tale of old fashioned romance.  Sigh!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4756566/1/Stay 

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Every Day We Fall In Love by Lalina

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Every Day We Fall In Love ~ We wake up every morning as strangers and go to bed as lovers. A story of the survival of love. Even if the mind forgets, the heart will always remember AH

Rated: Fiction T – English – Romance/Drama – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 2 – Words: 10,281 – Reviews: 176 – Favs: 208 – Follows: 78 – Published: 03-26-12 – Status: Complete – id: 7962078

Every Day We Fall In Love could quite correctly be given in a dictionary as a meaning beside the word Poignant.  This story is unbelievably touching, and what makes it particularly so, is Edward’s irrevocable and unconditional love for his Bella.  If you have seen The Notebook, The Vow or even 50 First Dates, you will have an inkling of the premise of this story.  I don’t want to give too much of the plot away, suffice to say this is a true love story or maybe that should be a story of true love.  Either way, this wonderful one shot showcases Edward’s unwavering love, and a love between two people so powerful that it cannot be forgotten, even when so many other things tragically are…

The sun was shining on my face, warmth spreading along my forehead, nose and cheeks. The color orange was all pervasive, and I decided that sunshine seen through closed lids while I basked in its warmth was my favorite color in the world. A smile flitted along my face for the briefest of seconds before it was replaced with a frown when I realized I couldn’t remember what my favorite color had been before this very moment.

The thought stayed with me as I rolled onto my side, eyes opening slowly against the brilliance in the room. The first thing I saw shocked me to full wakefulness. It was a man. In my bed. Then the next revelation…this wasn’t my bed. It wasn’t even my room. After a quick scan of our surroundings my eyes darted back to the person sharing my personal space, and I was dumbfounded.

The sun was shining on his hair, a shock of bronze. A shade I’d never seen before on any human being. It was thick and lustrous, and tousled. I followed the slope of his brow, down a slim nose, which lead to a mouth that was full yet firm looking. His eyes were closed, lashes the same color as his hair fanned along his upper cheeks, and even as long as his eyelashes were, they weren’t able to mask the slight discoloration underneath. The skin looked fragile, almost dark enough to be mistaken for bruised, but not quite.

Had we been up late last night was my errant thought. And why couldn’t I remember whatever had happened between this stranger and myself?

In fact, why couldn’t I remember anything leading up to this moment? No recollection of getting ready to go out, of meeting with friends for drinks, of dancing. Nothing.

Before a sense of fear could engulf me, his eyes opened. A verdant green, lit up from the rays of the sun shining behind me. A smile touched the corners of his mouth, hesitant, yet there, and those same vibrant eyes roved over my face. He showed no surprise to find me there, looked pleased at my presence. I also noted that he didn’t seem hung over. And then realized, neither did I.

“Good morning, Bella,” he said softly, his voice gravelly from misuse during our hours spent sleeping. “Do you know who I am?”

Lalina, author of Let’s Get Physical among other great fics, is an amazing storyteller.  The proof of that statement is in every one of the 10,000 plus words of Every Day We Fall In Love.  This is one of those stories that stayed with me long after reading it the first time, and has called me back again and again.  I’m not ashamed to tell you I was deeply touched by the emotions this beautiful and bittersweet tale displayed and evoked, and I want you to be also.  Go on – share in my wonderful experience – read Every Day We Fall In Love… today!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7962078/1/Every-Day-We-Fall-In-Love

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The Art Teacher by spanglemaker9

*Made by TallulahBelle*

*Made by TallulahBelle*

The Art Teacher ~ He gave me art and words and passion and life, but all I wanted was him.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 16 – Words: 97,635 – Reviews: 6,962 - Favs: 4,679 – Follows: 3,204 – Updated: 08-01-11 – Published: 11-07-10 – Status: Complete – id: 6460434

While love is strongly evident in my other two story choices above, and love is indeed a major component of this fic, passion is what springs to my mind at the mere mention of this story.  The Art Teacher is quite short being complete at 15 chapters, but it is strongly written by spanglemaker9, the author of The Wedding Party, Dog Star, Faking It and many more fabulous fics. It is so immediately enticing that I step right inside from the first chapter every time.

Down to earth Bella Swan is reincarnated as lonely Isabella Dwyer when she is forced by circumstance to live with her mother and stepfather, and then to attend an elite private school in NYC.  Renee, “…a little nobody from the sticks…” now has a stick up her arse, her nose stuck in the air, with delusions of grandeur to match her lofty expectations for her pawn of a daughter.

Renee enrolls eighteen-year-old Isabella in a ten week Art Appreciation class, purely for the sake of appearance and to further her own selfish ends. From chapter 1 it’s painfully obvious, and honestly, it is actually sad, to see what a failure as a mother, Renee is; it’s quite ironic that Renee’s ploy to fit in with the right people is what ultimately leads Isabella to want to break away from them.  Isabella’s seemingly innocuous first look at her art teacher became a life altering moment…

I feel my face flush just looking at him, and something funny happens in my chest. Jane told me he was hot, but that doesn’t even begin to describe him. He is young; not that much older than us. Actually, he can’t be very far out of college—early twenties. He’s tall and a little bit lanky, but well-built. Nice shoulders. Long legs. He has his head down as he comes in. He’s nearly late and he looks preoccupied and a little distracted. Plus he’s carrying a lot of stuff; books and folders full of paper. At first, all I notice is his body and the hair— thick and almost too long; somewhere between auburn and brown and all messy. Not artfully messy, like the boys I go to school with, every angle carefully and expensively razored. Messy, messy. Like he hasn’t had a haircut in too long and he doesn’t own a brush.

He spends a second setting all his stuff down on the desk and I notice all the girls around me have stopped talking and turned to look at him. The boys are still murmuring, but I can hear the dismissive scoffs starting. They’re jealous already, and they should be. The poser rich boys at Spencer can’t hold a candle to this guy, and it’s obvious. Even with all their money, they can’t touch what he has; this natural magnetism that radiates off his skin.

He finally looks up at us with a polite smile already on his face. I can’t breathe for a second. He’s sort of pale, but it looks good on him. And he’s got these crazy cheekbones. His face would almost be pretty, if not for the strong jawline and his thick eyebrows. His eyes are a tiny bit angled; a little exotic. He is, without a doubt, the most amazing man I’ve ever laid eyes on in real life.

“Are you Mr. Cullen?” Jane is, predictably, the first one to speak. She’s leaning forward on her elbows, and if I could see the front of her, I’m sure I’d see that she’s popped open an additional button on her shirt to show off her cleavage.

His polite smile grows wider and genuine. I catch my breath at how it transforms his face. His eyes crinkle up in the corners and his angular face becomes warm and glowing, almost boyish. He lays a hand across his chest in mock-pain.”Please…” he says. “Not Mr. Cullen. I can’t take it. It’s Edward.”

And I’m undone. By all of it. His voice…low and vibrating at a frequency that I can feel in my fingertips; his artless demeanor; his name…Edward. I don’t want to swoon. I can feel every girl in the room already doing it. But I can’t help it. He’s remarkable and every nerve in my body is reaching out towards him.

There is a low, nervous laugh from the girls in the room in response to his words. I’m silent. I can’t laugh. I can’t move. I curl my fingers around the edge of my desk and press my knees together, unable to do more than stare at him and record every tiny detail.

As Bella analyses her reaction to Art and Life, a book distributed by Edward, she considers, “None of it would have meant much to me at all just an hour ago, but Edward holds the keys to this undiscovered world.”   She has no idea of how true that statement will turn out to be.  Her life, her career, her love, her passion…all unlocked in that moment.

When Edward’s work is displayed in an exhibition a couple of weeks later, he asks Bella of what does his painting make her think“Um,” I take a second to consider my words. “It doesn’t actually make me think anything. It makes me feel.” …and there you have it ladies.  The nub of this story – the beauty of it, if you will – is how this story makes me feel.  Passion and love for art, each other, and life; angst and heartache over the impossibility of the situation, bad decisions and egotistical, self-serving characters; emptiness and happiness – I feel it all every single time I read The Art Teacher.

Read this passionate story and allow spanglemaker9 to reveal what a master artist she is.  Feel her perfect brushstrokes uncover Edward and Bella’s souls while simultaneously covering the canvass to make up the big picture, and remember, don’t just stand back and admire the painting – lose yourself in it!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6460434/1/The-Art-Teacher

Fabulous video of “The Art Teacher” by Rufus Wainwright here

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*Reviews by AllyVera*

Living in the Southern Hemisphere gives me a different view on our re-read stories.  As the weather here is getting colder, it is the perfect time to snuggle up with one of my most loved stories.

If We Ever Meet Again by pattyrose

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If We Ever Meet Again ~ High School for geeky Edward was a nightmare of mistakes, missed opportunities & insecurity issues. Six years later when fate hands him a second chance, will he know how to take it? Or will the insecure boy inside rear his head again? AH, E&B, Canon pairs

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Angst – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 29 – Words: 164,048 – Reviews: 3,297 – Favs: 3,078 – Follows: 1,790 – Updated: 07-10-12 – Published: 04-20-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6922461

I am not ashamed to admit I don’t actually know how many times I have read “If We Ever Meet Again” but it’s a lot… but if I was going to take a stab at the number I reckon it’s around six. Let me explain why this one is so special to me…

First of all, it’s written by pattyrose, and I adore all of her stories, but this one is my personal favourite (although “The Cullen Legacy” is giving it a run for it’s money!).  Secondly, I love how Edward is not perfect (looks-wise) when we meet him and that Bella sees past that and into his soul.  Thirdly… unrequited love.. who doesn’t love a bit of that? 

We meet a very insecure, but oh-so smart and talented Edward in high school.  High school for Edward is torture, being a social pariah – but along comes the lovely Bella who sees him.  Unfortunately, even though it is quite clear to us (the readers) that Bella is as keen on Edward as he is on her, he doesn’t see it and he runs away leaving Forks and Bella behind.

Six and a half years later, neither has forgotten the other – but their lives have changed dramatically. Gone is the awkward teenage boy, Edward has transformed into a stunningly gorgeous businessman who has a bit of a reputation for being an asshole – but never fear readers the asshole has never forgotten the “pretty girl with the long brown hair”.

Here is Edward when he first comes across Bella, all those years later…

“”…sorry to waste…won’t take up…see myself out…”

My heart stopped. All the air left my lungs in one breath.

That voice.

I’d recognize that voice anywhere.

Through the thickest doors.

Under water.

Through the loudest cacophony of blaring music and drunk voices.

Bella Swan.

I froze. Just like the last time I’d seen her, or heard her melodic voice, over six years ago. I couldn’t move one muscle, even as I heard the door to my office open, and the sound of Victoria sharply directing her how to get out of the building, and – oh Jesus – there went her voice again, once more thanking Victoria for her time.

Bella.”

If We Ever Meet again is told entirely in EPOV (apart from a couple of BPOV outtakes at the end). However, even though this story is really Edward’s you fall in love with Bella too.  (Mind you, I think this is commonplace for a pattyrose story, she really does “do” Bella so well!)

These two have a few obstacles to navigate, sadness to overcome, and their true selves to discover – but when it all finally comes together … *sigh* it is so beautiful. A little piece of pattyrose magic!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6922461/1/If-We-Ever-Meet-Again

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Realize by Goo82

Realize by Goo82

Realize by Goo82

Realize ~ Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella’s feeling for Edward have changed, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him…

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Friendship – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 21 – Words: 101,506 – Reviews: 5,306 – Favs: 7,323 – Follows: 2,020 – Updated: 02-19-09 – Published: 07-05-08 – Status: Complete – id: 4372344

It isn’t a coincidence that both Cared and I have Actorwards on our re-read list, seeing as they are one of our favourite ‘Wards. When done well, they are SO good!

Realize is probably an unusual choice for a re-read, not because it is an Actorward, but because Goo82 rips your heart out and stomps on it – yes, my lovelies – this story is tagged as romance/friendship, but it should be categorized angst.

Bella is in love with her best friend, up-and-coming actor Edward. They have known each other forever, but Edward is oblivious to Bella’s romantic feelings for him, and therein lies the problem.

As you can surmise, things come to a head after a very big clusterfuck of epic proportions takes place – and coincidentally is also around the time your heart is in serious danger of those stomping boots!

One of the things I admire most about this story is how Bella deals with the fallout. She doesn’t hide under a rock, or drink herself into a stupor (which is what I would probably do if I lost Edward, let’s be honest.. LOL) but she becomes a better person – her own person.

A little glimpse of B x E’s relationship from Chapter One…

““We had been through everything in our lives up until now together. Through the death of our grandparents, to school and dances. We shared every detail of our lives with each other and we were the only ones who truly knew the other one inside and out.

He watched me go on many dates that left me without anyone that interested me. He would tell me, “Don’t worry Bella, your prince charming is out there. Just you wait and see.”

Too bad I had already found that man. Unfortunately, Edward was wrong because this man didn’t notice I was alive.

Well, not true. He knew I was alive, alright. I just happened to be alive in his eyes as his dorky, best friend/personal assistant.””

You know that old saying “Only the one that hurts you can take away the pain?” Well, no truer words were spoken, particularly when it relates to this story, and I can guarantee you will be smiling by the end!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4372344/1/Realize

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Hit by Destiny by ocdmess

Hit by Destiny by ocdmess

Hit by Destiny by ocdmess

Hit by Destiny ~ Bella wants to die, and almost gets her wish fulfilled when she gets hit by a shiny Volvo. She is left with serious injuries, and the only thing keeping her from dying is the person who hit her. All Human, Rated M for language, dark themes & violence.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Angst/Hurt/Comfort – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 59 – Words: 463,685 – Reviews: 19,537 – Favs: 10,641 – Follows: 6,681 – Updated: 11-29-12 – Published: 10-24-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5463682

I mentioned earlier that Actorward is one of my favourite genres – but my favourite genre of all?  Redemptionward!

Quite possibly the best Redemptionward story is Hit by Destiny.  This story had me very concerned as for quite a while I believed it just wasn’t possible for HbD’s Edward to be redeemed.  He is without a doubt the King of the Jerks.

You are probably wondering now  – “WTH Ally? Why would you re-read this story?” – well the answer is simple, dear readers, because the complete one-eighty this Edward makes is nothing short of miraculous.  He changes his life, but he also saves Bella’s life too – all by hitting her with his car!

One of the other reasons I hold HbD in such high regard is it’s unique premise – the plot is honestly like nothing I would have ever imagined in even my strangest dreams.  When we meet Bella we have no idea of the horrors she has had to endure, and when her whole story comes to light, you can’t help but sympathise with her – she really has been given the crappy end of the stick.  A pyscho mother, an emotionally absent father and quite frankly disturbing Jacob and Billy.

On top of all that Bella is an outcast at her school, cruelly taunted and treated badly, but her treatment at the hands of Edward will make you cringe…

From chapter 10 (BPOV)

“”I’m… I’m sorry,” I stuttered, “I was lost in thought.”

He stood up, groaning as he looked down at the mud caking on his clothes. He tried to dust it off with his hands, but instead he ended up smearing it even more. He clenched his fists, and his breathing was deep and labored, like he was fighting some inner demon. Then ever so slowly, he turned his glare down at me. He was even more terrifying while standing up, since he was now towering over me like a giant – even if he was only a head taller than me. His emerald eyes were shooting fire and I felt my breath hitch. His eyes are beautiful.

“Yeah, obviously,” he spat. “Were you musing over how pathetic you are? And how tragic it is that you have no fucking friends and that a guy would never even touch you with a fucking stick? And that you will most likely die a painful death… alone?”

“Ed, c’mon… it’s not like she meant to push you,” Emmett said, trying to calm his brother down.

“Are you fucking kidding me? These jeans were brand fucking new!” Edward yelled, infuriated.

“I’m sorry! I’ll pay for the dry cleaning, I swear!” I said quickly, feeling my throat close up.

Please, no tears in front of Edward. Please. Please. Please.

“Dry cleaning?” he snorted. “No dry cleaning in the world could get this shit out from these pants. And like you could ever afford it anyway,” he shook his head. “These pants are worth ten times more than what your car was worth when it was new!”

“C’mon, Ed,” Emmett sighed and gave Edward a tired look.

But Edward didn’t listen; instead he took a step towards me, now standing so close that I could feel his hot breath in my face. It smelled like a mixture of smoke, mint and… something simply mouthwatering. Not the time, Bella, so not the time for this…

“You’re fucking dead, Goose,” he hissed at me. “I will kill you. Trust me when I fucking say that I will destroy every little part of your pathetic little existence.””

Oh dear – he spoke too soon.  Little does he know, but in a few short hours he very nearly keeps his promise. Then so begins the story of Edward and his Sparrow.

Hit by Destiny is one of the most difficult stories to read, but one of the most worthwhile.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5463682/1/Hit-By-Destiny

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I will confess to being a prolific re-reader of stories.  Sometimes after one of *those* days (you know the ones..  we all have them) all I want is something much loved and familiar like slipping into that favourite much loved piece of clothing (Stolli shirt anyone?).  I just wanted to share a couple more of my faves with you that I (or one of the other FicSix ladies) have previously reviewed on FFF ~ AV (here goes – in no particular order…)

Unplanned Perfection by littlecat358 ~ previous rec here

Last Tango in Forks by AwesomeSauce76 ~ previous rec here

Perfectly Imperfect by lindsay520 ~ previous rec here

Bella Swan: Kidnapper by Kambria Rain ~ previous rec here

Proud: Fictionista Witfit Prompts Winter 2011:2012 by jennde ~ previous rec here

Ride by Kris Salvador ~ previous rec here

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Come on now ladies, we cannot be the only ones who read their favourite fics more than once.  It’s confession time, we are in no position to judge, so please spill your secrets in the comments.

The FicSix

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MISSION MILITARYWARD

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*The FicSix staring at banner … swooning … drooling …

Well, hello there, soldier, we salute you!*

Welcome to Mission Militaryward on Fan Fiction Fridays, sorry, we’re a little distracted by Edward in a uniform … well, Rob, too, because today’s post is in celebration of Rob’s exciting, upcoming role in Mission Blacklist. Can you tell we’re a wee bit excited? Hell yes, we are! And, we’re so excited that today we have reviewed for you some of our favourite Militarywards featuring the Navy, Army, and more, starting from pre WWII right up to present day service! 

Also, we’d like to take a moment to honour and thank all the brave men and women who serve our countries and risk their lives to protect our freedom and keep us safe! God speed!

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*Reviews by Cared*

This FanFiction Friday I have three wonderful stories all set to the backdrop of World War 2. Each of these talented authors have penned tales that are not only extremely entertaining to read, but interestingly informative as history seeps effortlessly from the pages. I salute solostintwilight, Camilla10 and Jennde, for it’s obvious they undertook an amazing amount of historical research to produce such an authentic feel for that tumultuous time, and seamlessly blended it into heartfelt love stories featuring our favourite characters. There is something bittersweet about seeing the seed of love shoot up from such harsh ground and then blossom against the odds.

Letters to Corporal Masen by solostintwilight

*Made by Penelope Griva featuring manip by Mina Rivera*

*Made by Penelope Griva featuring manip by Mina Rivera*

Letters of Corporal Masen ~ Writing to offer a bit of home to a soldier overseas, she discovers words can bind a friendship. Lonely in war torn Europe, he finds hope in letters from a stranger. What happens when the war is over?

Rated:Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 37 – Words: 89,350 – Reviews: 6,485 – Favs: 1,782 – Follows: 1,517 – Updated: 11-11-12 – Published: 08-26-12 – Status: Complete – id: 8467119

I was compelled to include this romantic story, although I doubt there are many left in the fandom who haven’t read it. So, to the handful of ladies who have not yet had the pleasure of meeting Corporal Masen – this is for you.

I couldn’t help but smile and sigh happily as I pondered how much to share about this gorgeously written and entirely captivating story. Not much at all is best I think; this seemingly simple yet intertwined plot is best revealed chapter by delicious chapter.

So, what’s it all about?

Bella undertakes writing to a soldier to boost his morale and in the words of solostintwilight,… “A patriotic gesture to offer a bit of support from home turns into a search for something more. A lonely solider discovers something worth fighting for in the words of a stranger.” Do I even need to tell you the soldier in question is one Corporal Edward Masen?

Edward’s first response…

LETTER TO CORP.MASEN

Their relationship develops through correspondence alone but their love is no less real for it. Bella finds a purpose; Edward finds a reason to fight to survive.  The bond they forge is so strong that although they have never met in person, they have belief in each other and in their love. You know the expression: true loves never runs smooth, well, this is never truer than when facing the vagrancies of war, and for Edward and Bella, giving up on one another is not an option, and in the end…read it to find out.

Oh, and one more thing. There are no lemons in this beautiful love story and the amazing thing is, I didn’t notice their absence at all and neither will you.

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*Made by daisy3853*

*Made by daisy3853*

Finding Home ~ Edward & Bella are lifelong friends. At 18, just as their true feelings for each other are coming to fruition, tragedy strikes and the US is thrust into World War II. Will Edward and Bella’s love be enough to see them through a world war? Rated M, OOC.

This is a continuation of the Age of Edward one-shot, Infamy.

Rated:Fiction M – English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 28 – Words: 183,043 – Reviews: 2,850 – Favs: 1,758 – Follows: 949 – Updated: 08-16-10 – Published: 07-30-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5262540

Finding Home is a beautifully written tale of life-long friends becoming more. Their bliss is short-lived as their lives are immediately turned upside down by the consequences of Pearl Harbor. Suddenly, their neat, prospective future lies in ruins.  Edward enlists in the Navy and proposes to Bella, thus setting an unchartered and choppy course for the pair…

“Bella, the Navy lost a lot of men today, and they need to be replaced. My training will be fast-tracked, and I’ll be ready in six weeks. It won’t be a full education, but I can always go back after the war.” He moved his eyes from mine, and almost whispered, “I leave tomorrow.”

It took me a minute to process his words, and when I did, I shook my head and tried to pull away from him as my tears become full on sobs.

He pulled me back to him, enveloping me in his arms as he spoke softly but fiercely into my ear. “No, Bella. You listen to me. I love you. We will get through this. I need you to believe that; I need you to believe in me. Please. I can’t do this without you.”

When my sobs died down, he pulled away from me, but only enough to take my face in both of his hands. “After the six weeks, I’ll get 5 days leave. I’m sure my mother can put together a wedding in six weeks. Please say you’ll marry me, Bella. I need to know I have you waiting for me. We can get married here at the house, or on the beach; whatever you want.”

This story contains it all: there is drama and romance, there is love and loss; there is also fear of failure – oh, and there is a war that needs to be lived through. Life for a serving officer and the ‘little woman’ left at home is not sugar-coated and neither is the relationship. For me, the strength of this story is their struggle, their personal battle for the survival of their relationship against the odds in a war torn world. Bella had to develop into a strong and independent woman in order to survive. While I really admire her for that, a returning Edward has problems adjusting to the person his wife has become, as he also suffers from his own personal trauma.

Finding Home deals with the gritty reality of living in and subsequently returning from war, but don’t doubt how hopeful and hot this fic is too. Yes, I said hot! Sex was not invented in the 60’s – think of the film “Pearl Harbor” ladies. ‘Nuff said!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5262540/1/Finding_Home

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The Parachutist by Camilla10

*Made by Federico*

*Made by Federico*

The Parachutist ~ It is 1943 and WW II is devastating Europe. Edward Masen is a 23 years old American parachutist sent by the OSS on a secret mission, meant to help the partisans fighting the Nazis in Northern Italy. There he meets a girl concealing a terrible secret. They fall passionately in love and plan to marry as soon as Italy is liberated. However, while going back to the Allied lines and trying to reach Anzio, where the Anglo American forces are struggling to break through Germans’ opposition, Edward finds his nemesis, in the form of two Volturi warriors.

Edward becomes a newborn vampire, fierce, desperate and bloodthirsty. Will he succumb forever to his inner monster or will he be able to recover at least some of his lost humanity? Will he see his love again and resist the urge to kill her?

Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe  Characters: Edward  Genre: Supernatural Language: English Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes  Word count: 65856  Read Count: 5722

Now, after reading that summary, with such an extensive overview of the plot, I don’t want to give much more away. I will, though, say this fic is unique and that is no lie. Camilla10 says about Edward…“I am trying to keep him in canon, despite the very different circumstances; he is his usual guilt ridden self, chaste and pensive. And he has a latent mind reading gift. But, how funny, he has a problem with spilling blood. This might change, unfortunately.”

Yes, Edward is canon, this story has romance and adventure just as Twilight does, the situation seems impossible for our young lovers, but the backdrop of war, witnessing the change for Edward from human to vampire, Bella being the one who harbours a secret, all make this story something different. The author, a native Italian, shares and uses memories of the period from her own relatives, she married a son of a Resistance heroine, and those personal touches add greatly to this fast paced and moving story.

Edward and Isetta getting to know one another…

Isetta is curious, and so I tell her more about America, about the different characteristics of the different States, such as cheese making in Wisconsin and the wineries in California. As I speak she looks enchanted. I am also enchanted. She is more than pretty, she is subtly beautiful, with dark tresses, a heart shaped face and the deep brown eyes of a doe. She is funny, and she is also puzzling. I sense a mystery about her, and would like to know her better.

I’m not surprised The Parachutist won second place in the Shimmer Awards 2011 as Outstanding Story. For me the moments of tenderness shining bright amid the horror make it a worthy winner.


http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=5003


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5732101/1/The-Parachutist

Upon completion of The Parachutist you won’t want to let go of this lovely couple on the cusp of their new adventure, so don’t. Follow them in the sequel, The Parachutist 2 Our New World.

ONW

It is the summer of 1945 and the war in Europe has ended. Despite his transformation in a vampire, Edward has found his love again, has prevailed over his bloodlust and they have married. Now he is going back to America with his human bride, where they’ll join Carlisle’s family. How will be their life with the Cullens, when will it be the right moment for Bella’s transformation? Will the Volturi discover them, will they face new dangers?


http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=5677


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7219449/1/Parachutist-2-Our-New-World

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And now for something completely different…

Mud, Sweat, and Beers by SparrowNotes24

*Made by GossipLips*

*Made by GossipLips*

Mud, Sweat, and Beers ~ Boot camp in the freezing winter sounds like hell on earth, but is there anything that would make it bearable? Bring on the sexy soldiers! A little bit of fun, a smidgen of angst, and a whole bucket load of muddy lovin’. All Human.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 25 – Words: 102,926 – Reviews: 1,226 - Favs: 794 – Follows:  1,362 – Updated: 05-06-13 - Published: 09-10-12 – id: 8515332

Mud, Sweat, and Beers is not a Militaryward fic in the strict sense of the word, but it’s close enough and such fun, that I had to sneak it in.

Bella and Rosalie are American exchange students attending an English university for a year.  They are obviously intelligent girls as they are studying Criminology & Psychology; it appears they are loyal and have other admirable qualities, all good things, but what struck me from chapter one, these are girls I’d love to have hung out with in my youth. *Cue a chorus of Girls Just Want To Have Fun sung loudly in my best Cyndi Lauper voice.*

Another admirable, enviable, and indeed most important quality these girls possess is that they can spot a hot soldier from 50 paces.  That’s no mean feat to be sniffed at ladies. Agreed? And so “Operation Sex-me-up, Soldiers” is born.  Commander Hale plans the operation with military precision: she requisitions the necessary gear (think high heels and short skirts), takes no prisoners, and the rather reluctant recruit Swan is press-ganged into service. Alice needs no encouragement to sign up as she also has a certain man in uniform fixed within her sights and plans some strategic moves of her own. I should add it’s time for the hilarious antics, witty banter, risqué innuendo, and smexy times to commence too.

Edward is enigmatic, intelligent, manly, and HOT – yes that is with a capital H, a capital O and a capital T! Smugward wants to put Bella through her paces, although Bella is undeniably drawn to him, he comes across to her as cocky, and so initially she is determined not to become just a notch on his belt. The resultant UST reaches Code Red levels. Hehe, the poor girl shows great resistance but is soon recruited by her traitorous body into the “Cullen Crotch Appreciation Society”.

*Made by GossipLips*

*Made by GossipLips*

You know how in Twilight and in fanfic it’s all swoony when chivalrous Edward offers Bella his jacket, she inhales and it’s all so perfect. SparrowNotes24 certainly puts a unique stamp on that oh so magic of moments…

Cullen stood up and pulled his waterproof jacket off. “Here, take this.”

“I’m okay. Honestly, I’m not cold.”

“Take it. I can see you shaking.”

“I’m not shaking ’cause I’m cold, I’m just …”

“Just put the damn jacket on will you. Jesus H you’re so stubborn.” He shoved it into my hands. “I’m not being responsible for someone catching pneumonia as well as a broken wrist.”

A frown formed between my eyes in response to his comment, as I pulled his jacket over my head. I’d like to say that as I put it on, his intoxicating scent surrounded me, a delicious mix of wood smoke and spices that exuded his masculinity. But it didn’t. It smelled like crap: a combination of sweat, grass and damp clothes. I wrinkled my nose in distaste.

He chuckled. “You can blame Emmett for that. He was on washing duty and left all our kits drying in a heap on the floor.”

See why I’m enjoying this fic so much?  Now while it’s true there is much humour and lightness, as the relationships develop and the characters are revealed to us and to each other, the tenor of the story deepens. Some things don’t change but romance and love, low-level angst stemming from demons from the past, and fear of an uncertain future, are all skillfully blended into the mix. Love is the most powerful ingredient and as the lovely Bella says to Edward, We’ve just been given a few obstacles to get over first. Like one of your boot camps.”

*Made by GossipLips*

*Made by GossipLips*

The nick-name of Muddy Smugward is self explanatory, but I call him Dirtytalkingward for a different reason. *wink*

This highly amusing story is currently at 28 entertaining chapters with an expected 1 or 2 more plus epi to go. Take my advice and join up for the remainder of the term.

 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8515332/1/Mud-Sweat-Beers

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*Reviews by Midnight Cougar*

It is with the utmost respect that today I review for you two Militaryward fics that have touched my heart and I have faith you will thoroughly enjoy. Both of these compelling stories depict a strong and courageous Armyward and the many facets of military life that have an effect both on the soldiers and their families. ❤

Tip of the Spear by Robsmyyummy Cabanaboy

*Made by CaraNo*

*Made by CaraNo*

Tip of the Spear ~ The “tip of the spear” – in the military, they are the front line; the initial attack that draws first blood. As a CACO in the United States Marine Corps, Capt. Masen delivers that leading blow, too. He’s often faced with handling the collateral damage this life can bring. He’s accepted that love & commitment aren’t for him…until she opens the door.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 15 – Words: 93,219 – Reviews: 2,446 - Favs: 1,086 – Follows: 1,787 – Updated: 05-01-13 – Published: 11-05-12 – id: 8677928

Before I start my review, I’d like to ask you to please take a moment and reread the summary because it’s the crux of this story, and where the author explains the importance and significance of the title, as this is a true Militaryward fic.

Tip of the Spear begins with a Prologue exhibiting the sad reality of Edward’s job as twenty-eight-year-old Captain Edward Masen, a CACO – Casualty Assistance Calls Officer – in the United States Marine Corps, where he visits a young wife, Mrs. Matthews, to tell her that her husband was killed in the line of duty. I’m not going to lie, it was very emotional to read, and I cried, but you can really feel this Edward; his emotions, his caring, his compassion for these people in which he is sharing such sorrow. And then in chapter two, when that woman, sadly, becomes a pregnant Bella Newton … I cried again …

Twenty minutes after arriving at Isabella Newton’s door and telling her that her husband won’t be coming home again, her two friends, the Whitlocks, arrived to comfort and support her through the shock while Chaplain Gillen and I remained to answer questions and help her through the first of many steps facing her over the next couple of months.

We learn that Bella drifts through the funeral of her late husband, Sgt. Michael Newton, but the loss and stress is too great, and she loses her baby boy. Life goes on for both Bella and Edward, and then the story jumps ahead, “One year. Two years. Three years later.” … to where we see Bella getting ready to go on the adventure of a lifetime. A trip to Hawaii that she was supposed to share with her late husband, but is now going to brave alone. And as she boards the military plane, that is when she again meets Captain Masen, who is on a well-deserved vacation of his own, and the rest, as they say, is history.

They reconnect as friends and end up going on this exhilarating journey together. Their adventures know no bounds, but I will let you read them for yourselves, because I could not do justice to them in a review. Robsmyyummy Cabanaboy presents the settings so well; she gives us the most excellent, vivid descriptions, so it’s like you are there with Adventurella and Spearward, enjoying their Hawaiian explorations. But, don’t forget, this is labeled Romance, and there might just be some of that hot, lemony goodness, too. *wink*

I’d also like to mention that, even though I know today’s post is focused on Militaryward, and this story is definitely that, for me, it is also, one of the few fics I’ve read where I can honestly say I have a Bella girl-crush. Bella, in this story, personifies, IMHO, what a woman who has literally lost everything can overcome and become, regardless of how much has happened in her life. She’s really an inspirational Bella … on so many levels, and I know she’s going to be very memorable for me. She’s a very strong-willed and spirited Bella, who, through her huge heart and adventurous spirit, shows Edward life when all he’s seen for years is death …

Excerpt from chapter 14:

I lift our hands and bring his palm to my lips. “I can. You said it yourself the other night. You’re a changed man, Cap’n.”

We’re silent for a moment.

“That I am. I meant what I said earlier; this place has been like a revival for me. Hell, I’ve been changing slowly but surely since that close encounter with your backpack on the tarmac in California. Aside from a bloody nose, you’ve ended up giving me more of a jumpstart to my heart.”

I smile, feeling my eyes get watery. “I’ve just tried to open your eyes a bit.” I squeeze his hand. “Your amazing heart was pumping long before I walked down that aisle on the plane, Edward.”

“Maybe,” he pauses, “…but now there’s a rhythm and a beat— a soundtrack with your name that plays on a loop.”

A tear falls over the bridge of my nose and I try to sniff quietly, but apparently loud enough that it alarms him and he leans over to look at my face.

“Hey,” he speaks gently and rolls me toward his body. Swiping his thumb across the tear stain, he shakes his head. “No tears, Clementine.”

I nod and swallow, my eyes brimming with more after hearing his comforting voice.

“We still have Maui and then Oahu again.” He raises his eyebrows, asking that I acknowledge his well-made point. “Lots more opportunities for making memories, just like you said. That’s what this trip is about; no regrets, right?”

I shake my head, freeing a few more tears. “Not a single one.”

He leans down and kisses me chastely. It lingers for a few seconds, and then he gives me another soft peck. His gaze is locked on mine as our eyes fill in the blanks for everything we haven’t had the courage to say yet. With confidence and sincerity he ensures, “We’ll figure it out.”

*sigh* Yeah, I love these two … their connection also knows no bounds.

Tip of the Spear is a compelling read right from the Prologue; it immediately pulls at your heart-strings but then, through the journey of the beautifully presented characters of Adventurella and Spearward, it exemplifies hope, healing and love all within an exciting storyline. And because it’s told from both EPOV and BPOV we get to experience it all from two very different and unique perspectives, and this just makes it all the better! Please enjoy this beautiful Militaryward WIP that updates regularly; I just adore the feeling of peace and love this story portrays!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8677928/1/Tip-of-the-Spear

For teasers, story visuals, and more: The Cabanaboy’s Playground  ~ you have to see all the lovely and inspiring photos that accompany the story.

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Departures by TheFicChick

*Made by Fallingsnow Winter*

*Made by Fallingsnow Winter*

Departures by TheFicChick ~ ”Every day for the rest of my life, I will wonder how kissing a virtual stranger goodbye could have felt like a hello.”

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 10 – Words: 95,090 -Reviews: 3,807 - Favs: 3,473 – Follows: 2,901 Reviews: 3,826 - Favs: 3,494 – Follows: 2,906 - Updated: 01-04-13 – Published: 10-20-12 – Status: Complete – id: 8625604

Some of you may have already read this short 10 chapter Armyward that started out as a one shot, but if not, then it’s a must read Military fic. Seriously, this beautiful, heart-warming love story that begins in O’Hare Airport in Chicago, goes far beyond its boundaries of the tarmac as it transcends time and space to make you believe in the true power of love between two virtual strangers.

When I read each chapter, I was either smiling big, literally laughing out loud, or crying, because I was so emotionally invested in the story and its wonderful, main characters of a strong and brave Edward, our Armyward, and an adventurous, loving Bella. They share such a fun and sweet airport adventure as they get to know each other, and then an intense and telling correspondence when he is away in Afghanistan; all the makings of a fabulous love story to make you swoon!

Here’s a taste of the wonderful writing and sensual connection shared by our beloved Militaryward and his Bella …

Despite the banter and the innuendo-laden conversation and the pancakes, Edward Cullen is a stranger in an airport. We’re not sharing anything more than an unexpected layover before we fly in opposite directions; once the snow stops and the travel starts, I’ll never see him again. The thought is physically painful.

“Listen, Bella.” He turns to face me, shifting his weight in one fluid motion to the shoulder still resting against the wall, and his face is as serious as I’ve seen it since he was recounting his decision to join the Army. “If this were any other day, and if I weren’t flying off to fiddle with bombs in the middle of the desert, I’d ask for your number.”

I attempt to swallow against the lump that lodges itself firmly in my throat. “If you weren’t flying off to fiddle with bombs in the middle of the desert, I’d give it to you.” My voice is barely more than a whisper.

Green eyes are pulling me in, and it takes all of the self-control I possess not to touch him. He watches me intently, and after a minute I see his throat muscles bob with a swallow. “If you gave it to me, I’d call. The same day. I wouldn’t even try to do the whole ‘play-it-cool-give-it-a-few-days’ thing.”

“I’ve always hated that game,” I breathe.

“I’d take you out for Italian. There’s a great little mom-and-pop restaurant near the house I grew up in that has the best ravioli on the planet.” My heart aches, then begins to race as his large hand cups my cheek. “It would be really hard for me to say goodnight without kissing you.” His thumb runs along my jawline.

“I’m not averse to kissing on the first date,” I confess, and his eyes blaze.

“If I’m misreading this, stop me now,” he breathes, and I can’t see the green of his eyes anymore because they are hidden behind the long lashes sweeping against his cheekbones as he gazes at my mouth. I stay silent in unspoken permission, and after a beat, his warm mouth covers mine. I can taste the remnants of strawberry on his lips, which are warm and inquisitive and insistent. His hand slides from my jaw to the back of my neck as his other one joins it, and I bring my own hands to the back of his neck, his short hair sliding through my fingers. He angles his head to deepen the kiss, and I rise to my tiptoes as he pulls us upright, abandoning the support of the wall. I feel his mouth open against mine, and his tongue whispers a trace against my lower lip; as I open my mouth in response, a small whimper escapes me. He meets my tongue with his, and instantly I feel heat like a wild elevator climbing and plummeting through my body. His breath hitches into my mouth, and what was gentle suddenly becomes demanding, his mouth moving smoothly over mine, lips and tongues dancing together.

His hands move from the back of my head down to my lower back, and he bands his arms around me, groaning softly into the kiss as he pulls me flush against his body. I think I whimper in response, and he deepens the kiss further, his tongue exploring the warm cavern of my mouth. I lose track of time as we stand there, shamelessly making out in an airport terminal, and it isn’t until he slows the pace of the kiss, his tongue receding to gently trace my lower lip before retreating altogether, placing a borderline chaste kiss to my mouth, that I regain my bearings.

So lovely and romantic, and such a divine flow to the words; one of the true pleasures of reading TheFicChick!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8625604/1/Departures

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*Reviews by WiltshireGlo*

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OPERATION: Break the Dawn by katinki 

OPERATION: Break the Dawn ~ An experimental weapon, one of the most lethal chemicals ever created, has been stolen. It’s final destination is unknown, but there’s no doubt the powerful faction behind the theft is intent on one thing: War. But they didn’t count on a fight. A team of Marines, led by Capt. Edward Cullen and accompanied by Dr. Isabella Swan, isn’t about to let the world go up in flames. AH.

Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M – English – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 7 – Words: 40,359 – Reviews: 1,032 – Favs: 803 – Follows: 1,203 – Updated: 03-07-13 – Published: 08-06-12 – id: 8399608 WiP.

Oh good Lord! Captain Edward Cullen is just so commanding, mesmerising, strong and stoic. You really believe he’s going to save the world. Really. Really. This is gritty, dirty, the imagery sends you to hot, sandy, uncomfortable places, but it’s also intriguing and leaves you desperate for more.

Katinki has captured the sense of fear that Bella must have, as a scientist more used to working in a lab accompanying experienced and stoic Marines; some situations they encounter are terrifying. She also conveys the Marines’ admiration for Bella’s bravery, and their kindness when she is understandably overwhelmed. The whole story is infused with humour and the banter that you’d expect from a close-knit team – a team hand-picked to do the jobs that no one else can. It is, of course, made up of our favourite characters and they suit their roles beautifully. They clearly see Bella as a liability and their initial interaction is filled with frustration.

Edward’s fists balled inside his pockets. Like he’d repeatedly told both the General and those idiots at the CIA, regardless of her expertise, Dr. Isabella Swan had no business whatsoever on this plane or in those cammies. No matter how good she looked in them.

“Alright,” Emmett started again as he plopped back down in the bright blue seat beside her. Twisting halfway around, he blindly dug through one of the boxes behind them, grabbed two bottles of water, and tossed one of them to their scientist. “Rule number one. You don’t ever go outside that Humvee without your plates and your helmet. Got that?” He didn’t wait for her to answer and his instructions came out more like a series of barked orders. “You only take that shit off if one of us tells you you can. Clear?”

The woman’s face scrunched into a comically sour expression.

“Rule number two. You don’t go anywhere unless one of us tells you you can. Not even to piss.”

The hard, straight line of Edward’s lips broke when Bella huffed. “Yeah, got that one already. No unsupervised pissing.”

Emmett shook his head before cracking open his own water bottle and throwing back half the contents in a single chug. “Look, the main thing is just stay behind one of us at all times and do what we tell you to do. If we take a knee, you take a knee. If we drop and crawl, you drop and crawl. If we tell you to stay put, stay fucking put. If we tell you –”

Bella cut him off with a sharp, “I got it. Trust me,” and this time Edward had to school his mouth shut to keep from laughing at the hot spark of her irritation. Maybe not a lamb, he corrected. A pissed off kitten was more like it.

Across the deck, leaning against the opposite bulkhead with her arms crossed over her chest, Rosalie glared and mouthed, “This is fucking stupid.”

The slight incline of Edward’s head was the only indication that he agreed.

“Jazz,” Emmett barked, standing and flicking his bottle cap at the corporal dozing across the aisle. “Go over the gear with her, will ya? I need to talk to the Captain.” Instantly alert, the younger man nodded once before hopping over to take Emmett’s seat.

“Okay, Doc,” Jasper said, not wasting any time, as he quickly burrowed through her pack to locate an item Edward hoped none of them would need to wear. “Gas mask. You ever wore one?”

I must admit, I barely breathe through some chapters! I’m gripped by the action, the tension, the oh-bloody-hell moments! But throughout it all, I’m constantly aware of Edward looking out for Bella, ever watchful, always protecting. Their connection is palpable even though he’s a man of few words…it’s probably worth mentioning that he’s swoonworthy…did I mention commanding? Oh boy, is he commanding!

Katinki really strikes the balance well, the story of the building trust, the common goal, the sense of purpose all made more real, believable, by the research she’s done, the details she’s included. It’s fiction, but grounded in the reality of war.

At seven chapters in, I know there’s plenty more to enjoy.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8399608/1/OPERATION-Break-the-Dawn

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Orange Kisses and Peppermint Hearts by SparrowNotes24

*Made by Cared*

*Made by Cared*

Orange Kisses and Peppermint Hearts ~ He is gone, leaving her with the bitter sense of absence and the sweet taste of his name on her tongue. Then, a mysterious letter arrives, bursting with the flavors of a love story. Will the words that grace the page change the course of her life?

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance – Chapters: 1 – Words: 10,303 – Reviews: 147 – Published: 3-4-13 – Bella & Edward – Complete – One shot.

Ohhhh…this is a story that fills the air with romance, whimsy, nostalgia – and hope. Honestly, when you read it you’ll be sighing like a lovestruck starlet, reaching for your prettiest frock and swooning over the love of a man and the lengths he’ll go to show his wife he loves her. *sigh*

SparrowNotes24 has written such a beautiful, original piece – Bella is a chocolatier specialising in only the best, with a friendly attitude and creative flair. Together with her assistant, Rose, she creates a rather magical atmosphere in her shop, Cocoa Swan…when one day Bella receives the first of a series of letters requesting her help.

“This just came in for you.” She smiled and then left, the door swinging behind her. I could hear her crooning along to the song on the radio; her breathy voice was wonderful to listen to.

I brushed my hands off on my apron before quickly sliding my fingers under the edge of the envelope and ripping it open. My hopes were dashed when I saw it was just an order, handwritten in neat looping cursive.

Dear Cocoa Swan,

I hope you can help me organize the perfect anniversary gift for my wife.

I’d like a selection of chocolates that reflect all the things that made me fall madly and deeply in love with her. I have to admit that I’m no chocolate connoisseur, but she is, and she always tells me that your shop does the best. 

I apologize for the lateness in my request, and I have a feeling that I may think of some other ideas to add to the final box of chocolates once I’ve sent this. I hope this won’t be too inconvenient for you.

I thought it would help you choosing the chocolates if I told you a little bit about her.

The best place to start would be the moment I knew that she was the one for me.

We were sat in a coffee shop, her hands wrapped around a cup of frothy cappuccino, while she told me about her day. Excitement glittered in her eyes, and I couldn’t stop myself from reaching out and brushing the leftover foam from her lips with my thumb and tasting the sweet richness of the coffee.

She was mouth-watering.

Astounded, I turned the thin paper over in my hand, looking for more. The other side was blank, and the envelope was empty.

I poked my head out and gestured for Rose to come into the workshop after she’d finished serving a customer. I re-read the letter again. The disappointment I’d felt that it wasn’t for me was replaced by admiration for this man and a deep longing for the love that was absent in my own life. 

When Rose came, I showed her the letter. As she read it, her face softened, and when she got to the bottom, she reacted exactly the same way I did, searching for the ending. “There’s no more?” 

I shook my head, “Nothing. Perhaps there was another page, and he’s misplaced it?”

She clutched the letter to her chest, swooning. “How romantic.” 

“It’s beautiful, but there’s no name or address. What should we do?” He hadn’t even requested what he wanted, but I’d already visualized cappuccino swirls before I’d finished reading.

“I think you should make something. Just in case he arrives to collect them. We can always pick from the counter to make up a box if it turns out there was another page?” 

As the mysterious letters arrive we learn about this romantic man’s love for his wife, their special moments, his treasured memories – you really will swoon – and taking inspiration from his words Bella creates the perfect confections to evoke the magic of his love for him to present to his wife.

I don’t think it spoils anything that Orange Kisses and Peppermint Hearts is in the MilitaryWard post, but let’s just say SparrowNotes24 keeps us guessing on several points throughout the story, which definitely builds the mystery and anticipation! It’s a delightful tale and one to savour on a warm afternoon while the birds are singing and there’s romance in the air…I guarantee it will make your heart happy!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9069015/1/Orange-Kisses-and-Peppermint-Hearts

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*Review by AllyVera and Gingerandgreen*

By Your Leave by jonesn

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By Your Leave ~ Honorably discharged Sergeant Major Edward Cullen meets widow Bella Black and her young son Seth. The ad says room for rent, but maybe they have more to offer each other than just space. *Complete*

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Hurt/Comfort – Chapters: 22 – Words: 61,862 – Reviews: 1,764 – Favs: 1,528 – Follows: 1,953 – Updated: 02-25-13 – Published: 08-16-12 – Status: Complete – id: 8436114

Ally Vera and Gingerandgreen both loved this story so much, they decided to flail over it together…

AV ~ I am just going to come out and say this first ..  Oh. My. Goodness.  Sergeant Major Edward Cullen is HOT.  I spent quite a bit of the BPOV chapters of By Your Leave fanning myself.  To see him through her eyes and her thoughts about him…  well, *phew*

G&G ~ I agree Ally. Edward’s always hot and sexy, but in By Your Leave, he is the definition of delicious.

AV ~ I really think I would be great friends with this Bella – I love her trains of thought (extract from chapter 7)

“Edward’s a wet dream in his long-sleeved midnight blue coat with gold buttons lined down the front. His angular jaw accented by a firm collar. Several ribbons hang on the right side of his chest. I only recognized one. His purple heart. I wanted to kiss it. It’s what brought him here.

The scarlet and gold chevron on his left arm shows his status as Sergeant Major with three pointed, gold stripes on top, four curved gold stripes on the bottom, and incased in the middle, is the Eagle, Globe, and Anchor. The same symbol he has inked into his skin on his left shoulder.

I remember.

How could I forget?

A midnight blue belt is wrapped around his narrow waist. The golden ‘M’ on the front is shining. Bleached, white gloves cover his large hands. And, I would eat off his black dress shoes, they’re so clean. The whole thing is topped off with his white and black hat.

I have to try and block thoughts of him pounding into me while his dog tags flap against his sweaty, naked chest. I’m not sure how long I stood there staring at him, before the clearing of a throat caught my attention.

“What?” I ask, lamely, not even knowing if I had been asked a question.”

AV ~ Okay, now that my inappropriate thoughts are out of the way, let me tell you what else I loved about the story, apart from the good Sergeant Major’s body.  By Your Leave deals with some very serious matters, like military death and the aftermath of that devastation, but it still is a feelgood story. Jonesn does a brilliant job of keeping the story beautifully balanced – there is sadness, sweetness, heat and depth.

G&G ~ The special draw of Militaryward is the hero we delight in worshiping. By Your Leave is full of heroism. I love how Bella is as much of a hero as any of the military characters, even though she doesn’t see herself that way. Of course, Edward is full of humility too.

AV ~ Jones has created a firecracker in Seth, Bella’s son – he provides quite a bit of light entertainment.

G&G ~ Oh, Seth’s a gorgeous little boy. It takes great skill to make a child age appropriate, and Seth is perfect. I feel as though I walked home from school with him myself.

AV ~ The connection between Edward and Bella is strong in this story.  The more you read – the more you just know that these two are just meant to be – someone above was guiding them together.

G&G ~ Absolutely. And to me, that is the crucial element of Twific. Edward and Bella are destined to be together, no matter what has been before or what the future holds. You just know.

This is Bella talking to Seth in chapter 3:

“Well, someone came to see the spare room today, and they decided that they want to live with us. I was showing them the house, and that’s why I’m late.” He thinks it over as he chews, then lays a hand on my shoulder.

“Is it a boy or a girl?”

“A boy. Well, a man.”

“Does he have kids?” His eyes light up in anticipation, and I realize I don’t even know the answer to that question.

“You know, I don’t know. He didn’t have any with him, but we can ask him if he has any that might visit.” His eyes dim a bit, but I can tell he hasn’t lost all hope for playmates.

“Do you want to go meet him? He’s going to have dinner with us.” This excites him, and with a mouth full of fruit snacks he jumps up and down nodding his head. He stops when I grab his hand, telling him not to jump with food in his mouth, and we make our way back home.

As we walk, I wonder what dinner will be like tonight. It will be the first time that there is a third plate on the table. While it should have been for Jake it’s for Edward, the stranger in the spare room. And, I find myself hoping that he’s not a stranger for very much longer.

G&G ~ Mmm, the delectable satisfaction in knowing Edward won’t be a stranger for very long…

By Your Leave is the sort of story that reminds us why we love Militarywards.  Strong men and just as strong (sometimes stronger) women and let’s face it, the thought of Edward in a uniform *thud*.  Over and out from AV and G&G.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8436114/1/By-Your-Leave

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*Review by Gingerandgreen*

My Wounded Soldier by Counselor

*Made by Ro Nordmann*

*Made by Ro Nordmann*

My Wounded Soldier ~ 1866 Edward just home from the war. Neighbor Bella has a tragedy and Edward delivers her baby. Seeing as she’s widowed, marriage makes sense. He doesn’t feel worthy, but he can’t step aside for her suitors. Competition amongst veterans.

Fiction M – English – Romance/Hurt/Comfort – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 77 – Words: 183,065 – Reviews: 4,980 – Favs: 1,600 – Follows: 1,277 – Updated: 06-04-12 – Published: 03-05-12 – Status: Complete – id: 7899031

I don’t know whether I’m going to be able to express how much I love this story. Bear with me while I try.

My Wounded Soldier is about the aftermath of war. It gives us a raw and heavy insight into what violence does to people; but it’s written with such compassion, the story lifts your heart even while it breaks it.

Set at the end of the American Civil War, Edward is a veteran who has seen and lost too much. He comes home to the family farm at his father’s request and – though he can hardly bear to stay at first – quickly gets swept up into the brutal affairs of the neighbourhood.

Chapter one gives us as dramatic a beginning as anything I have ever read. We meet Bella Swan, heavily pregnant and with a young son to protect, challenging another victim of war with a rifle. She kills the man, but not before he’s slain her husband. Stress induces her labour, and all she can think to do is to send her little boy running to fetch our hero.

“Run yonder. North field,” I said. Then I knew not how but I was on my knees. I was gripped in pain again, and I was locked in it unable to move. I could not even lift my head to see if Johnny had high-tailed it for help. But I knew that one was home from the war, that oldest son who never spoke to even say howdy. I’d seen him riding high on the wagon just that morning in the north field. I wagered…he’d be the first one here. I just knew. For he’d been a soldier. And if there were more of these strangers skulking about…well he would know what to do.

“Edward,” I said, for that was his name. I could lift my head now, and my son was still staring. “Johnny…find Edward.”

Enter Edward. What a beautiful, beautiful man. So full of self-hatred, deeply conflicted and painfully wounded, he is the most perfect hero I’ve encountered in Twific. Bella is superb in this story, but Edward is what makes My Wounded Soldier one of my top two stories ever.

Just watch him help a woman who until this moment was pretty much a stranger to him:

“That’s it, honey. You’re the strongest woman I know. My ma would be so proud of you. You’re almost there now, darlin’ girl. Don’t you be afraid. You’ve got to push. Put some muscle in it now.”

She grit her strong little teeth, and I gave her my hand, and she squeezed the juice out of it, and I kept telling her to come on like she was pulling the plow through mud and stone, and she pushed and I had to let go and catch this baby whose whole head and shoulders were out now, and I turned it gentle as I eased it out of her, and my life got washed in one moment, and I knew that somehow God was telling me I wasn’t the most miserable bastard that ever lived. Cause I had touched heaven, and done a good thing…like a priest or something.

So I set that baby on her mama’s chest, and Miss Isabella looked at that girl and laughed a little, then at me, and I had this life cord and the business still running into her to deal with, but for a moment, we just looked at each other and she said, “Thank you.” And I said…nothing in the face of such beauty as that mother and her child. I couldn’t speak.

And that’s just chapter one, people!

I’m sure you’ve heard as many times as I have the advice to ‘show, don’t tell’ when writing. Much of the most popular Fic I’ve read does a whole lot of telling, sometimes telling the same things multiple times  - it’s had me questioning the validity of this advice. But when I read Counselor’s words, I remember how powerful a little ‘showing’ can be. Counselor expresses her stories in such a way as to have you believing you’ve fallen down a wormhole in time, and have landed right there in 1866. My Wounded Soldier is not an easy read, but an exquisitely moving one. I hope I’ve done it a little bit of justice, and persuaded you to give it a go.

MULTIMW

MILITARYWARD READING LIST

A World Away by wandb

All I Want For Christmas by kyla713 *previous rec here

Blood Glory, Sin & Innocence and Smoke & Mirrors by drotuno

Coming Home by Sarge’s Girls 

Compass by SparklingWand

The Bigger They Are by LadyExcalibur2010  *previous review here

The Cullen Legacy by pattyrose  *previous review here 

The Cullen Sutras by Magnolia822

The Harvest of Avarice by Emmamama88  *previous review here

Vines by FictionFreak95  *previous review here

Your mission, should you choose to accept it – divulge your Militaryward fic recs in the comments.

MISSION MILITARYWARD

All the stories we’ve selected to review for Militaryward are respectful of the sacrifices men and women throughout time and place make for their countries, and none of them make light of the tragedy of war. The FicSix would also like to highlight the importance of striving for peace. It was authors in the Twifandom who brought attention to the worldwide campaign, Peace One Day. It seems fitting to include it here, in a Militaryward post. Please follow the link, share and spread the word.

 The FicSix

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Let’s Play With Sportsward!

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Let’s face it ladies; Originalward was no athlete. Yeah, he defeated James and Victoria in battle and played a game of baseball here and there, but he wasn’t a sports freak by any means. Even though we ALL love the pale, sparkling, sleepless music-lover, sometimes a girl just wants–dare I say NEEDS–a good jock.

Thankfully, our fandom is blessed with a plethora of authors who are willing to improve on perfection and give Originalward that extra little something to whet the sports-lover in all of us.

Grab some beers, settle into your favorite recliner, put your feet up, and prepare to enjoy the wide world of Sportswards. You  might wanna grab a drool towel, too, because tight-fitting track pants and bulging biceps abound in this our latest installment of Fanfiction Fridays.

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*Reviews by Cared*

Shifting Gears by ChocolateSparrow

*Made by sparrownotes24*

*Made by sparrownotes24*

Shifting Gears ~ A race. A cyclist. A physio. He wants to win the Tour de France at any cost. She just wants to make it through without getting burned. A birthday gift for the lovely Erron.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance – Chapters: 5 – Words: 11,746 – Reviews: 145 – Updated: 4-21-13 – Published: 3-18-13 – Bella & Edward

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Negative Twenty and Falling by katinki

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*Made by katinki*

Negative Twenty and Falling ~ COMPLETE O/S. Two weeks, a few cups of cocoa, a mountain of snow, a pair of mittens, and one Mr. Perfect-Gorgeous. I present to you: Skiward. Just a little bit of wintery fluff so that you don’t think I’m always so doom and gloom. AH.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 2 – Words: 20,666 – Reviews: 296- Favs: 781 – Follows: 216 – Published: 12-13-11 – Status: Complete – id: 7632850

Negative Twenty and Falling opens with Bella listening to a weather report; the destination she is intent on travelling to is minus twenty degrees and falling – hence the title.  Our Bella likes to keep warm and is a little shocked at the forecast.

Mother. Fucker. 

Okay, fine, I think to myself as I test the thickness of my one and only (and new) parka. That’s in Celsius – damned Canadians – but I remember high school science. That’s still below zero in Fahrenheit. It’s negative four to be exact. And that’s… really freaking cold. Like deathly cold. Like my blood will freeze in my veins and I better not lick metal objects (not that I go around doing that) cold. Yeah so… cold.

See, for pretty much… forever, I’ve lived in the desert of Arizona – Phoenix actually – where there are only two possible forecasts: (very) hot and dry and pretty warm and dry. Like year round, too. Not snowing and negative twenty. Or negative four. Whatever. I wear shorts and tank tops at Christmas, not long johns and battery operated socks.

Damn that Alice.

As I shove pants and turtlenecks and a scarf I’ve never worn in the biggest suitcase I have, for the hundredth time, I curse myself for saying yes to her. Sure, she’s my best friend and I love her like a sister, but I should be going with our other roommates to Cabo for New Years’, not to Banff. Where it’s negative twenty. Did I mention that already?

I sigh as I pull the tags off a pair of chunky black mittens (that look remarkably like my oven mitts) before finally stuffing them into the side pocket. I don’t know how you do anything in mittens – like write, or drive, or eat French fries – but if I want to keep my fingers, I have a feeling I’ll need them. And maybe a portable space heater with backpack straps. Do they make those? 

Considering my aversion to less than balmy weather, I honestly have no idea why I said yes when Alice asked if I’d please, please, please go with her to the mountains of Alberta in the middle of winter.

Okay, that’s a lie.

I know exactly why.

If I reveal to you that Alice has a brother named Edward, a brother named Edward who will also be staying at the cabin in the snow, will you know exactly why too?  Believe me, once you have met this charming Skiward, or as Bella thinks of him Mr. Perfect-Gorgeous, you will not be surprised at her willingness to brave the elements.  After all, they can always warm up in the hot tub. *wink*

This story is romance pure and simple. For those of you worried, if you are familiar with katinki’s usual fare, she assures us “this is an angst-free zone”.  At over 20,000 words, it’s long for a one shot, but every word is warranted.  While it’s delightfully told in Bella’s POV, katinki’s voice, complete with tongue-in-cheek, shines through.  Put your thermals on ladies and cozy up to Skiward.  I know you’ll be toasty warm.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7632850/1/Negative-Twenty-and-Falling

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*Review by FluffyLiz*

Offside by Savage7289

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*Made by Rose Arcadia*

Offside ~ Edward’s the star keeper for the Forks High School soccer team, and is already being scouted by leagues overseas. Bella’s just moved from Phoenix and interferes with his…focus. Soccerward lives! Rated M for the good stuff, of course.

English – Angst/Drama – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 125 – Words: 170,098 – Reviews: 32,661 – Updated: 08‑30‑11 – Published: 05-30-11 – Status: Complete

When Cared asked me if I would review Offside by Savage7289, I have to admit I jumped at the chance.  The reason?  Well, apart from the fact that it’s a brilliant fic by the amazing Shay Savage, it’s also directly responsible for me becoming a TwiFic writer – about which, more later.

Offside is the story of a hot young High School Senior who is also the star goalie of his school soccer team.  His father, Carlisle Cullen, is a doctor and the ambitious Mayor of Forks, and has high hopes for Edward to win a professional contract after graduation.  He sees it as his ticket out of a one-horse town, and is single-minded in pushing his son to achieve fame and fortune via his sporting talent.  The fact that Edward is more captivated by Shakespeare than penalty shoot-outs is an annoyance to his father, so much so that Edward has long since stopped risking his ire, keeping his academic yearnings to himself.

“I’m counting on you,” Dad said. He put his hand on my shoulder and gave it a squeeze. I flinched a little and stopped breathing again. Even though I knew I was too built up now for him to really do anything to me, old habits die hard. “You know the plan, now you just have to focus, Edward. Don’t lose your focus. Classes okay so far? I don’t want anything distracting you.”

“They’re okay,” I told him. I shrugged a little, hoping it would get his hand off me. It worked, and I took a deep breath. “It’s only the first week of school, but they’re all okay so far.”

“I never should have let you sign up for those AP classes,” he grumbled.

I really, really didn’t want to have this fight again.

“And no girls,” Dad added. “If you want pussy, I fucking buy you some pussy.”

“Geez, Dad,” I turned my head away, cringing. “Not a problem, okay? Seriously, I need to get to sleep soon.”

“Running tomorrow? Six AM?”

“Yep.”

“Good.”

So, as you can see, Edward is ruled by his bullying father’s ambition, and he seeks relief in sketching – something else his father has no time for.  As for girls, well they’re just a means to an end, and his treatment of them is very much informed by his father’s vile misogyny.  But then, along comes soccer playing Bella, and everything changes.

Long, thick brown hair covering most of her back and shoulders, pale skin, athletically built, and deep brown eyes. She looked up at me, her teeth sank into her bottom lip, and I knew immediately who she was. It was the girl I slammed into after I was kicked out of the game on Friday, and she was sitting at my lab table.  I dropped down next to her and looked at her out of the corner of my eye. She tilted her head down, which made her hair drop over her shoulder and hide her face. It kind of pissed me off, actually, though I wasn’t sure why. I reached over and pushed her hair away from her face and back over her shoulder. She looked up at me, her deep brown eyes wide.

“Hey,” I said as I smiled at her.

“Um…hi,” she replied. She pulled back a little, and her hair dropped away from my fingers. At least it wasn’t hiding her from me anymore.

“I’m Edward,” I told her.

“So I’ve heard,” she said. Her eyes flashed up to Mister Banner, who was beginning his lecture on cellular anatomy.

“Have you now?” I smirked. I wondered just what she had heard, and from whom. “You got a name?”

“Yes.” She turned to look up at the front of the classroom. I had to laugh.

“Want to tell me what it is?” I asked. “Or do we get to play Rumplestiltskin?”

A few other games I could play with her flashed through my mind.

I glanced back over to the girl next to me, and saw the corners of her mouth turn up a little, like she was holding in a laugh. I shifted my lab stool, moving a little closer to her. She looked up at me, and then quickly looked away.

I didn’t touch her, though it was a little tempting. I kept my leg just about three inches away from hers, shifting when she moved away a bit to keep the constant distance. She had long, slender legs, but I could tell they had some muscle to them as well. I resisted the urge to run my hand over her thigh. No need to move too quickly on a chick that was obviously new.  Maybe even a challenge.

Predictably, a relationship is formed, but Carlisle is not happy about it.  He’s such a complete dick, in fact, that Savage felt compelled to ask readers to come up with novel ways to knock him off in her ‘Die, Daddy C, Die’ contest.  I tried my hand at this, submitting my first ever piece of fiction, and thus caught the writing bug.  So, thanks, Shay!  BTW, you should check these out, as some of them are absolutely inspired and very imaginative!

This is inevitably a story of star-crossed lovers, but, as ever with Savage, there’s much more to it than that – there’s heat, there’s angst, and there’s even a little intrigue.  Topped off with a very satisfying denouement, this is yet another high quality and brilliantly told story from one of the fandom’s most talented authors.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7036128/1/Offside

Die, Daddy C, Die Community here.

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*Review by Midnight Cougar*

Quarterback Rush by musegirl

*Made by perfacidadeliberada*

*Made by perfacidadeliberada*

Quarterback Rush ~ Bella has a chance meeting with college co-ed Edward and is immediately smitten. But how will she handle finding out Edward is a star football player? Will she be his good luck charm or a curse? AU/AH. Fluff, fun, and lemons. Rated M for a reason.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance/Humor – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 20 – Words: 111,589 – Reviews: 1,591 - Favs: 2,526 – Follows: 1,592 - Updated: 01-27-12 – Published: 11-10-10 – Status: Complete – id: 6467809

I have to admit, I’ve read a fair amount of Sportsward over the last several years – Baseballward, Soccerward, Swimward, Hockeyward … I seem to be pretty partial to any jock Edward, bulked up, cocky and in some type of sports uniform! *sighs dreamily* But I think my favourite has to a QBward. There is something about Edward Cullen all fit, fast, furious and decked out in a tight football uniform that really does it for me! *fans self*

One of the first QBwards I read was Quarterback Rush by musegirl. Now, it has been quite some time since I read it, but it was definitely memorable. What I remember the most was that I absolutely loved the romance of this story. I read the whole thing in just a few days. The story is set in a Texas college, Edward is the star Quarterback; he is intelligent, a bit cocky, but also adorable, and Bella has no idea who he is as she has no interest in sports. She is an all-around great Bella, though: studious, beautiful, nice; she is so real and down-to-earth. I really enjoyed them both – from their first encounter where their witty banter immediately takes hold, we see their sweet chemistry…

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a guy smirking at me. Glancing at him, my breath caught. Damn, he was hot. Really, really hot. Panty-wetting hot. Fuckhot. Brown-ish, red-ish…bronze-ish…crazy sex-hair with the most beautiful green eyes I’d ever seen, like fresh-cut grass. A perfectly straight nose and jaw that were a sculptor’s dream and his perfect, totally kissable lips formed that smirk that made my lady parts sit up and take notice.

He lifted an eyebrow to go with his smirk and I quickly looked down, blushing. Fuck, I’d been caught staring. I bit my lip, immediately regretting pulling my hair up so I couldn’t hide behind it. I climbed onto the bus in front of him and headed for the back. The bus was only half full so I took an empty seat in the back corner. Looking out the window, I reached up and released my hair and ran my fingers through it. I peeked through the strands and saw Smirkhot-Sex-Hair Guy chatting with someone before making his way further back. I hastily looked away to avoid getting caught staring again. I heard someone rather noisily take a seat in the row in front of me and I turned my head. Smirkhot-Sex-Hair Guy was sprawled across the row of seats and smirking once again at me. Now I became defensive, “What?”

He chuckled lowly and a shiver danced down my spine. His smirk deepened and he asked, “So, going to the game on Saturday?” Oh dear God in heaven, that voice! That smooth, deep, velvet voice. Just that one sentence had my stomach, amongst other things, quivering. What the hell was wrong with me? I’d never reacted like this to any guy before. I was practically panting over him like a cat in heat.

I mentally shook myself and pulled out my trusty friend, sarcasm. “Oh, yeah. I dream of nothing else.” I rolled my eyes. “Don’t tell me you’re going to lecture me on the wonders of football too? I get enough of that from my father. He thinks I’m un-American.”

Smirkhot-Sex-Hair Guy laughed again and smiled, shaking his head. “I wouldn’t dream of it.” He cocked his head to the side, “You’re an interesting girl. You don’t like football, so I’m guessing you’re not much of a tomboy. But you don’t like shopping either, so you’re not a princess. I can’t quite figure out what kind of girl you are.”

Ah, well, Edward, that is for her to know and you to find out! And since it looks like our Bella, while “quivering” on the inside, can hold her own on the outside, he may just have to work for it. *nods head and smiles*

As you can already see, she did make quite an impression, greatly intriguing our “Smirkhot-Sex-Hair Guy” QBward; and his interest only grows during the first few chapters as they continue to enjoy each other’s company during bus rides home. But it’s after Edward visits her sorority that Bella learns who Edward really is: starting Quarterback Cullen, number 17. Not only does Bella feel she is way out of Edward’s league, being as she is, “…plain as you could get. Brown hair, brown eyes, with that wholesome girl next door look. Not exactly the kind of girl guys would beat down a door to get to,” but she also thinks it’s all a game to him: for the popular jock to romance the quiet, book nerd. But our smooth QBward would disagree wholeheartedly, and his romance knows no bounds, as he pulls out ALL the stops to prove to her he is sincere and to win over his “beautiful girl”…

I was doodling on my notepad when the doorbell rang downstairs. I sighed; the meeting would come to a halt until whoever was at the door left. Jessica ran downstairs to answer the door when singing drifted up to the chapter room. She came racing back upstairs, almost tripping and yelling for us to get downstairs. Half of the girls followed her down and the other half ran to the front balcony. I stayed upstairs, not all that excited. I assumed it was one of the frats ‘serenading’ us. I’d heard Charlotte had met a guy named Peter at one of the parties over the weekend and figured it was his fraternity out there.

I stood in the back, laughing over the song choice, ‘You’ve Lost that Lovin’ Feeling.’ The scene from Top Gun where the guys all serenade their teacher was always one of my favorites. I yelped when Alice grabbed my arm and yanked me to the front of the group. Completely startled, I looked down to see Edward out in front on one knee with a large group of football players behind him as backup. They were all wearing their jerseys and smiling and totally hamming up the performance.

I covered my mouth with one hand, laughing at the sight in front of me. Edward looked up and spotted me. He smiled and, still singing, crooked his finger at me. Eyes wide and blushing, I shook my head. Edward winked at me and nodded, crooking his finger again. Alice dug her nails into my arm in warning and I hastily retreated to the stairs. I walked down them, taking deep breaths to cool my cheeks and calm my pounding heart.

Making my way through the girls gathered at the door, I stepped out in front of them. Edward’s smile was blinding. I took a few more steps forward and he took my hand as they finished the song. I ducked my head causing my hair to fall in a curtain around my face, shielding it from view. I knew my face was bright red still, but I couldn’t bring myself to care when Edward was smiling at me like that. The song ended and Edward rose, grabbing my waist with one hand and supporting my head with the other as he dipped me low to kiss me. I clung to his neck, partly to help keep myself from falling, but also to hold him to me. Even though the kiss was nowhere near as deep as the one we’d shared in my bedroom, I still felt it all the way to my toes.

The girls and guys all cheered when Edward lifted me upright again and I hid my face and grin in his chest.

Now THAT is how a football jock, who’s smitten, wins over his girl and scores his own touchdown! You now see why I found this story so memorable? But this only brings us into chapter 3 and there are 20 chapters, so you have lots more to read about Bella and Edward’s lovely, budding relationship in QR. It was a pleasure for me to read; it’s filled with romance and humour, with a little drama and some lemony goodness thrown in to keep things interesting, as Bella learns all about her “tight end.” *wink*


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6467809/1/Quarterback-Rush

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*Review by AllyVera*

Major Misconduct by m7707

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Coincidental Major by m7707

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Major Misconduct ~Edward Cullen – hot high school hockey player. Bella Swan – shy high school student. They’ve admired each other from afar, so what happens when they finally meet? Will they be strong enough to handle a threat from his past? No good deed goes unpunished…

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 36 – Words: 160,515 – Reviews: 4,686 - Favs: 5,101 – Follows: 2,345 – Updated: 07-17-10 – Published: 03-16-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5821543

Coincidental Major ~ A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward’s story from Major Misconduct.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 35 – Words: 193,272 – Reviews: 2,917 - Favs: 1,883 – Follows: 1,176 – Updated: 07-05-11 – Published: 02-02-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6709135

It is no secret that I have an unabashed passion for Hockeywards – hell, my Favourite Edward EVER is the original Hockeyward from HunterHunting’s brilliant The Misapprehension of Bella Swan *Ally goes all glassy-eyed thinking about him* Oh sorry, I got sidetracked…  What I do keep under wraps however, is that I am secretly a High School Fic hOOr.  I love them – so when MC and Cared told me about Sportsward, there was only one choice for me – Major Misconduct and its EPOV companion story Coincidental Major written by the wonderful m7707.

Of course, in MM, Bella is a very smart girl for her age and has crushed on the gorgeous Edward Cullen since first laying eyes on him as a freshman.  Being very shy and unsure of herself, she never acts on her crush, and doesn’t actually officially meet Edward until the beginning of junior year when her best friend Alice starts dating Jasper, Edward’s best friend.  What Bella doesn’t know is that Edward has crushed on her for probably the same amount of time… *sigh* These two!  All that wasted time!!

What I adored most about MM and CM are the characters that m7707 has created. Bella is shy and doesn’t run with the popular crowd, but there is a side to her that is fierce, passionate, glorious, and she has a wicked sense of humour.  Edward is not your typical jock, he’s intelligent, focused and very driven and you will adore the way he loves his Bella.

Here is a glimpse of Bella getting a dash anxious waiting for Edward to turn up for their first date – I laughed myself silly when I read this (from chapter 8)

At 7:25 I ran down the stairs. Edward seemed like the on-time type. I pulled the curtains in the front window back to peer out into the dark, and jerked back as headlights flashed across the front of the house. Oh God, I hoped he hadn’t seen me looking out and waiting for him like some overeager loser. I spun around, and saw that Charlie was watching me incredulously.

“What?” I demanded. “He’s here. I think. I think that’s him. It’s probably him. Should I get the door? No, you probably should. Will you get it? No! Wait!” I flung my hands out at him as he started to rise from his chair, and he froze. “I’ll get it. I’m sure he doesn’t want to see Dad the Police Chief first thing, give him a second to adjust. Right? Don’t you think?” The doorbell rang, and I jumped as if I’d been goosed. “I’ll get it. Dad! Be nice,” I reminded him, and dashed down the hall to the front door.

“Ooo-kay,” I heard Charlie mumble, and realized I was acting like a lunatic. I paused before the door and took a deep breath, shaking my hands to loosen them. Calm down, Swan.

I pulled the door open, and there he was—Edward Cullen, standing on my front door step—tall, gorgeous, smelling fantastic, and smiling down at me. I just stared at him, leaning against the door for support.

No wonder Bella got all worked up! She might be shy, but she’s got spunk and is so funny! She’s also a perv (it’s always the quiet ones), and her slight obsession with Edward’s compression pants is hilarious and well-founded. m7707 delighted in her AN’s with YouTube visuals to help those of us who had no idea what compression pants were.  Well, suffice to say, I am an expert now! (Below is the video that m7707 shared with us…  just pretend it’s Edward… although Sidney Crosby does fill out those compression pants pretty well!)

If you are wondering which story to read first, Major Misconduct was written first, and then Coincidental Major.  I read MM first completely and then I read CM as a WIP.  Personally, I would advise to read MM first, and then delve into Edward’s POV afterwards in CM – but you could read them in tandem if you wanted to, but I think it takes away some of the mystery when you know what Edward is thinking – if you know what I mean!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5821543/1/Major-Misconduct


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6709135/1/Coincidental-Major

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Sportsward Reading List

Another League by CaraNo

Chasing Victory by mpg   Previous review here.

Comp Sem 101 by bornonhalloween 

Evening the Score by DH78

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl  Previous review here.

Foul Territory » by rinabina

Game, Set, Match by MandyLeigh87

Going Under by sparklnfade

He Shoots, She Scores by WitchyVampireGirl  Previous review here.

Lucky Strike by Twiddler83

Melt With You by Jenny0719

Off Piste by landdownunder

Penalty Shot by Edward’s Eternal

Quarterback Sneak by jayhawkbb

Shadowboxer by nobloodnofoul

Sideline Collision by Nolebucgrl   Previous review here.

Stealing Home by Nolebucgrl 

Take The Ice  by bellamarie117

Taking a Shot by TwoTwiMoms

The Purple Banana Hammock by TheFicChick  Previous review here.

Try by shellshock81

Up to Speed by ericastwilight  Previous review here.

Yosemite Decimal by MagTwi78  Previous review here.

We would like to say a big thank you to FluffyLiz for joining us today on Fan Fiction Fridays.  She didn’t include the link to her entry into the Die, Daddy C, Die contest, What Goes Around Cums Around, *snicker* but we just did.

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GUEST AUTHOR REVIEW WEEK

Fan Fiction Fridays

Welcome to a special authors’ review week of Fan Fiction Fridays, where today we ~ The FicSix ~ are thrilled to have joining us three talented fan fiction authors who are going to share with you a fic rec of their own!

Please welcome Thimbles, Missus T, and Livie79!

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*Review by Thimbles*

Something True by BelieveItOrNot

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Something True ~ With too many secrets and a haunting past she’d love to forget, at seventeen, Bella is sure love doesn’t exist. College dropout Edward Cullen can’t seem to keep hold of love, or his music. A cottage, a lake, a tree, a muse, wrong choices, and heartache. How will these two cope with life and keep afloat? A daily word-prompt WitFit. Alternates between past and present. AH E/B

Rated: Fiction M - English – Angst/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 20 – Words: 37,557 – Reviews: 1,271 - Favs: 349 – Follows: 597 – Updated: 04-11-13 – Published: 03-15-13 – id: 9103200

Disclaimer: Not only do BelieveItOrNot and I write together on occasion, but she’s also one of my dearest friends—the 10000 miles between us be damned.

As the title implies, Something True is an exploration of truth and falsehood, secrets, rumours, gossip, what things are and what they seem to be. And more than that, it’s the story a young Bella seeking the answer to the question all of us must ask ourselves at some point—who am I? Am I more than the things I’ve done? Am I more than my mistakes and bad choices?

As a little girl, Bella understood secrets. Not the kind learned from others through whispers in ears as she promised not to tell a soul, but the kind that were somehow discovered, that became a true and unwanted part of her—shouts inside her heart that could never be let out. She knew how one secret could grow, stacking itself like a staircase in her mind. And she knew that the longer it went untold, the tighter it had to be locked up, and that if it was released, it would cause devastation and destruction.

Letting a secret like hers out could be like detonating a bomb.

Nobody taught her these things. She just knew. Like knowing if you open your mouth to talk your voice will come out; like knowing if you move one foot in front of the other, you’re walking.

Something True skips back and forward in time, moving between the past and the present with each chapter. Right from the first few chapters, the differences in Bella as we see her “now” and “then” are striking. We see her last winter, as a giggling Junior, holding her own with her friends. This summer, we meet a quiet, withdrawn Senior who is being shunned by almost everyone as taunts fly and rumours abound.

Because of the shift back and forth each chapter, we unravel the mystery of what has happened to change Bella so drastically piece by piece. In the “then” chapters, we watch Bella struggle to come to terms with her mother’s continuing affair. Her English teacher, Mr. Biers, gains her trust with his compliments and kindness, providing a shoulder to cry on and building her sense of self-worth as he ropes her in to grading papers and assisting other students. Vulnerable and somewhat disillusioned, let down by the adults in her life, Bella’s admiration quickly morphs into a crush. Riley—as he allows her to call him—doesn’t discourage her, and it doesn’t take very much before they tumble straight past the line of an acceptable teacher-student relationship.

This can’t end well. And it won’t.

We know from the outset that something will happen to leave present-day Bella a shell of herself, bitter and listless, counting down the days until she can escape from high school. Exactly what it was that’s happened, we can guess, though at this point in the story, we’re not quite sure.

It’s in these present day chapters that we really get to know Edward, too. In his own words, “Some people can be a lot of different things, you know? Maybe that’s why some people have a hard time deciding what to do, because they have a lot of choices. But that’s not me. I’m one thing. A composer. Not a student, not anything else.”

When we meet him, Edward is nursing a broken heart and a dying tree. He’s dropped out of college and is looking for inspiration—for his muse. Through the “now” chapters, we watch Bella and Edward’s friendship grow, their secrets slowly unburdened.

At the time I’m writing this—with eighteen of approximately twenty-five chapters posted—we’re seeing a beautiful, inspiring friendship developing as these two find solace in each other’s company. There’s a peacefulness between them, a sense of trust that allows them to express themselves in each other’s company. As Edward tells Bella early on, “I like your quiet.”

Something True is a witfit (that means BelieveItOrNot gets a prompt each morning, writes her chapter around it and posts the same day), which I think makes the depths this story explores quite remarkable.

I’ll be honest. Personally, I’m generally not interested in reading student-teacher relationships. (Not even, or perhaps especially not, when he’s named Edward.) I’m married to a high school teacher, and I can’t tolerate the romanticizing of these kind of relationships—“age is just a number,” or “it’s different for us.”

But there are some writers I will trust with absolutely any subject, and BelieveItOrNot is one of these writers. There is a grace and sensitivity in the way she approaches difficult subjects that never ceases to amaze me. She has the ability to see beyond the surface of things and to draw out the nuances and complexities that govern the way people interact with each other, and within themselves.

In her writing, we meet characters who are flawed and authentic—real people who make real mistakes. There are no caricatures or melodrama, there is no romanticizing or gratuitous angst—these people and the situations they find themselves in are explored with a deft touch and startling insight.

And of course, I can’t tell you about one of BelieveItOrNot’s stories without mentioning the exquisite craftsmanship that goes into them. The intensity with which she makes you feel, and with such economy of words – it’s steal-your-breath-away stunning. There are a lot of brilliant writers in this fandom, and Believey is among the best of them.

… I’m off to obsessively refresh my email inbox until today’s update lands.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9103200/1/Something-True

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*Review by Missus T*

What If by twihart21

*Made by HeatherDawn*

*Made by HeatherDawn*

What If ~ Edward is a successful defense attorney living in LA. He lives a lonely, predictable life. But one day, he wakes up in an unfamiliar house, in an unfamiliar room with Bella laying next to him. Will he ever want to wake up from this dream? AH EPOV

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Drama/Romance – Chapters: 31 – Words: 211,785 – Reviews: 2457 – Updated: 7-17-11 – Published: 1-25-10 – Edward & Bella

*Fic is not “complete” in that the final chapter is up, but the epilogue was never posted.

I rec’d What If  by twihart21 in a recent update of my own fic, and Cared asked if I’d be interested in reviewing it for the blog. I’m all kinds of flattered and nervous, so bear with me.

I found twihart21’s story while reading Firefly in Summer as a work in progress. I’ve always had a thing for time travel and parallel universe stories, and FiS left me wanting more – not because the fic was lacking, it’s clearly not – but because I needed something to read between updates. A search of the Twibrary brought me to What If, and I’m so glad it did.

The summary doesn’t quite do this fic justice, although I’m not sure how to explain it all myself. If you say too much it’s spoilery but if you don’t say enough…You just can’t describe it. I’ll give it my best, though. LOL

Los Angeles based attorney Edward Cullen is driven, career focused and lonely. He misses his family and is sick of his predictable life. One night out with friends and family, he’s introduced to a woman, Bella, who makes him wonder if things could be different. Then he wakes up the next morning and everything has changed. He’s in a strange bed with the woman he just met. There’s a picture of the two of them on the wall and as the background picture on his cell phone. He’s inwardly freaking out but she’s entirely comfortable with him.

He sneaks downstairs to investigate while she’s in the shower. He’s never seen the house before, but his friends are all there acting as if everything is normal. He finds mail on the table addressed to himself – but not the self he knows – it’s for Dr. Edward Cullen. In Seattle.

His first reaction to everything is panic. He tries to go home, to find someone who knows him, the Edward he was before he woke up, but it’s as if he’s been erased.

(Edward)

“Hello, sir. Can I help you?” the doorman greeted me. I really wished I could remember people’s names.

“I just have a quick question,” I said, stepping closer to him.

“Okay.”

I leaned towards him and studied him carefully. Still the same doorman, still the same building. What had changed?

“Do I look familiar?”

The expression on his friendly face changed and his eyebrows gathered together in the center of his forehead.

“I mean, the slightest bit? Do you think that there is the slightest possibility that we have met before?”

I stepped even closer, never breaking our eye contact. I wanted to make sure that he stared at me long enough to know without a doubt the answer to my question.

So, I waited. I could tell that he was taking his time, like the solution to this was not easy.

It was as if he knew how important his answer to my question was.

Suddenly, his faced relaxed, and he sighed.

“I’m sorry, sir. But I’m positive we’ve never met.”

I ran my hand through my hair and groaned slightly under my breath. “Thanks anyway. Sorry to bother you.”

Without waiting for his reply, I stalked out of the building and back to the cab. I told the driver to take me back to LAX International Airport.

I wasn’t sure where else to go. I had nothing. I owned nothing. No job. No home. No identity. No life. And for the first time in a long time, I felt completely alone.

As if she heard my thoughts, my phone buzzed in my pocket. A text.

“Come home to me. – B”

I thought for a moment about if I should respond or not. I felt sorry for her. She was waiting on someone. Someone who wasn’t me.

With no home to go back to, Edward has no choice. He jumps into his life in Seattle despite feeling like a fish out of water. He doesn’t know or do things his friends and Bella expect him to, but he’s able to play most of it off. He starts to get a handle on things and recognizes that he likes being this other Edward. He’d rather be this Edward. He loves Bella, and he’s terrified of waking up to find it all gone. Eventually, he can’t fight his feelings and lets himself hope for a future with her.

But this wouldn’t be twific if things went easily, if they rode off into the sunset. Nope. Edward wakes up one morning and he’s back in his cold, sleek Los Angeles condo. I found myself sobbing as I read how Edward reacted to returning to his former life. It was gut wrenching. I couldn’t even imagine his devastation – to finally accept the second chance he felt he’d been given, only to have the rug pulled out from under him.

From there, Edward has one hell of a climb if he wants to get back the life he briefly knew. He has to start over – again. He has to pull himself up, relocate, and convince a girl who hardly knows him that they are in love with each other. It’s no longer a question of what if for him. It’s about what he knows can be.

While I was rooting for Edward and Bella to get back together, I loved that their reunion wasn’t quick and easy. It wasn’t angst ridden I-want-to-eat-Ben-and-Jerry’s-‘til-I-die, but it was real. Because no one lives in a bubble. Life doesn’t always go as planned, and sometimes people get hurt while others are trying to get happy.

I thought Twihart21 did a great job of weaving the different versions of Edward’s life together. There were twists I never saw coming that I felt in my heart because she set them up so perfectly. Little details she dropped in that came back later to fit perfectly in the puzzle. She created an compelling original character in Blake. I liked him a lot, and then I felt awful for him, even during the point of the fic when I wanted to hate him.

This story has humor, some great lemons, some E/B arguments that made me cringe for them, and sweet bits that made me sigh. Pretty much, it had all the feels.

(Edward)

I tip-toed away, thinking about what I had heard.

One broken heart is better than two.

Was it? Possibly.

But I couldn’t help that little feeling inside of me. The one that felt so elated… so overjoyed to know that she felt something for me whether it be a feeling she wasn’t quite sure about. Still. She felt something. And right now, something was better than nothing.

Plus, she thought I was pretty.

Walking into the kitchen, I could feel myself smiling. Bella Swan liked me. She didn’t say it, but I knew that’s what she meant. She liked me. She thought I was pretty. A fluttering in my stomach gave way to the emptiness it had been feeling for so long, and for the first time in a long time there was a new emotion taking over me.

Hope.

And that’s what this fic was about since the beginning. Hope.

The final chapter was posted in July of 2011, and Twihart21 hasn’t published anything new on FFnet since then. I have no idea what happened in her RL or where she’s at, but I’d love to thank her for her words. While I’d still really like to read the epilogue, What If ends at a satisfying place. If you’ve skipped over this story because it’s not marked complete, you should give it a try. If you love the idea of time travel and parallel lives, you should definitely check it out.

*Made by Rose Arcadia*

*Made by Rose Arcadia*


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5694977/1/What-If

The Twibrary can be found here:  
http://twibrary.blogspot.com/

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*Review by Livie79*

Adore, Adore by ooza

*Made by ooza*

*Made by ooza*

Adore, Adore ~ Bella is in a bit of a financial pinch. Can one night with Edward solve all her problems? “What do you want to do to me?” she asked. “Everything.” One-shot written for SFFR, now expanded! BxE, AH, Rated MA for dirty citrus

Rated: Fiction M - English – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 6 – Words: 37,973 – Reviews: 1,749 - Favs: 2,857 – Follows: 4,149 - Updated: 10-13-12 – Published: 01-19-11 – id: 6667983

Summary: Bella is in a bit of a financial pinch. Can one night with Edward solve all her problems? “What do you want to do to me?” she asked. “Everything.”

When we meet Bella, we learn she’s a struggling waitress who just can’t seem to make ends meet. She’s in a pitfall of financial woes with no end in sight.

Enter Edward.

He’s recently taken over the financial responsibilities for the building Bella lives in. This translates to collecting the rent. He sets out to track down Bella, one of his most delinquent residents, but things take an interesting turn when he offers her an alternate solution to clear her debt.

“Look, I don’t want to evict you, okay?”

“So don’t.”

He ran his hand down his face and sighed again. His eyes scanned my apartment, finally settling on the large stack of mail on the table. “Bills?”

“That’s none of your business.”

“Ooh, feisty. I like it.”

I scoffed loudly.

“Bella—”

“Miss Swan,” I corrected through my teeth.

“Miss Swan.” Edward smirked. “Would you be open to coming to an . . . alternate agreement?”

“Like what, a payment plan? It’s not necessary. I’ll give you the money when I get it. I promise.”

“No, not like a payment plan.”

No, not like a payment plan. Edward has something a little more…physical in mind.  When he shares his idea, Bella immediately rejects his offer. Unfortunately, or fortunately depending on how you look at it, Bella’s mediocre paycheck won’t cover her rent and she realizes she’s out of options. After a tense phone conversation with Edward, Bella agrees to his terms: sex for rent.

When she shows up at his apartment, Edward takes complete control. At first she’s hesitant, but Edward’s confidence and cocky attitude quickly break her resolve.

I whimpered in frustration as he removed his fingers. He dragged them higher, grazing the sensitive skin between my cheeks. I inhaled sharply as he applied more pressure and began caressing the area.

“What are you doing?” I choked out.

“You know what I’m doing,” Edward teased, applying more pressure. “Are you going to tell me no again?”

“No.”

Never has a sweeter word been spoken. Because when Bella lets go, the readers are swept away by a tidal wave of lust and left in a puddle of goo. But contrary to what Ooza says, this story isn’t just about smut. She’s created two very complex characters who will send you on an emotional rollercoaster.

Bella struggles to come to terms with what she did but can’t deny how much it helped her financial situation. When rent comes due the following month, Edward offers her the same deal. And even though Bella has the money to cover it, she finds herself accepting. Thus begins their arrangement and subsequently where things get tricky.

Edward is a conundrum. In a relationship that’s supposed to be based purely on sex, he blurs the line time and time again. And his hot and cold behavior leaves Bella’s head spinning.

“You should stay.” His voice was authoritative and didn’t leave much room for argument. I really wasn’t in the mood.

“Look, Edward,” I said sternly. “I’m a big girl, okay? I understand the nature of our . . . arrangement. We’re adults. It’s just sex.” I glanced around the room for my clothes before remembering they were in the entryway. I didn’t want to look for my underwear; he could add them to his collection. “I don’t need to spend the night or cuddle with you to be okay with that.” I turned toward the door, but his next words stopped me in my tracks.

“Maybe I do.”

I looked at him, trying to figure out if he was just trying to manipulate me to get his way, but I could see nothing other than sincerity in his eyes.

“It would make me feel better if you spent the night. Please,” he added quietly.

Apparently my inability to deny him extended beyond sex, because I found myself walking back to the bed.

“Okay,” I agreed. “I’ll stay.”

And then you think, oh wow, he has feelings for her. It makes you smile and feel all warm and fuzzy. That is, until he does something like this:

As I reached the sixth floor, I heard Edward’s low murmuring. I smiled, glad he was home and that I’d get to see him. My excitement came to an abrupt end when his voice was followed by a feminine laugh. I turned the corner, coming face to face with Edward and a very tall, very beautiful woman with silver blonde hair.

I froze. Edward’s eyes widened as he looked at me with an expression that could only be described as panic.

“Hello,” the woman said pleasantly. She smiled, showing off unnaturally white teeth. Her voice seemed to pull Edward from his trance.

“Miss Swan,” he said formally. “What a surprise to see you. Is there a problem with your apartment?”

His words slammed into me with the force of a freight train. I stood there, holding his Tupperware to my chest like an idiot, shocked and unable to come up with a proper response.

So this was how I rated. He could fuck me, he could call me his friend, but the minute he had a hot date, I was nothing but a tenant.

“No,” I answered dumbly.

“Excellent.” Edward wrapped his fingers around the woman’s arm and gently tugged her toward the elevators. “Have a nice evening,” he called over his shoulder.

Ouch. Jerk. Or is he?

Edward has a story. That much is obvious. But since we’re experiencing Bella’s POV, we’re left guessing. It’s one of the many things that make this story so addictive. One minute he’s abrasive and blunt. The next he’s sweet and caring. There’s one thing about him that never changes though: he’s hot as fuck in the bedroom.

The lemons? Oh, my God, the lemons. Hats off to Ooza for some of the hottest sex scenes ever written. But is that enough to make up for his bullshit? I’ve found myself on more than one occasion screaming, “What is his deal?!” And better yet, will Bella bother sticking around to find out? Will he give her a choice?

Edward pressed me against the wall, pinning me with his hands and his body. “You agreed to be mine, remember? Mine.”

Oh…my.

As the story develops and the layers are peeled away you can’t help but fall in love with both characters. When they laugh, you’ll laugh. And when they hurt…so will you. Adore, Adore is an excellent story that is well written and contains all the pieces to make for one hell of an exciting journey. If you’re not already reading Adore, Adore, you’re only cheating yourself. Go! Now!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6667983/1/Adore-Adore

Visit ooza’s blog for stories, author’s notes, updates, teasers, banners, downloads, etc.: www.gardenofsin.net.

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A quick reminder that the voting in the fabulicious TwiHEA Contest closes 13th April.  With 34 one-shots to choose from, you are sure to find a favourite.

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We’d like to plug the daring Let’s Do Anal Anonymous TwiFic Contest.  Sorry – we couldn’t resist!

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The back door will remain unlocked and open for entries until April 19, 2013 (midnight CST).

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We would like to say a special Thank You to our lovely guests, ThimblesMissus T, and Livie79; it was a real honour to have them accept our invitations to review for us, and we are so excited about the stories they have shared! Thank you, ladies!

Have a lovely week!
The FicSix

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READING ROCHELLE, ALL STARRY-EYED

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This week the FicSix were overcome with enthusiasm for our special guest author. We were Rise-ing to the challenge of reviewing our favourite stories. Reviews were Stolen without our Volition; our usual Embrace is light as Air, but this time there were threats of With or Without You, Glimmer Darkly on your Own and draw the Curtains on those Sessions. We were so Starry Eyed Inside, we had a punning war. We’re sorry.

Truthfully, we are over the moon to bring you an author interview with one of the sweetest, most gracious and talented authors in the Fandom. Ladies and gentlemen, we bring you…

Rochelle Allison

How did you first come to read Twilight – and answer this part honestly, we won’t judge – how many times have you read it?
summer of 2008, i think. i randomly saw an ad for twilight movie online, realized i’d been hearing about some character named “edward cullen”, got curious, and went to the library. safe to say by the time i finished new moon i was like…forget the library i’m buying all of these right now!

What is (a) your favourite Twilight book, (b) your favourite scene and (c) how do you feel it was portrayed in the film version?
well, there are so many favorites but one that always stands out to me is when he tells her he can’t stay away from her. i just remember reading that and sort of gasping to myself, all fluttery inside. whenever i’d read it after that, i’d anticipate that part.they portrayed it just fine in the movie, but it didn’t quite have the same effect on me (although i do enjoy that scene).

Are you in the Twicloset?
Not really. I don’t wear t-shirts or anything, haha, but if people ask i generally tell them. my husband and close friends and mom all know i read and write fic.

What inspired you to start writing fanfiction and how did you decide on your penname?
i was inspired by the Age of Edward contest, summer of 2009. i chose my penname because it’s my first and middle name, and as a child, i’d always said that “rochelle allison” would be my penname when i became a writer one day.

Do you prefer writing EPOV or BPOV? What is the difference for you?
i prefer BPOV, and write the vast majority of my stories in it. i guess i just feel like it’s easy for me to feel the things she (whatever bella i’m writing) feels: as a girl, as someone falling love and/or crushing, etc. it’s instinctive for me get into that headspace. i love a good EPOV, though. mad props to those that write authentic, convincing EPOV.

Do you have a particular process when it comes to your writing, perhaps a certain mood, environment or music?
yeah. whenever Tiny Tyrant is napping or with his grandma or daddy. lol.

When you’re writing, do you see the Twilight actors in your head as your characters, or are there other people you imagine in their stead?
I don’t see faces at all. It’s pretty vague.

Have you met fandom people in real life? Were they what you expected?
I have met fandom people, on a couple of different occasions (once on a girl’s weekend, and then a few years later at Comic Con.) they were, both times around, awesome. it’s like finding your tribe, your people. ;) very cool. i love putting faces to the names and personalities i spend so much time with online. some of these girls and I are way closer now.

What in life are you most passionate about?
my God, my husband and kids, my writing. being kind, and the kind of person people want to be around – not someone they’d want to avoid. becoming better in every way, and allowing the people around me that same process.

Tell us about your guilty pleasure, we promise not to tell anyone.
i feel like i have a lot of guilty pleasures. isn’t fic one? haha. um, let’s see. eating nutella from the jar…honey sandwiches…they’re probably all going to be food related. i have a wicked sweet tooth.

If you’re in were trapped in a lift with Robert Pattinson for five precious minutes, what would you tell him about the mad world that we all inhabit?
Like about fandom? I don’t know about five minutes. Let me be stuck with him for like, an hour. I’m sure it would all come out then, haha! I’d pull my favorite fics up on my iPhone and read him the juiciest parts.

Now, do you have a rec you’d like to share? Tell us the name of the story, the author and why you think RA readers would love it.
sure. at the moment it would be a toss up between Counselor’s “Love Like a Hurricane” and “Dirty South Drug Wars” by Hoodfabulous. I love these stories because they’re well written, with rich, authentic – in this case, Southern – voices that just really appeal to me.

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*Review by Gingerandgreen*

Glimmer Darkly

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

Glimmer Darkly ~ She loses him almost as soon as she finds him… but things aren’t always what they seem. Will Bella follow her heart down the rabbit hole? AU-ish.

Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English – Supernatural/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 24 – Words: 135,890 – Reviews: 3,088 - Favs: 1,349 – Follows: 1,272 – Updated: 08-17-12 – Published: 09-27-11 – Status: Complete – id: 7418494

Glimmer Darkly is as beautifully written as all of Rochelle’s stories. The action flows naturally and enticingly; it has an interesting structure that keeps you biting your lower lip, Bella-esque. The characters are as finely drawn, in the talented and artistic manner as you have come to expect if you know the author’s work at all. So you could say it’s a regular Rochelle read – but it isn’t.

Sometimes I wonder if I’m losing my mind.
It’s weird and quite possibly insane, but tonight I feel…exposed.

I should have worn something heavier, warmer—not pajamas, and certainly not flip flops. It’s wet, chilly, and the consistent thwack thwack of my shoes on the pavement is obnoxious against the nighttime hush. I wrap my arms tightly around myself, fisting my keys so they don’t jangle so harshly.

The narrow concrete path goes on forever, meandering darkly through shadows before reemerging in to artificial light, courtesy of the lamps Charlie installed a few summers ago. This footpath is what connects the guesthouse to the mailboxes out by the main road, and I know its curves and spider web cracks better than the back of my hand. I’ve wandered it every day of every summer since I was six and, now that I’m living here full time again, I’ll walk it even more.

My nightly sojourn to the mailboxes used to be leisurely, but these days things are…different.

Subtle but certain, it’s back…this creepy feeling. It’s the feeling of turning out the light and walking down the hall and just knowing something’s there in the dark. The woods make me feel this way, and that saddens me because those woods used to be home. I played in them all the time as a kid but now? No. And damn it’s been bad lately, at its worst when the day’s light is fading, twilight smothering the last bits of afternoon sun.

Whatever it is, it’s palpable tonight, thick and silent; even the normal evening sounds of rustling trees and voices drifting from the guesthouse are gone.

It’s followed me for months–ever since that summer ended, taking everybody I loved along with it.

Ever since the night I awoke to breaking glass, to blood-soaked sheets.

Wow – just re-reading those opening paragraphs sends shudders of excitement down my spine. Glimmer Darkly is a little darker than you might expect. It’s a brilliant twist on canon, a little more grown up than Twilight, but just as captivating. If you haven’t read it yet, you’ll love it; if you have, go read it again, it’s worth it.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7418494/1/Glimmer-Darkly

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*Reviews by Ilovealion*

Sessions

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

Sessions ~ sparks, serenades, sexy smiles…sessions.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 19 – Words: 37,722 – Reviews: 2,279 – Favs: 1,344 – Follows: 591 – Updated: 01-22-11 – Published: 01-12-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6648808

When I found out we were going to feature Rochelle Allison’s work, I immediately knew that I wanted to write the recommendation for Sessions. I vividly remember reading this story a few years ago and swooning hard and heavy for a certain musician/architect named Edward. He’s a bit of a womanizer until he finally gets a chance with Bella, who he’d been watching from afar. Her love transforms him into one of the most romantic Edwards I’ve ever read. One particular scene involving a couch and a bikini still make my girly bits tingle all these years later. Even though they had instant chemistry, they didn’t just jump in the sack. I loved how they took it slow…

We managed not to stumble to the elevator. Once inside he trapped me against the wall, kissing me with these long, wet kisses tasting of lime and liquor.

I wanted him. Oh, how I wanted him. It was bad. I’d wanted him for weeks.

He grabbed my hand and pulled me along down the hall. Inside our suite, I kicked off my flip flops and went to use the bathroom. Edward was in bed when I came out, looking like he was dozing.

“You’re asleep?” I whined, climbing on top of him.

His eyes opened and he grinned crookedly, rolling over so that I was beneath him. We started up with the kissing again, wet and excited, his hand deep in my hair and my hands in his. He started moving his hips and against me and I wrapped my legs around him, moaning when he hit a particularly good spot.

“I like you, Bella. I really like you.”

I stilled, my heart beating so loud and fast I thought it might gallop from chest like a runaway horse.

“I really like you too. A lot,” I said, stroking his cheeks with my fingertips.

“I don’t want to mess this up.” He was being drunk and honest and I dug it.

“Then don’t.”

“I don’t want to.”

“If it’s meant to be – “

“Forget that,” he said, shaking his head. “We either do or we don’t, right? Nothing else.”

“Okay.” I wanted to trust him, trust in him, to believe his words.

And then I realized I did. Our kisses slowed down, drifting from a frantic pace to a more romantic one and then a sleepy-sloppy one. We feel asleep, fully dressed, in each other’s arms.

“I’m glad you came with me,” he said right before we faded.

“Me too.”

Awww. His love and respect for her are apparent from the very beginning. So sweet. *sigh*

It’s a relatively short, angst-free story that will make you smile. But, be cautious as you read. Her Edward just might ruin you for any other man. If you think you can handle it, go brave the serenades and citrus of Sessions.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6648808/1/Sessions 

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Starry Eyed Inside

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

Starry Eyed Inside ~ High School Fictional. No one sends Bella into a tailspin quite like Edward Cullen… but can she make him hers? The ups and downs and all arounds.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 29 – Words: 141,194 – Reviews: 8,420 – Favs: 4,858 – Follows: 3,149 – Updated: 12-19-11 – Published: 08-24-10 – Status: Complete – id: 6268757

Starry Eyed Inside is a great Edward and Bella “coming of age” story. They meet. They get separated. Then, a few years later, they find one another again. Unfortunately, when they do reconnect, Bella is in a committed relationship with someone else.

Uh oh!

The door behind us opened, and Alice stepped out. She paused, her hands in her pockets, looking at Edward and then me.

“What’s up?” she asked softly, and I knew she might be trying to prevent me from doing something I’d regret later.

She didn’t have to worry though. For one, cheating on Garrett was never something I’d wanted to do. And then there was Edward, who made me feel as crazy as he ever had. If and when I was free to do so, there needed to be a discourse before I went down that road with him.

Even though I wanted to. I was better at pretending these days, but I wanted him in any capacity, too.

“Nothing,” I replied. Edward’s hand loosened from my hair. “How’s… Jasper?”

Alice’s eyes narrowed, and she smirked at my non-smooth attempts to divert attention from the obvious.

The quiet lilt of our conversation was interrupted by the front door opening again. Jake, Emmett and Rose all spilled out, talking loudly.

“You ready to go, Bella?” Rose asked. It occurred to me that she and Alice probably had a kind of tag team deal going on to make sure I wasn’t in an uncomfortable situation with Edward.

I’d been so weak around him before. My own friends didn’t even trust me.

I couldn’t hate, though. I was ready to go, and I told Rose as much.

We wandered to the driveway, Edward and I straggling toward the back of the group.

He tugged at my back pocket, slowing me down. “I wish you’d talk to me.”

My heart fluttered. Confused by my conflicted feelings, I hesitated. “I…want to talk to you.”

“Can I come over later?”

I stopped short, giving him a look. “To my house?”

He smiled crookedly. “To your window.”

“No,” I said, laughing in spite of myself. “That’s not happening.”

“You used to like it,” he said, smiling wider.

“I used to love it,” I said, shaking my head. “But no. I’ll be around, Edward. Just call me or something.”

He didn’t say anything, and I tried not to act like I was waiting for him to as I walked away.

The angst and heartbreak in this story almost did me in as I read it as a WIP. I wanted them to “get back together already” as the heat from their UST radiated off the screen and made my eyes sting. This story shows that Rochelle Allison is a master of the slow burn… and I loved every scorching minute. I think you will, too.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6268757/1/Starry-Eyed-Inside

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*Reviews by AllyVera*

Air

Made by FamouslySo

Made by famouslyso

Air ~ Edward and Bella meet at a summer barbeque. A story about – what else – falling for someone, hard. Once a WitFit.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 19 – Words: 29,799 – Reviews: 3,137 – Favs: 2,304 – Follows: 1,111 – Updated: 03-31-11 – Published: 03-12-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6817781

I have a terrible confession, a few days ago, I was a Rochelle Allison virgin.  (Imagine confessing that to the other members of the FicSix! *facepalm*).  I am glad to say though, now – I have popped my cherry in style with Air.

If I had to pick one word that summed up Air for me it would be “Poetry” because that is what the story felt like to me.

Bella is a 19 year old college student who meets 29 year old Edward at a barbeque, and she is instantly enamored with him (clever girl).  They start a relationship and it all sounds very straightforward – but it isn’t.  What makes this story so captivating is both Bella and Edward’s characters.  Edward is gorgeous, hard-working and just… good.  But Edward carries his cards very close to his chest, and Bella finds him hard to read – which makes things very interesting.  At just shy of 30k words, it is great short read, but with enough substance to make you feel like you have read a full feature fic.

Excerpt ~ First Sight…

“”There’s an empty seat right there, if you want.”

I turned toward the unfamiliar voice.

“Oh…that’s okay. I kind of like standing,” I said, setting Irina’s cup down on a nearby table.

“So do I,” he said, his eyes on me for just a second before they flickered away. It was hard to tell, but I thought maybe they were blue, or green. He was good looking.

Like really good looking, and definitely older than me.”


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6817781/1/Air

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Curtains

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

Curtains ~ Sometimes, no matter how much you love someone, they won’t love you back. Or maybe they just can’t… right now. This is the WitFit plot “Curtains”, novella-style

Rated: Fiction M – English – Angst/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 25 – Words: 26,167 – Reviews: 1,677 – Favs: 1,031 – Follows: 306 – Updated: 05-27-10 – Published: 05-14-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5970165

Being a true angst lover, I was captured by Curtain’s summary, and I just had a feeling I would love it – and I did.

Edward is very hard to like in this story, he seems exceedingly uncaring and cavalier at first, and even as the staunch Edward-lover I am, I wanted to grab Bella and tell her to cut her losses…but as always, there are two sides to every coin, and Rochelle weaves a beautiful tale for these two who have been both broken in different ways by the same tragedy.

I loved watching the transformations that these two made over the duration of the story – they needed time to grow and mature, but also to gain perspective – I loved how Rochelle shows us that with her gorgeous words.

Excerpt of Rochelle’s beautiful words from Chapter One…

“Gently, these ivory curtains lift and lower, silent in the steady breeze. Because I don’t sleep, I watch them, every night, every morning, studying the play of outside light as it filters in. I know the time of night-and-day better than any mountain man, traveler, wanderer or astronomer.

Always so silent here, the opposite of my room, where the inkyblack sucks out all color and I have no curtains but boring blinds, and I must close the window tight because the neighbor’s dog never ever stops barking and the street light glares belligerently inside.

None of that keeps me up-there is insomnia regardless-but it rattles my nerves and so I shut the window to keep it all out. And then because it’s pointless I leave, even though every night I decide I will forgo calling Edward, asking him to meet me at the end of the street for a ride to his house.

Every night I determine to stay home and every night I decide to leave.

Here, in Edward’s naturally hued bedroom, cream and tan and beige and wood, it’s dreamy (though I can’t dream) and sweet (although his refusal to touch me is bitter).


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5970165/1/Curtains

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*Review by Midnight Cougar*

Stolen 

Stolen by Rochelle Allison

*Made by famouslyso*

Stolen ~ He stole her heart, and then he stole her father’s fortune. Love and forgiveness are nice concepts, but highly improbable. Right? Drama, romance, action, and a heavy sprinkling of the good stuff.

Follow/FavoriteRated: Fiction M - English – Drama/Romance – Bella & Edward -  Chapters: 4 – Words: 8,609 – Reviews: 563 - Favs: 424 – Follows: 718 – Updated: 03-28-13 – Published: 03-15-13 – id: 9101669

I was so thrilled when I learned we were featuring Rochelle Allison today, as I’ve always enjoyed her poetic form of writing, and knew straight away that I wanted to review her newest story, Stolen.  As with all her fics I’ve read, I was immediately drawn into the plot in chapter one where the labels of both Drama and Romance are deftly presented in lovely literary form and vivid descriptions…

My window’s wide open, the air more balmy than cool. The delicate white sheers hanging from it billow in the breeze, dreamy and soft, as does the mosquito netting around my bed. It’s very romantic, all of it, making me wish my room at home was like this.

Outside, across a lawn and down a soft slope of sand, waves crash quietly, pushing and pulling at the shore. Sometimes, when the wind shifts, I can smell the freshness and salt. The tide’s come in by now, and I think fleetingly of the sandcastles we built. …

Fingers clasped lightly behind your neck, I pull myself closer still. Your fingertips trail up and down my sides, making me shiver a little, tickled. I’m nervous, in a good way. Anticipating.

Mutually fascinated.

“You’re beautiful.”

I look at your mouth, your lips. It’s you who’s beautiful, but I say, “Thank you.”

You shake your head slightly, and then come at me with another kiss, angling your mouth against mine so that we fit. Your hands spread over my back, fingertips tracing my shoulder blades and down, rough against smooth, stopping right where my bikini bottoms start. And then back up, warm and welcome.

The purple-grey of dusk darkens into night, and I reach over to turn my bedside lamp on.

In the new light, we stare at each other for just a second before the kissing resumes, and now it intensifies. The sexy, meandering making out of before morphs into something passionate and driven, and I can feel you now, trying to pull back like always.

The serene setting is a beach house in beautiful Miami, Florida, but the romance that so passionately flows through the characters here, quickly turns to intense drama when Bella wakes up to people, other than her lover, in her bedroom…

“What’s going on?” I ask.

“You see anything out of the ordinary last night? Anybody hanging out by the beach entrance or something?”

“No, not really,” I say, shaking my head. “Did something happen?”

“The safe,” he says, sighing loudly. “Somehow someone got in to it last night…or maybe this morning . Took everything.”

*gasp* Who did it, and where’s Edward?!

We now have four engrossing chapters, detailing how this all started, how our destined couple actually just met only two weeks prior to the first chapter, and how it all might have been a ruse?!  So exciting, enjoy!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9101669/1/Stolen

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*Reviews by Cared*

*Made by Cared*

*Made by Cared*

Own O/S

Own ~ When you’re meant to be in someone’s life, fate has ways of placing you where you need to be. Bella and Edward save each other in more ways than one. M for a little bit of language.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Words: 12,185 – Reviews: 152 – Favs: 193 – Follows: 117 – Published: 03-03-13 – Status: Complete – id: 9067565

Some things are just meant to be.  Take this sweet baker Bella and chivalrous Edward for instance; they are just meant to be…meant to be together.

The summary declares Bella and Edward save each other in more ways than one, and that is so true. They meet quite dramatically when Edward heroically rescues Bella from certain death in a house fire.

Voices call out, firemen probably. My rescuer’s voice is closer, but no less urgent as I struggle to swat the black spots dancing in front of my eyes. And then my chest closes in on itself and my head starts to swim, blackness trying to swallow me whole, like Jonah and the whale.

But his eyes are green. Even in the dark I can see that. Reflections of flames flicker and dance in them, and for a moment, they’re all I see.

While this is a blatantly obvious example of Edward literally saving Bella, the other ways they subtly save each other are gently woven into this sweet story, making it a pleasure to read.

This gorgeous one-shot entry in the Ho Hey Contest is a perfect bite size yet satisfying fic to enjoy with a cup of coffee.  Read it – because some things are just meant to be!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9067565/1/Own

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With or Without You

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

With or Without You ~ Edward and Bella were once high school sweethearts. Years later, their lives converge unexpectedly, forcing Bella to deal with and accept things she’s long since tried to move past. This story started with “Trampoline”, once a WitFit prompt.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 34 – Words: 43,697 – Reviews: 4,020 – Favs: 2,361 – Follows: 1,220 – Updated: 07-24-10 – Published: 03-10-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5807324

I’m an Edward and Bella girl.  Call me a sucker for that instant attraction, an inexplicable connection, obstacles overcome and a HEA, and I won’t mind.  Funny thing is, that’s not this fic, at all.  When the story opens, Edward is married to Tanya, and Bella is mourning the loss of her husband Jacob – yet I love it.  It’s a bit of a puzzle why I do, but there is a straightforward answer: With or Without You is penned by the extremely talented Rochelle Allison.

Edward and Bella were highschool sweethearts and together they experienced first love – first everything.  Unfortunately, as so often happens, there is heartbreak for the young couple.  Over ten years pass and it’s just an average day in the life of Bella Black, she calls out to her new neighbour asking if his son can play with her daughter. That innocent request heralds the start of a change in their lives…

Laying my lemonade down, I stand up and wander over to the little boy, all the while glancing over to his new house so that I can meet his parents too.

“Did you want to play?” I ask him, recognizing desire in his grassgreen eyes.

“Yes, please,” he lisps, his eyes steadfast on the prize.

 I look again and this time I see who I assume is his father and I squint, holding my hand over my eyes because the sun is so so bright out here, away from the shelter of my oak.

“Excuse me,” I call. “Is it all right if your son plays with my daughter? She just got a new trampoline, and…”

He turns around, smiling, only his smile dies when he sees me, and then so does mine.

He was the one, forever ago, that broke my heart.

You slowly learn about their shared past, and yes that is nice; but the real beauty of this tale is having the chance to relish being privy to Bella and Edward tentatively reaching out to each other in the present, and later the anticipation of and hope for a shared future.

“Play me something,” I say, asking before I’ve really thought about it.

He starts right away, a tune that’s so familiar that when he starts to quietly sing along I find myself singing too –and I don’t ever sing.

It’s one of my favorite songs.

In another time and place, a parallel universe, we would be in this place, living and loving this song together. It’s sort of surreal to be sitting outside with him while he plays it, plays it well, the air brisk and the stars scattered stark and silver across the sky.

At the end of the song my cheeks are wet and I remember where I am. I wipe my face on my sleeves and get up to leave. He pulls my arm, the first time he’s touched me on purpose in eleven years, and I freeze.

“Are you happy?”

There is both relief and loss when his hand falls away. “Are you?”

“Sometimes,” he says.

“Same with me.” The cold is getting to me, the way it always does after awhile, and I shiver. “I’m going to try and sleep. You should try too.”

“I will.” And he does, I think.

The incredibly well-written and complex Bella and Edward are easy to connect with, they wring empathy from your soul, and their messy situation pulls at your heartstrings and demands your understanding. While the premise of With or Without You is enjoyable, it’s the emotions – so rich and so real – both the ones so beautifully portrayed and the ones those precious words evoke in you, that transform this fic into something special – something irresistible.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5807324/1/With-or-Without-You


http://twilighted.net/viewuser.php?uid=5148

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*Made by wickedcicada"

*Made by wickedcicada”

Volition: “It’s Belfast, N.Ireland and the year is 1972. Bella’s worried about her brother and his best friend, Edward, and their dangerous involvement in the Irish Republican Army. Is it really wise to fall in love with a rebel? Rated M.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 31 – Words: 158,381 – Reviews: 4424 – Updated: 8-17-10 – Published: 6-5-09 – Bella & Edward – Complete”

I love Irishward! To read my thoughts on the best Irishward ever written – click here: fanfiction-fridays-irishward


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5115662/1/Volition


http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=8458

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Watch Me O/S

*Made by Cared*

*Made by Cared*

Watch Me ~ Bella’s obsession with wristwatches & her preoccupation with the Sky God next door coalesce in a serendipitous way. Birthday onehsot for Michelle.

Rated: Fiction M - English – Romance – Bella & Edward – Words: 6,332 – Reviews: 224 - Favs: 437 – Follows: 129 – Published: 02-27-12 – Status: Complete – id: 7876788

I previously reviewed this brilliant One Shot in April 2012. *Fanning self at just the thought of it!*

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* Reviews by Wiltshire Glo*

Rise

*Made by famouslyso*

*Made by famouslyso*

Rise ~ Bella is a bad boy’s girl, living a life she no longer wants. She’s trapped, until one of the things that keeps her confined – her bodyguard – becomes the very thing that could set her free.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Drama/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 26 – Words: 57,852 – Reviews: 4,622 – Favs: 1,720 – Follows: 1,273 – Updated: 11-13-12 – Published: 10-15-12 – Status: Complete – id: 8612205

Rise begins with a wistful, defeated Bella wallowing in luxury, numbed to reality and isolated in loneliness and despair. Her lack of emotion is far more poignant than if she was raging against her beautiful prison…and the life she can’t escape. She has long since accepted the futility of her situation. Her sadness seeps off the page.

Back at the villa, things are as I left them. He sits outside, a little king of his own making, surrounded by sycophants. They drink and smoke and talk shit and play poker, all the while making deals and perfecting plans. Local hired girls, dressed minimally, sway in and out of the scene, making sure these fools want for nothing: cigars, booze, pills, physical release. It took one day of relaxing by the pool for me to realize it wasn’t very relaxing at all, which is why the beach became my chosen place of solace.

Not that it matters. After tomorrow, we’ll be back in the States, and this place will be another memory.

A leggy redhead with tan, freckled skin and the nicest breasts I’ve ever seen struts by with a drink and a plate of food. I watch her walk straight to him, stopping only when she’s nearly on top of him. She places the tray carefully in an empty spot on the table, leaning down so that he can whisper in her ear. Her lips curve and she straightens, nodding.
I’m still staring when he looks up and sees me. We share a look: him, neutral, me, neutral.

I don’t care what he does. In the end, it’s me that warms his bed, decorates his arm, spends his money. I loved him once, but that was before. Way before, when the people we were, were…people we were. I scarcely remember that me or that him. I’d leave, but it’s not that simple.

I know because I tried to leave once.

He promised he’d kill me if I ever tried again.

Fear not! By the end of the first chapter Rochelle offers us hope, even if Bella can’t recognise her bodyguard for what he is just yet…

“Stop it.” I shove away, irritated. Masen’s concern is false, a pretend byproduct of his job. Alec hired him one year ago to be my keeper, although that isn’t what either of them would call it. Bodyguard. Driver. Whatever.

His face hardens. “Alec sent me up to check on you.”

“Why? He seems just fine down there.”

“You’ve been up here for hours.”

Have I? I glance at the window again, then at the clock beside the bed. Six o’clock. Guess I lost track of time. Shrugging, I step away, resisting the urge to wipe my nose.

“Let’s go down,” Masen says, touching my arm.

I pull away, not liking the way it feels when he touches me. I’m attracted to him, and sometimes I think he’s attracted to me, but these men are all the same. They speak only the languages of violence and commodity, leaving little room for things like love and affection.

His beauty is irrelevant. The finest faces can hide the most rotten souls.

I’d say Rise is beautifully written, but you know that already – we’re talking Rochelle Allison here, that’s a given! What I can tell you is that you’ll be holding your breath, wiping a few tears and smiling with joy as Bella reclaims her life and Edward gives her the courage to feel and live again.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8612205/1/Rise

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Embrace

*Made by Cared*

*Made by Cared*

EmbraceEdward and Bella are neighbors, but they really can’t stand one another. Snark and hi-jinks. Borderline crack-fic; if you don’t have a (silly) sense of humor, move along. Once a WitFit.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 14 – Words: 15,347 – Reviews: 2,450 – Favs: 762 – Follows: 865 – Updated: 11-29-12 – Published: 11-17-12 – id: 8710721

If you’re looking for angst, look away now, this is fun – until it isn’t! What starts off as snide notes between neighbours about garbage bins, naked sunbathing and gates being left open, quickly escalates into who has the upper hand or who can pull the best prank. With chapters written in both points of view, He Said; She Said, we really do get a flavour of their stubbornness and determination to ‘win’.

He Said

“I said could you not do that right now! It’s seven a.m.!”

“You’ll have to speak louder!” she yelled.

I made the sign for “time out”, hoping she’d get it.

She did. She leaned down and turned her weedwacker off, then turned her face back to me expectantly. Her cheeks were flushed, probably from exertion.

What a weirdo. Kind of cute, but a weirdo.

“I was asking if you could do this at another time,” I said slowly, enunciating. “It’s way too early and it’s Sunday.”

Bella frowned, shaking her head. “Sorry, Eddie, no can do. I work all day so this is the only time I have to work on the yard.”

Inside, I was seething. Outside, I maintained a calm façade.

“I see.”

She shrugged and turned away, revving the engine.

I ducked back inside and slammed the window shut. First the snippy little notes. Then she wouldn’t share her cookies, and damn they’d smelled good. Now her flagrant disregard for other people’s sleeping patterns.

I was an easy going guy but this was getting ridiculous.

The doorbell rang.

I made my way downstairs, yawning as I opened the door.

Little Ms. Sunshine stood on my porch, hands clasped behind her back.

“I’m done with the weedwacker.”

“Oh, okay.” I nodded, pleasantly surprised. Maybe she wasn’t so heartless after all.

She smiled, and spun around, her cute little ass looking extra cute in those cute little shorts.

I climbed the stairs and got back into bed. Sleep was definitely off the table, but I could catch up on some reading for sure. Peace and quiet had never been so appreciated.

She said

I put the weedwacker in its designated spot and latched the shed.

Then I crossed the yard and went into the garage, where my red and black John Deere riding mower was.

If he thought the weedwacker was loud, wait’ll he got a load of this!

Sucker.

Written with Rochelle’s sweet touch, we are drawn to feel the same emotions as Edward and Bella’s friends: passing from amusement to bewilderment and more than a tad of frustration. I found myself hoping that the feuding neighbours would call a truce and recognise what both of them were denying. Would either admit defeat or would someone get hurt? Ultimately, was it really worth it? Well, the story is so worth it, it’s complete at 14 chapters and moves at a quick pace. It’s a treat that gives some giggles and some “oh, no!” moments, but let’s face it, it’s Edward and Bella, written by Rochelle, what’s not to love?


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8710721/1/Embrace

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http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1723736/Rochelle-Allison


http://roglows-here.livejournal.com/

Rochelle’s stories can also be found at A Different Forest

We want to thank Rochelle for taking the time to share her thoughts with us, and for giving us the opportunity to revisit some wonderful tales.  As Rochelle has written an amazing 24 stories we have only shown you a sample here today; there is plenty more to discover. 

Please tell us what you’ve been reading this week and share your favourite reads from Rochelle.

The FicSix 

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New To You Fics

Fan Fiction FridaysWelcome, today we have a cache of New To You Fics for your reading pleasure ~ what we’ve recently started for new WIPs and an exciting contest affiliation. But first we’d like to share with you a special previous rec that is now complete. It’s very near and dear to our hearts because it was partially written by a member of our FicSix ~ Ilovealion! 

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Pure Revelations by Georgialion

*Originally rec’d on FanFiction Fridays – Guest Review Week Nov 25/11  by Cared.*

*Made by Melee03*

*Made by Melee03*

Pure Revelations ~ E & B share a class at UDub, but not much else. She’s shy & reserved as she adjusts to a new life. He’s angry & isolated because of his upbringing in the mysterious and secretive LaVerrot Estates. Fate brings them together, but will their love be allowed?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Suspense – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 95 – Words: 644,631 – Reviews: 3,467 – Favs: 1,278 – Follows: 1,301 – Updated: 01-29-13 – Published: 01-30-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6699731

Pure Revelations

Pure pride – that’s what this review is all about.

The FicSix are rapidly becoming a close knit group of friends with a great deal of respect for one another, and when one of us achieves something you can hear the celebration echoing around the globe.

Today, we have a special reason for celebration: one of our members, the tiny girl with a huge heart Ilovealion, together with her Southern Belle girlfriend Georgiaedwardlover, has completed the fabulous story Pure Revelations – and we want to tell you all about it.

Rereading the first two chapters of PR is an exercise in awe, because 95 chapters and over a year later, you can see how expertly everything for this mysterious tale was set up from the word go. Edward can barely restrain his fire and drive in the restrictive setting we find him in. Frustration with the strictures of an environment he nevertheless respects makes him almost petulant. He appreciates all he has been given and loves those close to him with the brooding moodiness of Midnight Sun Edward, but you get a real sense of the man bursting to emerge.

Bella is similarly restrained on the cusp of adulthood. She quietly and wryly observes her family and friends with an outward passivity that you just know masks a rumbling volcano of power and protectiveness.

Here is the moment Edward sets his poor, sexually frustrated, celibate eyes upon Bella:

The words around me start to fade as I focus in on the beauty walking behind the troll named Lauren.

She’s a vision, with long shiny hair the color of forbidden dark chocolate and a stunning face with just a hint of color, like she’s blushing. She watches her feet as she slowly climbs the stairs. Her arms are folded over her ample chest and holding several books, a lemonade, and an apple. She has her lower lip pulled in between her teeth as she timidly follows Lauren and Jessica to a table. As the troll and slut plop down and spread out enough food for five people, the brown-headed goddess sits down carefully in her chair. She allows her hair to drape over one side, shielding her face from her tablemates, but not from me. I’m captivated by the flawless, fair skin that covers her delicate features. It looks silky, touchable…kissable.

I don’t know what it is about this girl, but I’m having trouble pulling my eyes away from her form. As the girls next to her talk continuously, she pulls out a text book and sips on her lemonade. I watch the liquid flow across her pouty lips and imagine how soft they must feel. What I wouldn’t give to…

“Hello, Earth to Edward,” I barely hear as I’m slowly drawn away from her and out of my stupor.

As I turn to reconnect with my tablemates, I realize that every eye is on me. They look stunned or pissed or something.

How long have I been watching her?

Emmett says, “What the hell, man? You were in some kind of voodoo trance.”

Emmett? When did Emmett get here?

“You were staring at the hobgoblin and her sidekicks,” Jasper laughs.

Why is Jasper laughing at me?

“Were you entranced by the fat ass, the skinny legs, or the big nose? I mean, seriously dude, I’ve never seen you all slack jawed and drooling like that.”

Wait, was I really drooling?

And *poof*! Here begins the epic battle of Edward’s conscience with the python in his pants.

Yes, there is sex, and sexiness, in spades, don’t you worry. There is also humour and challenge, romance and angst, and anything else you could possibly want in a story. But the biggest thing Pure Revelations has to offer – even bigger than Edward’s python – is a twisting, turning, unexpected and mind-blowing mystery in an exceptionally well-crafted plot. You will be tearing at your sex-hair trying to figure out the revelations ahead of time.

The story is told in alternating POVs, with Edward written by Ilovealion and Bella by Georgiaedwardlover. Together this pair have worked incredibly hard to bring us Pure Pleasure as Georgialion. Please join us in giving this story all the love it truly deserves.

~ Gingerandgreen

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I am so thrilled for Ilovealion and georgiaedwardlover, and congratulate them on a job very well done! Pure Revelations is all that was described above by my counterpart, Gingerandgreen, so without repeating her lovely sentiments and apt descriptions of the story, I want to say that one thing that stood out for me in this enthralling tale is how the characters are so well defined. They really drew me into the story. From Edward’s intense emotions and views on life, which I felt as my own through his musings, to Bella’s quiet yet strong reserve; I loved reading them and how they were intricately woven into this complicated storyline.

It was also in the presentation of their complex personas that I was captivated. Right from chapter 1 when Edward is describing his gated life, I felt like I was there with him, experiencing his world and its effect, and what he felt like he was missing from his life. And then with Bella…she was a character that really grew, for me, and was the epitome of literary character development. I loved this Bella, and what Georgiaedwardlover says in her A/N in chapter 2 that she wanted to accomplish with her Bella is exactly what I saw happening before my very eyes, and it was extraordinary to read:“The Pure Revelations Bella is shy and insecure, but, believe me, she has reason to be. Her character will be transformed from a tentative, very private, almost formal person to one who is open, hopeful and fun. It’s amazing what love does for her.”

I encourage you to read this epic story, involving lots of romance, humour and suspense to keep you reading! I just know you’ll fall in love with everything wonderful that Pure Revelations has to offer in an Edward and Bella Twilight fan fiction! That special connection we look for is brought forth so well through these sweet characters. Enjoy!

~ Midnight Cougar


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6699731/1/Pure-Revelations


http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2618600/georgialion


http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=15084&chapter=1

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*Review by AllyVera*

Polaroid by RockRaven244

Polaroid by RockRaven244

Polaroid by RockRaven244

Polaroid ~ A glimpse, a snapshot, a frame, an image…this is how they come. Some a blur, some crystal clear; like a Polaroid. She told me not to interfere, to live life, and love my family. And I do…most of the time.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 9 – Words: 15,566 – Reviews: 179 – Favs: 82 – Follows: 119 – Updated: 02-09-13 – Published: 01-03-13 – id: 8871334

Sometimes browsing FanFiction.net aimlessly can be the most rewarding experience.  About two weeks ago, I discovered this little gem by RockRaven244 called Polaroid. I was sucked in by the summary, and then addicted by the time I got to the end of the first chapter.

Polaroid’s topic has been touched on before, but the premise of the story is very unique.  Bella has the gift of seeing the future, but at times it is a heavy burden for her to carry.  Imagine ‘seeing’ your current boyfriend leaving you and marrying someone else!  It really makes you re-think calling it a gift!

After relocating for her job, Bella meets Mr Masen (Edward’s grandfather) – and you get the feeling right away that Mr Masen knows more than he lets on about Bella’s talents.

Edward, like Bella, is relocating as well – but for Edward he is coming home to his family with a heart that needs mending.

The mystery that RockRaven244 has woven into this story is palpable, and I can’t wait to see how it all turns out – you certainly get the feeling that there is a higher power bringing Edward and Bella together.

My normal M.O is to show you Bella’s first sight of Edward, but I am breaking tradition here and bringing you her first sight of a different yet equally as appealing Edward – his grandfather.

From chapter six

“The man that walked toward me was a very handsome, older gentleman; very handsome. He was probably around six foot two inches, greying hair and beard, and beautiful, blue eyes that were twinkling.

“Edward Masen, pleased to make your acquaintance,” he said, in a slight southern drawl, reaching out to take my hand and kissing the back of it softly.

Why am I breathless?

His hold lingered, and a flash of images hit me at once.

The woman with auburn hair in a wedding dress, laughing, leaning in for a kiss, standing in the window with a baby, sunning on a boat deck…

On and on they went. The woman and baby were in every image, and each one was tinged with Love.

I was breathless.

I squeezed his hand, and swayed slightly.

“Are you alright, my dear?” He asked, wrapping an arm around me and sitting me in a chair.

“Charlotte, darlin’, a glass of water, please?”

“Of course,” she replied, and her heels echoed in the hallway.

I reached a hand to my forehead, I felt warm. And the images were still flashing in front of me, non-stop. It almost seemed like Mr. Masen was pushing them at me. But that’s crazy, right?”

I hope you enjoy watching Polaroid develop as much as I will! (Pardon the pun)…


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8871334/1/Polaroid

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*Reviews by Wiltshire Glo*

Let it Be Me by ChantieMaya

Made by forthelongestday

*Made by forthelongestday*

Let It Be Me ~ A new guest at Bella’s hotel turns out to be a ghost from her past. He doesn’t seem to remember what happened between them, while she is being plagued by bad memories. Edward feels a deep connection to that beautiful, angry girl, but she seems to shy away from any male attention.

WARNING: under age drinking, drug use, assault, dark themes. MA, OOC, ExB Twilight, M, English,
Angst & Romance, chapters: 40

Imagine the very person who conjures up both the best and worst moments of your teenage stupidity appearing right before your eyes. Heart-stopping moment, right?

Bella stared at him in shock. Her heart was silent in her chest for a few beats before it started to stutter, and then race. She felt her hands starting to shake, and an involuntary urge to giggle hysterically nearly choked her.

She knew this man, she knew his face as well as she knew her own. His hair was lighter and longer than she remembered. It fell over his forehead while he ate. He was sporting a thick, neatly-trimmed beard and wore a light gray hoodie and a black leather jacket.

He hadn’t even looked at her when they shook hands, but the voice had been enough to give him away; his deep, low, somewhat hoarse voice. He still spoke as quietly as he used to. She knew this man. She had been pining away for him throughout most of her teenage life, even into her twenties.

Now imagine that very significant person doesn’t even recognise you. How would you react? ChantieMaya gets to the heart of it and makes me feel every emotion: the shock, disbelief, anger and sadness in Let it Be Me.

A beautiful, poignant and at times very sad look at the relationship ten years on, with some very well placed flashbacks to Bella’s seventeen year old self….. Edward was in band and she was a fan and what happened between them shaped her and impacted on her life choices. Edward is living with regrets and rebuilding his memories slowly. Together they’re trying to heal old wounds.

With about ten chapters to go I’m still unsure how it’s going to pan out – I’m a bit of an angst wimp – but this beautifully crafted story has me hoping for the best. I was unable to resist waiting until it’s completed before reading, so please join me and we can journey to the end together!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803917/1/Let-It-Be-Me


http://letitbeme2.wordpress.com/

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Let Me by iambeagle

Let Me
Let Me ~ A story about two friends, a three-day music festival, and stupid love.

EPOV  Twilight, M, English, Romance & Humor, chapters: 3, Edward & Bella

Just three chapters in and I’m rubbing my hands together in glee when I think about this story. Written with a delightful lightness and with such a witty dialogue, even thinking about it makes me chuckle. It’s told from Edward POV, and just between us ladies, I’m in love with him already.

Chapter one finds Edward and his friends, Jasper and Bella, planning for the Austin City Limits music festival…Edward is clearly an unashamed music snob-much to Jasper’s despair, but Bella’s delight.

I zone back in to what he’s saying and manage to understand the gist of why he’s upset: after comparing his lineup schedule to mine, we’re only seeing three of the same bands this weekend. So when he’s at the stage where Citizen Cope is playing, I’ll be listening to Arctic Monkeys. And when he’s jamming out to Mike Posner, I’ll be entranced by Grizzly Bear.

“What’s up with that, Cullen?” he asks, staring expectantly.

Refraining from being a complete dick, I try to find a nice way of telling him he has complete shit taste in music.

“Your music taste is offensive to me.”

Well. I tried.

Jasper stares in disbelief. “What? You’re the one planning on seeing the Yeah Yeah Yeahs instead Kings of Leon tomorrow night.”

“Yeah. I know. Kings of Leon’s recent music makes me cringe.”

He pulls that face again, the one that suggests he’s about to cry. I don’t point it out this time, because I’m trying to be a good friend.

“How can you do this to me?” he questions quietly.

Bella and Edward have an easy friendship which has previously crossed boundaries, if you know what I mean *waggles eyebrows*! They smoke pot, drink beer and chill out-the story evokes memories of lazy days when friends and music were all there was to live for….and we haven’t even got to the festival yet!

With chapters already pre-written Meg iambeagle is posting regularly and I’m in for the ride as I know I won’t be disappointed. It’s a perfect story to get us in the mood for summer and all those hot, sticky festivals…care to join me?


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8990126/1/Let-Me

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*Reviews by Cared*

These four fabulous fics have three things in common. The most obvious being they are all first published in 2013.  Secondly, this selection of All Human and Alternative Universe stories share Romance as a genre – albeit admittedly this is paired with Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Family or Suspense. There is another common denominator, for me the most important one, and indeed the reason I just have to share these stories with you: I hadn’t reached the end of the first chapter before I knew I was hooked. I love that feeling you get when you realise you have just taken that exciting first step on what you know is going to be a memorable journey.

Made By Cared

*Made by Cared*

A Crack in the Door ~ He’s a lonely bartender on Cape Cod and she’s a girl who no one has ever seen. Together they form a tentative friendship through a crack between their doors…but will the crack open wide enough to let love in? AH rated M for adult themes and situations.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Hurt/Comfort – Edward & Bella – Words: 5,374 – Reviews: 18 – Favs: 24 – Follows: 49 – Published: 01-04-13 – id: 8874295

This story is only one chapter in but straight away I loved the feel of it. It’s told in EPOV, but it’s one of those stories where you feel you are inside the head of the narrator.  A Crack In The Door, while set in modern day, somehow exudes the vibe of a black and white movie. I wrote this in my FFN review, fully thinking the author would question my sanity. Imagine my surprise when janewithay replied by saying, “The black and white movies of my grandparents’ youth were the inspiration for this particular narrative.”The interesting opening thoughts from Edward…

I saw her for the first time when I ran out to get maraschino cherries for the bar. I put cherries on the order last week and they arrived on Wednesday same as always. But by Sunday they were history; a casualty of three bachelorette parties where celebratory women of all shapes, sizes and ages had tossed back over ninety Cosmopolitan’s between them within a span of two hours.Now I blame this Cosmo shit totally on the Sex and the City crap that all the girls were crazy about a few years back. Honestly, these damn drinks have been the cause of more break ups, hook ups, and knock ups over the past ten years than I care to count. Because let’s face it, they’re nothing but pure alcohol with just a tiny splash of cranberry juice to make them look pretty. That is if you know how to make them right. And believe me… I know how to make them right. I’ve been a bar-keep ever since my old man died and left me this joint. It’s what I do and I do it well, even though it was his dream and not mine. But that’s a whole other story.

Join me in peeping through the crack in the door into the interesting world of Cape Cod and the lives of Edward and Bella.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8874295/1/A-Crack-in-the-Door

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Heart of Stone by coldplaywhore

Heart of Stone by coldplaywhore

Heart of Stone ~ Edward, in an effort to make use of his ability to read minds, uses his gifts to rid the truly evil people in the world and protect the innocent. Unfortunately, he never expected her to come along and change his life so drastically. Nothing will be the same. AU Vampward.

Rated M Rated: Fiction M – English – Drama/Romance – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 11 – Words: 14,280 – Reviews: 886 - Favs: 265 – Follows: 439 – Updated: 02-19-13 – Published: 01-04-13 – id: 8874407

Over the last few years the beloved character of Edward, in all his multi faceted and varied fic incarnations, has evoked the full gamut of emotions in me. Yet it is rare for him to stir my sympathies as this Edward has.  He struggles with who – or perhaps I should say what – he is, and we are introduced to him in the state of confusion that canon Edward refers to as his rebellious period.

He makes a split second decision to do what he thinks is the right thing for an unfortunate stranger, never dreaming his impulsive act of kindness will have major unforeseen ramifications for more than the two of them.

Vigilanteward in action…

The long haired brunette struggles and tries to cry out, but she’s unable to from the force of his grip on her throat. Marcus slams her head back against the brick and watches, a satisfied smirk on his face, as she tumbles to the ground lifelessly.

Edward pounces forward, his arm wrapping around Marcus’ neck as he flies through the air, twisting until a loud crack is heard. Edward shows no remorse as he drops the unresponsive body to the ground and checks for a pulse, a twinge of satisfaction coursing through him when he finds none. Though his throat burns slightly for the taste of human blood, Edward refrains.

He can’t let himself be tempted.

Coldplaywhore says this is as canon as she can ever get, – That’s why Rose is a bitch, Esme is a sweetheart and Alice is certifiably insane. :) –  and that Heart of Stone plays along with some of the themes from Midnight Sun. While some parallels are fairly obvious, there is no unforgettable walk into the canteen, no biology class, no blood typing – in fact no high school. Yet it’s canon in a million other delightful ways, and quite perversely and cleverly non-canon in others. Read Heart of Stone for the pleasure of discovering them for yourself.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8874407/1/Heart-of-Stone

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Snare by Raum 

*Made by Raum*

*Made by Raum*

Snare ~ The lives of Charlie and Bella Swan were devastated when Renée was murdered by a serial killer: The Drainer. Charlie, a former FBI profiler, is convinced that the killer is a vampire, and that those creatures are real. Nobody believes him, till the day he captures one of the undead. AU.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Suspense – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 3 – Words: 8,555 – Reviews: 191 – Favs: 110 – Follows: 187 – Updated: 02-11-13 – Published: 01-28-13 – id: 8955111

TBH, I didn’t need to read the first chapter of Snare to know that this fic was going to capture my imagination. For me, seeing the author name of Raum on the new story alert is cause for excitement in itself. Why? Because Raum never fails to deliver characters filled with humanity, regardless of whether they are human or not.

We enter the story as Charlie receives quite an intriguing phone call from an ex-colleague.  He has a lead for Charlie that later confirms the off-the-wall theory that has become his obsession in his relentless pursuit of his wife’s killer. Amazingly, and with single-minded determination, he experiments until he discovers something to level the playing field between vampire and human – for when he catches one that is…

Under a fallen beam there was a young man – but not the corpse of a man, like he might have expected. He was flat on his stomach, surrounded by debris, his clothes shredded and stained with soot. Charlie stepped slowly toward him. He checked the tracks the boy had left behind himself and surmised that he must have crawled until the beam had fallen on him, blocking him under its weight. His gaze moved to the boy’s face: a mop of unruly brown hair covered his forehead, and his half-closed eyes were an amber hue that reminded Charlie of a snake’s gaze. As he took another step toward him, the young man uttered a growl. There was a desperation in the sound that brought to mind a wounded animal, and wounded he was, judging by the long gash that had almost severed his head from his neck. Charlie froze when he looked closely at the wide cut, his heart pounding even faster than before.

It’s obvious already at only three chapters in, that the premise of Snare is both unique and intriguing; the compelling characters are written with immense depth of feeling, and the relationships with subtlety.  Believe me when I tell you that I’m well and truly snared!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8955111/1/Snare

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The Workings of Fate by RosieRathbone

*Made by RosieRathbone*

*Made by RosieRathbone*

The Workings of Fate ~ 10 years ago, Edward was hopelessly in love with someone he couldn’t have – out-of-reach, classmate, Bella. But when his 7yr old son is the reason they meet again, will Fate help this single father and give him a second chance?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Family – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 11 – Words: 29,688 – Reviews:563 - Favs: 352 – Follows: 614 – Updated: 02-16-13 – Published: 01-09-13 – id: 8893171

At the end of the first chapter the author tells us to visualise Rob in The Bad Mother’s Handbook as her nerdy Edward. I nodded my head in agreement, as Daniel, in all his glorious geekiness, immediately sprung to mind upon meeting this teenage Edward with his unrequited love for the fair Bella. Le sigh!

Ten years have passed before we next meet him, and while the author does not reference a specific visual for the grown man, in my head I could see RomeRob. That visual – in all it’s glorious gorgeousness, even paired with the alluring personality of a shy, amazing Daddyward – does not belong to the one who stole my heart in this fic. Cooper, the bilingual, matchmaking, animal-crazy, cute-as-pie seven-year-old, captured that. Here is his first meeting with Bella, his swimming instructor…

“My name is Cooper Cullen and my dad is called Edward.”

Okay, that was a surprise. Holy shit! Little (actually tall and lanky), geeky Edward?

Aww…I always had wondered what happened to him. Shit, he clearly contributed to the world’s population. No wonder Cooper instantly brought up the conversation of interesting animals.

I wonder if he still had that really strange hair cut… I think I should hold back from asking that for now.

“Aw yes, Edward was my friend.”

I’m currently finding it very hard to get over the fact that Edward is a father…

“My Auntie Alice and Auntie Rose said my dad liked you during high school and that he got stiff wood for you.”

Will fate, in the guise of this adorable child, bring the Cullen men a HEA with Bella?


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8893171/1/The-Workings-of-Fate

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*Review by Midnight Cougar*

The Heart of Country Contest

THE HEART OF COUNTRY CONTEST

Who doesn’t love a cowboy? And a Cowboyward, even better! Well, it is our pleasure ~ The FicSix ~ to announce that we have affiliated Fan Fiction Fridays with the The Heart of Country Contest!  Thank you to the lovely ladies, PrettyKittyArtist & Les16, who are hosting this contest, as we are immensely enjoying having plenty of swoonworthy Cowboyward one shots to read!

Visit and follow the The Heart of Country Contest on fanfiction.net so you can read all the wonderful entries. So far we have 16 to wet your country, Cowboyward whistle!

You can also see all the details regarding the contest and rules here: The Heart of Country Contest blog, as well as the Music and Picture Prompts for the authors ~ and let us tell you…y’all be wanting to see those photos as you read the entries…trust us! ;)

Important Contest Details: 

Dates: Submissions allowed between January 11, 2013 and February 22, 2013.

Voting begins February 23 through March 2, 2013.

Winners announced March 3, 2013.

Also, after the contest is over and the winners are announced, we will be dedicating a Fan Fiction Fridays post to spotlight the winners!


http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4444632/theheartofcountrycontest

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Happy Friday, and please share with us what’s been owning you in the fan fiction world lately!

The FicSix ~ Cared, AllyVera, Ilovealion, Gingerandgreen, WiltshireGlo, and Midnight Cougar

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DOWN UNDER WITH ROB ~ Part 3 ~ The Down Under Connection

Fan Fiction FridaysWe’ve enjoyed spicing up our lives with Sizzlingward; met some wonderful Authors of Oz; and our final post in the Down Under With Rob series brings us lip-to-cheek with Mateward, Sheilarella and their kissing cousins in New Zealand, England and the USA. Join us this week for some barbie-licious settings and colourful characters from all over, with one thing in common – a connection to the part of the world our favourite actor is currently wowing.

Before we begin, we thought we’d share this informative and geographically correct map of Where Rob Is Now. You’ll find him dodging kangaroos with guns. We’d love to hear from our Aussie authors – where in the world are you?

Watch out for those Kangaroos, Rob!

Watch out for those Kangaroos, Rob!

 

DOWN UNDER WITH ROB

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*Review by Wiltshire Glo*

Follow the Sun by MissWinkles (WiP)

Banner by FrozenSoldier

Banner by FrozenSoldier

Follow the Sun ~ Sometimes you have to stop thinking with your head and listen to your heart, follow which way the wind blows and dream with abandon. Because tomorrow is a brand new day, and who knows what it will bring. E/B. Fluffy as fuck, with some sweet salty love.

Twilight, M, English, Romance & Humor, chapters: 28 Bella & Edward

Do you ever feel you’re stuck in a bit of a rut, facing a future that’s quite predictable, comfortable but not really what you want? Have you ever daydreamed of taking off, feeling the sand between your toes and just living for the moment? Yeah? Me too!

So, when I started reading MissWinkles’ Follow the Sun, I could relate to Bella when she decided to take a risk and move from the comfort of her parents’ farm and walk away from Jake, ending his expectations that they would just drift into marriage. I was cheering her on as she drove away to experience a different side of life, despite her fears.

“From the veranda I can hear the waves lap lazily against the shore, whooshing and frothing as they roll up the sand and back again. I’m so used to the sound of crickets and cicadas, the sounds of the bush. But this is definitely just as nice, soothing even.

Sitting with my feet out in front of me, I watch as the last of the sun’s light slips over the horizon. The easy part is over; I made it, I’m here. Tomorrow, the hard stuff starts.

Starting a new life is scary as shit; new job, new friends, new house – but I think I’m ready.”

Reading Follow the Sun dropped me right into the blazing-sunshine world of Australian surfer boys, the friendships and easy lifestyle. I want to rave to you about the imagery, wax lyrical about how real the characters are, how I want to move to Australia and live on the beach, with the sunshine, a carefree attitude, a beer in my hand….and I don’t even like beer!

If you want to know exactly what sort of people Rob is rubbing shoulders with Down Under, read this fic as I suspect MissWinkles gives a true flavour of the people and their country. Right throughout I can only hear Aussie accents, I can only see the warm colours of the Australian coast and smile at the attitude of her countrymen. Follow the Sun may be set in an idyllic seaside town, but the characters are large as life, including Bella, as the patrons find out on her first shift behind the bar.

“”Don’t stress,” yells Rose. “There’s always some dickhead trying to pull that shit. Next time let Paul or Jasper serve his broke ass,” she says, leaning on the bar tap, waiting for some guy to order a drink. 

“Come on,” she barks at him. “This isn’t a peep show, mate. Order a drink or fuck off.”

I stifle a laugh as the pageant queen in front of me finally decides what she wants to drink.

“I’ll have a Cosmopolitan,” she says, her sparkly crown sitting lopsided on her head. With a bright pink sash over her chest, I’m guessing she’s part of the hen’s party.

“A what? A cosmopolitan?”

Jasper laughs beside me, filling a jug of beer, muscled and inked arms flexing as he pulls the tap towards him.

“Unless it’s bottled, we don’t sell that fruity shit.”

I grin sweetly at the woman at the bar. “Sweetheart, we’ve got beer, we’ve got cider, we’ve got pre-mixes, or – oh! – we’ve got beer. On no, wait, we have water.”

She huffs, and rolling her eyes points to the beer fridge behind me. “A red Breezer then. And a water.”

I plonk the red drink down in front of her, and scoop up a glass of ice and put it down next to it.

“That’s not water,” she says, looking at the glass of ice. No please, no thank you, just a sour look on her face as she taps her hideously long nails on the countertop.

“Well give it a minute or two and it will be!” I snap, slamming her change onto the bar with more force than necessary.

Jasper and Rose both laugh loudly. “You gotta hire this chick, Ben!” yells Rose over her shoulder. “She’s a fucking crack up.”"

So, “where’s Edward?” I hear you cry! He’s there in her new town of Clearwater, a guy who lives to surf, goof around with his mates and have a few beers…and just maybe entice Bella into something more. *sigh* I’ve got to say, he’s very cute!

If, like me, you’re stuck in the midst of cold, stormy weather, go ahead and lose yourself in the Australian summer and learn to surf with Edward and the guys.  At 28 chapters in, you’re not too late to join in the action, but if you’re waiting for it to complete, you’re lucky that it’s on the home straight.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522710/1/Follow-The-Sun

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*Review by AllyVera*

Chasing Victory by mpg

Chasing Victory by mpg

Chasing Victory by mpg

Chasing Victory ~ Edward is a foul-mouthed, screw-up V8 race-car driver whose career has started to race down the toilet. Bella Swan was left behind when he left to chase his dreams. Both are trying to piece together their lives. E&B/AH/AU/OOC/Lemons/Language

Rated: Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort/Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 47 – Words: 179,076 – Reviews: 2,364 – Favs: 1,065 – Follows: 569 – Updated: 08-02-10 – Published: 01-22-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5687435

Chasing Victory covers many of my passions in life… Edward, V8 Supercars, Edward, Australia, Edward… well, you get the idea. Mpg (which stands for Missile_Proof_Glass, by the way – how fantastic is that penname?) has woven a story full of twists, turns and excitement and that doesn’t pertain to Edward’s racetracks!

For those of you who don’t know, V8 Supercar Racing tends to run in the blood of families here Down Under – my whole family are fans and so are my DH’s family – so really we have no choice.  I guess it is similar to Nascar in the US – for some, it is sacred.

Straight off, I will tell you this high octane Edward is hard work. He is a hard drinking, fast driving, foul-mouthed manwhore.  At the end of chapter one he is within a hair’s breadth of losing his place on the Cullen Racing team, and when he crashes out of “The Great Race” at Bathurst, he is not a popular boy at Cullen Racing!

A snippet from chapter one..

She was waiting, looking expectantly around the crowd. For half a second I arrogantly thought she was looking for me, even though I was the reason we were no longer together. At least I had thought that, until I saw him. Then I knew she had no further interest in me. He walked towards her from the concession stand with two hot dogs in his hands and two cans of coke balanced in the crook of his arm. Her face broke into a wide smile when she saw him. His russet-coloured face returned the grin before he planted a kiss on her lips and handed off her half of the food. She had willingly come to watch a race with someone and seemed to be enjoying herself. It must have been love – she’d never come to any of my races. When I saw that I realised I should have been happy for her. I really should. After all, I’d walked out of her life. So why did I feel like ripping that fucker limb from limb?

And that was Queensland Raceway.

And that occurred immediately before I climbed in the car.

And that was the first race, ever, that ended in a DNF* for me.

And that was why the former love of my life was now the bane of my existence. Because it was her that haunted me around the race track, leeching my concentration away for vital seconds at a time.”

If we had a rating for FanFic Edwards who act like arseholes, CV Edward comes in at a solid 9 out of 10.  He does and says some almost unforgivable things, but through his arsehattedness (yes, I just made up a word) you see more and more flashes of the man behind it all – loyal, dedicated, fun-loving, hard-working and capable of the deepest of loves.

Bella appears in chapter three and their reunion is unexpected for both of them, and Edward doesn’t really handle it as well as he should, just sayin’. (Twilight’s Edward after their first Biology class springs to mind). 

You just get the feeling as you are reading that there is more to their breakup and history than meets the eye, and there is a real element of mystery around Bella and what she has been up to since Edward’s spectacular exit from her life. You do eventually get all the answers and I won’t give any of the plot away, but I will say this – CV Bella is one tough girl – she has been through hell and back.

On a side note, I found the way that mpg tells Lizzie’s (Edward’s Mum) story very heartfelt.  Lizzie is very typical of some Australian women, incredibly proud, resilient, but fragile at the same time. I was cheering for her as much as the main characters – Lizzie deserves a HEA as much as her son.

Even if you don’t like Racing Drivers or motorsport, it won’t matter, because this story is so much more than Edward’s profession – when it comes to the crux, it is really about a man who has lost who he really is, but by finding his Bella again he regains himself so he can carry on Chasing Victory.

Note: There is also a sequel to Chasing Victory as well, titled Claiming Victory, which I have thoroughly ensconced myself in at the moment.  Also, as Chasing Victory is all EPOV – mpg also has outtakes in other POV of Chasing Victory here and Claiming Victory here.  

*DNF = Did not finish


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5687435/1/Chasing-Victory

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*Reviews by Cared*

AYERS

I bring you a quick look at three stories that are set in Australia, and one set in Hollywood featuring a Bella from Australia. The word Australia is the only thing my description of these stories has in common. These tales widely vary in style and stretch from one that will make you cry with empathy, to one that will make you cry with laughter.

Going Under by Anna-Faze

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*made by christagbanners*

Going Under ~ Can one day make a difference when you’re going under? O/S for the Another Ward on the Barbie contest Judges Choice – cripes! . E/B 

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Angst/Romance – Chapters: 1 – Words: 9,968 – Reviews: 47 – Published: 9-18-11 – Complete
*Winner of the Judges Choice Award for ‘Another Ward on the Barbie’ Contest – 2011*

You know when you read a story that stuns you and the only word you are capable of uttering is “WOW”. Going Under by Anna-Faze is one of those stories.

Now, I understand this is fiction; these people are not real. But the tale is so gently powerful that many hours after reading this, I was still thinking about the characters and their possible futures. It is one of those fics where you have to balance your need to reach the end quickly, in this case to understand what has happened in the past, with your desire to savour each word as it appears.

BPOV
I wake at dawn to a chorus of birds from the bush above our house and the rhythmic beat of waves from the ocean below; the soundtrack I have woken to all the days of my life. It had always been a song that never failed to excite me with its promise of endless days that glistened like the sun on the ocean, stretching in a limitless dance all the way to the curve of the horizon.

I will tell you the descriptive imagery of this bittersweet award-winning story is exquisite and the characters are memorable; I am not going to tell you anything about the plot however. Read these 9,968 words and enjoy every single one of them.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7391712/1/Going-Under

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Boofhead by BoydBlog

*made by Robrator*

*made by Robrator*

Boofhead ~ I’ll never forgive my mum. I feel like I wanna jump off the Harbour Bridge. I’ll have to move to Kalgoorlie where there’s no TV reception! I want to be Joy Smithers, and live a life of obscurity as a faceless voice-over for Impulse commercials.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Humor/Romance – Chapters: 1 – Words: 9,834 – Reviews: 17 – Published: 9-18-11 – Bella & Edward – Complete  *Winner of the Readers Pick Award for ‘Another Ward on the Barbie’ contest*

All I can say about Renee is with a mother like her, who needs enemies? Bella is a quiet bookshop assistant with a fear of public speaking, and Renee signed her up to be a contestant on the television game show ‘Perfect Match’ to get her out of her shell. Fair-dinkum to Bella as she goes through with the show, albeit she is determined not to be the winner who will accompany the owner of the voice from behind the screen on a holiday, and so answers accordingly. The plan backfires of course, and she is picked.

There are no prizes for guessing that Wardie is that lucky bloke that gets his pick of the sheilas.

BPOV
“How are ya, Edward?”

“Call me Wardie, Greg. I’m feeling ace, thanks,” he said.

His voice was commonly ocker, but had a masculine huskiness that kind of made my head feel light.

“Now, you want to be a famous muso, Wardie?” Greg asked the man behind the screen.

“Yeah mate. Yeah I play guitar. I wanna join a band and become rich and famous!”

“Get into it and make some money, yeah? And what are you looking for in your perfect lady?”

“Um, you know, good personality and looks good in a bikini,” he said, which I hoped was in sarcasm, but assumed he was being one hundred percent truthful.

He laughed, my stomach dropped.

“Alright Wardie, take a seat. You know the rules. Please ask the first contestant your question.”

“Contestant number one. What’s your idea of a ripper night out?”

He had me at “Call me Wardie” LOL. This Edward is one of a kind but very sweet in his own way – a real bewdy!

BoydBlog says in an A/N “If you were not an Australian teenager or older during the 1980s then some language and references this one-shot will not make sense. It will be like I’m speaking in a foreign language.” While I’m definitely old enough, I am from a different hemisphere, but I still got the gist of the slang and found this fic to be hilarious or maybe I should say a rip snorter. Please form an orderly queue and join Wardie and Bella on Flight 1918 to Hamilton Island.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7394016/1/Boofhead


http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=7170

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On Screen Chemistry by evilnat

*made by evilnat*

*made by evilnat*

On Screen Chemistry ~ Edward Cullen, agent to the stars, is a workaholic who is mean and intimidating. That is until he meets struggling actress, Aussie Bella Swan. AH A one-shot written for the Fandom against Juvenile Diabetes compilation.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Edward & Bella – Words: 7,569

This story is set against the usual background of the cut throat world and madness that is Hollywood, but it has the unusual premise of Bella being the thespian.

When we meet Bella she is the kind of actress that is a waitress and shop assistant for a living. When we meet Edward, while he is quite masterful and hot, he needs help to pull his head of out of his arse. Funnily enough, this gorgeously determined yet sweet Bella is the perfect woman for this role.

“Is there something I can help you with, Mr Cullen?” She says with a forced but equally as polite as before smile. Her accent is far less distinct than it was earlier in the night confusing Edward in his drunken haze. Her innocent question sends all sorts of dirty thoughts swimming through Edward’s brain and that in turn sends the blood rushing straight to his groin.

“How about you give me your number?” he asks her cockily. It’s unusual for him to have to ask for a number, but he’s not above it. He hasn’t been able to stop thinking about her all night.

Bella snorts in a very unladylike way then turns and walks away.

Exasperated, Edward is frozen on the spot for a few seconds before he realizes what has just happened. He rushes to catch up with her at the bar. Surely she is interested in him, most women are.

Best of all, it is actress Bella that helps agent Edward to discover himself, without losing herself in the process.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8081363/1/OnScreen-Chemistry

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Edward Cullen Finally Learns To Bowl A Maiden Over by afmtoo

*made by jamiearkin*

Edward Cullen Finally Learns To Bowl A Maiden Over ~ Has Cocky Cullen, England cricket captain and man-about-town, finally met his match? AH, canon couples, rated M for language, lemons and Emmett

Rated:Fiction M – English – Romance/Hurt/Comfort – Edward & Bella – Words: 6,985 – Reviews: 43 – Favs: 44 – Follows: 71 – Published: 06-01-11 – id: 7042510

Edward Cullen is a player. He is the captain of the English cricket team and a player when it comes to the ladies; a Centurian both on and off the field. The English team travels to Australia to play for The Ashes.

Bella Swan also travels from England for the event, but she doesn’t know a stump from an inning; her job is to interview the WAGs for a magazine. She strikes up a conversation over Pulp Fiction quotes with a handsome stranger in an American-style diner, and the game begins.

“I know the rules, I can teach you if you like.” Mentally Edward kicked himself, thinking he sounded like an idiot. But Bella didn’t think that; she was touched that someone who she hardly knew would put themselves out for her like that.

They fell into easy conversation as their food arrived and the diner emptied as the patrons headed out to go home, to church or to nightclub their way into Christmas Day. Both skirted round their day jobs. Edward didn’t want her to know he was famous; she didn’t want him to think she was shallow for writing about celebs for a living.

Edward has met his match in Bella and finds himself wanting to woo a woman – that’s a bit of a sticky wicket for him as he doesn’t know how. He even sends Bella a chatty text instead of his standard booty call. Another first! What will happen when they find out who the other is? And don’t worry, there is no need to know anything about cricket to enjoy this crick-fic.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7042510/1/Edward-Cullen-finally-learns-to-bowl-a-maiden-over

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*Review by Midnight Cougar*

Try  by shellshock81 (WiP)

*banner made by Shahula Fics*

*banner made by Shahula Fics*

Try ~ Bella moves to the other side of the world, leaving everything she’s ever known behind, including a broken heart. Edward, star player of one of New Zealand’s best Super15 rugby teams is so smitten over his new Pilates trainer; he can’t stop himself from going after her. Will they find a way to make it work on and off the field?

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 16 – Words: 82,140 – Reviews: 1,131 - Updated: 1-31-13 – Published: 9-20-12 – Bella & Edward

Hello everyone, I am thrilled to join in the fun this week to review a sweet, little gem of a fic from Down Under, but while my story is not Australian set, it is close, being set in the sizzling Southern Hemisphere… Try, a lovely, romantic story by shellshock81, which began as a one shot for a birthday treat for the author’s friend, Whiti, actually takes place in Auckland, New Zealand. Shellshock81 is a new fan fiction author, one I am enjoying immensely, and it’s no secret I love to discover new writing talent to read. When I found this story I was excited, not only because of her unique, hot Rugbyward but because it’s also well-written and makes me smile!

The story starts out with a literal “bang” ;) in the Prologue… And being the perv that I am, I was hooked right away! lol But I am going to let you read that yummy hotness for yourself, because while Bella tries to fight her attraction for Kiwiward for a while throughout the regular chapters—one because of her failed romantic past, and two, for not wanting to mix business with pleasure—we all know just how irresistible a hot, fit, sweetheart of a Rugbyward would be!

Not only do we have a swoonworthy rugby-playing Edward in this Romance/Drama, but also a beautiful, strong, witty, intelligent Bella, who uproots her broken-hearted life in the US to take a new job as a rugby team’s Pilates trainer in a new country—”…at Eden Park, New Zealand’s largest and most hallowed rugby stadium and home of the Blues.” You’re probably wondering how she even came to have this opportunity…well, that is one of the unique elements of this story that captured my attention: how Bella came to be friends with Alice through an online book club on Facebook—sound familiar, anyone? *wink*

After the Prologue, the story jumps back three weeks to begin chapter 1. It’s six days after Bella moves to this new world. She is preparing to start her new job, and “Try” to create herself a new and happy life. Bella learns many new Kiwi—the nickname used internationally for people from New Zealand—terms and sayings in her everyday life, tries new drinks at the local hangout, The Kingslander…and she does this all with her new friends—Edward’s brother, Carlisle, and helpful wife, Esme; Emmett who is so damn cute—he’s hilarious and sweet, and takes Bella under his wing; to supportive coach Jasper, and loving, bestie Alice…and of course a whole arsenal of hot, flirty rugby players! *win win*

Last but certainly not least we have the adorable, soft-hearted, sexy number ten Edward Cullen, who adores his new Pilates trainer, wants to give her the world, is “falling in chocolate with” her—you will understand when you read chapter 11, it’s so adorable—and eventually makes her his in more ways than one…

Excerpt from chapter 9:

This time, I allow Bella a moment to catch her breath as I slowly kiss my way back up her body. I position my cock at her entrance before resting my full weight on top of her and framing her face with my arms.

My fingertips brush the hair back at her temple and when she opens her eyes I murmur, “I don’t know what happened in your past, and believe me, I have plenty of fucked-up skeletons in my closet, but I promise I’ll do my best to erase your bad memories and replace them with good ones. I know this is really fast and kinda intense, but I hope you know how crazy I am about you. I’ve never felt this consumed by anyone—and if I’m honest, it’s scary as hell—but please, never doubt how much I care about you, Bella.”

Her eyes are shining when I close the distance between us and kiss her again, slowly shifting forward to enter her. Bella moans into my mouth, making me want to pick up my pace, but I’m determined to show her how I feel about her.

I hook my arms under her shoulders and lick and nip along her jawline as I slowly move in and out of her. Our bodies are pressed so tightly together, it offers little leverage, but what we lose in movement we make up for in passion.

“Oh god, Bella. It’s feels like you’re everywhere around me,” I mumble, not even caring if I’m not making any sense.

Bella’s fist closes around a lock of my hair, and she pulls me closer. “Uhhnn…Edward.”

Her breathy moan spurs me on further, “I’ll never get enough of this.”

Bella’s whimpers blow hot breath across my ear and neck, causing a chain reaction of tingling that ends in my dick. I moan and bend my head down to bite her shoulder gently. “I’m close, baby. Can you get there?”

“God, yes. Just don’t stop talking,” she groans, swivelling her hips in time with mine.

Damn, my girl is hot.

I shift back, lifting her left leg with my right arm to get a better angle and pick up my pace, searching for that magical spot.

“You like it when I talk to you, baby? You like my dirty mouth?”

She grips my hips and pulls me to her harder, “Fuck me, Edward!”

“Yeah, you do. You’re so fucking hot when you talk like that, too. Do you have any idea how much it turns me on?” I slip my left hand down to Bella’s clit and press down, hoping she’s as close as she seems to be.

I’m rewarded for my supernatural powers of observation when she clenches around me and digs her nails into my skin.

One look at her fucking gorgeous face and my strokes become shorter and faster until I release inside her in three long streams. I collapse on top of her, but have just enough blood left in my brain to realise I’m crushing her, so I roll to the side.

When I finally have my own breathing under control, I tug her closer to me and say, “Okay, I may need more than twenty minutes after that one.”

Bella snuggles deeper into my pillow and against me. “‘Kay. Sounds like a plan. Just wake me when you’re ready.”

I swear she’s asleep before she even finishes talking, and I spend a few minutes just staring at her beautiful face, unable to believe that just a few hours ago, I was jealous over her and Riley. My own exhaustion hits me, but I don’t want to fall asleep without cleaning up a bit so I gently worm my way out of bed and grab a washcloth, wetting it with warm water before returning to Bella, who’s in such a deep slumber that she barely moves as I gently wipe her legs.

Knowing I really will want to wake her up in the middle of the night, I decide to take another shower. I laugh to myself at the thought of depleting all of Auckland of its water supply if we keep this up. While I quickly soap and rinse my tired body, it’s still long enough to fog up my bathroom mirror.

I’m getting ready to wipe it away when I’m struck with a brilliant idea. Glancing into my room, I see Bella is still asleep, so I quickly scribble out my note to her.

If all goes as planned, the first thing Bella will see when she steps out of the shower in the morning is:

WILL U B

MY G/F?

[_] Yes [_] Yes

Aw, see? Sizzling HOT and SWEET! The best of both worlds of Twific Edward! I’ve kind of labeled Kiwiward, Sweetward, too, because he will make you SWOON! We have 16 chapters so far, including the Prologue and an outtake chapter, and while we have a little drama—involving Edward’s past—to keep things interesting, the story is heartfelt, well presented, all the characters are well defined and fun, and, for me, Try is a pleasure to read! And as a bonus, the author is every bit as sweet as her Edward, and when you review, she sends you an outtake in a different POV—sometimes Edward, and even some hilarious but insightful Emmett. Try updates every Thursday, faithfully, so please give it a “Try”! Enjoy!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8542432/1/Try

Facebook group – Eden Park – for teaser, and more! *by more I may mean Rugby-players porn!* *UNF*

shellshock81 on TWCS 

*Special thanks to Bornonhalloween for pre-reading my review.* xo MC

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The FicSix would like to take this opportunity to say THANK YOU to the wonderful Aussie Authors who have supported these posts and left us lovely comments – we are in awe of your support of each other, and it has been so much fun!

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Words With Nolebucgrl

Fan Fiction Fridays

The FicSix have been almost bursting with excitement for this week’s post – an author interview with none other than the sweetest, sexiest comedy author in the Twifandom, Nolebucgrl!!

WORDS WITH NOLEBUCGRL

We asked award-winning, Sportsward-creating, cat lover Nolebucgrl to choose questions from a selection about Twilight, Twific, the writing process, herself and what she thinks about our Beautiful Boy. With the graciousness that we all love her for, Nolebucgrl answered 18 questions, including giving us a rec of her own.

Here are her Words With all of our Friends… (that means YOU!)

How did you first come to read Twilight – and answer this part honestly, we won’t judge – how many times have you read it? 

Believe it or not, I was recommended Twilight on a sports message board from this girl named Dee. She and I had a lot of the same tastes in TV shows and she told me she thought I’d like it. I read it and never looked back. As to how many times I read it? Countless. I didn’t stumble on fic for about 8 months after I read the books and I couldn’t get E&B out of my head and read them over and over.

If you could change one thing about a Twilight book, what would it be? 

Well, Sacrificial Lamb was my attempt to change what I didn’t like from the originals and make it more what I had in my head.  In a nutshell, I didn’t like how “neat” everything was in BD.  I felt Bella should have to give up some things in order to get her eternity with Edward.  I also wanted him to want to change her, not change her because he had to.  I thought that was a cop out.

*made by AngstGoddess*

*made by AngstGoddess*

Are you in the Twicloset? Why?/Why not? 

Nope.  I’m very proud of what I read/write and everybody knows about it.

What was the first fanfic story that you read and how did you find it (and the fandom)?

Like many, mine was Wide Awake and I found it through two friends talking about it on my blog.  I had posted about how I couldn’t stop reading Twilight and they told me to get into fic.  At first I resisted because I feared reading an Edward that wasn’t the one I knew and loved but they got me curious by talking about WA over and over and finally I gave in and never looked back.

If you were invited on a press tour with the Twilight cast, where in the world would you most want to go and why?

Sydney, Australia.  I don’t know if I had a concrete why, I’ve just always wanted to go there.  I love koalas and kangaroos and it just looks like a stunning place to visit.  I don’t like opera but I’d still love to go to their opera house.

*Rob in Australia*

*Rob in Australia*

What inspired you to start writing fanfiction?

After a couple of straight months of reading fic, I decided to give it a try with the encouragement of the same two who got me into reading it in the first place.  I’d had my idea of how BD should go in my head and one day I just started putting it on the computer.  Then I was told to post it on fanfic and the reviews started coming and I was hooked.

Is there any particular phrase or scenario that you avoid in your writing? Why?

Scenarios, sure.  I don’t write non-canon pairings.  I may reference them prior to the inevitable E&B meet, but I don’t actually describe them because they ick me out.  I do avoid a certain word, like penis and cunt.  Those I do not find attractive at all.

Do you prefer writing EPOV or BPOV? What is the difference for you?

It depends on my mood.  I love writing both, really, though I tend to get the most compliments on EPOV :)

Do you have a particular process when it comes to your writing, perhaps a certain mood, environment or music? 

Honestly not really.  I tend to write in the morning or early evening, though, with the TV on, just because I can’t write in silence.  Quiet doesn’t work for me.  I need background noise but music could suck me in so I just do the TV.

We’re so excited you’re going to be published! What can you tell us about the book, the journey and how you are feeling about it all.

Thank you!  The book is a romantic comedy much like most of my fic is.  It’s an office romance that the female protagonist tries to fight against with all she’s worth.  She’s been hurt in her younger days and she put up a wall that nobody breaches until she’s paired with an out of towner on a big project.  He’s everything she’s avoided since her college boyfriend cheated on her.  She tends to date down, as it were, hooking up with nerdy guys who won’t tempt her beyond a one night stand.  I think, well, hope, that you guys will like her.  She’s a lot of fun.

*Code Red will be published on 11th April 2013.*

*Code Red will be published on            11th April 2013.*

Have you met fandom people in real life? Were they what you expected?

Yes, I have and it was a lot of fun.  They were all that I expected and truly I have made some great friends through this fandom.  I hope to meet a lot more!

If you were given a chance, would you enter a reality TV show and if so, which one?

Hell no, unless I had the talent to be on The Voice. And let’s face it, the reason I would be there would be to meet Adam Levine.  Yum.

*Adam Levine*

*Adam Levine*

If you won the lottery tomorrow, how would you like to spend your days?

Since my mega millions were stolen by some jerks in other states, I am sad to answer this question.  Definitely I would spend my days writing.  No work to get in the way.  Also I’d hire a personal trainer to get my ass in shape.  I’d also look into founding an animal shelter/charity for dogs and cats.

What movie do you watch again and again?

SOOO many.  Breakfast Club and 16 Candles any time they’re on.  Currently watching Pitch Perfect over and over again.  Heathers and Pump Up the Volume (yes I had a thing for a young Christian Slater).  The Hangover.

What in life are you most passionate about?

Sports and writing.  Football is definitely my passion and I live for the weekends during the fall/winter.  The approach of spring goes nothing but depress me.  And of course writing is a passion for me, or I wouldn’t do so much of it. :)

*made by Caius09*

*made by Caius09*

What are you proudest of in your life?

That I’m actually going to have a published novel.  It was a dream that I never thought would be a reality and the fact that I’m there at all just stuns me.

If you’re in were trapped in a lift with Robert Pattinson for five precious minutes, what would you tell him about the mad world that we all inhabit?

I would tell him that while the fandom does have its share of the crazies we all know he fears, there are really very many delightful, normal women as well that just want the best for him.  Many disagree about just what that might be, but most agree that we want him to be happy and wish him much success.

If you could have your own cloned Rob, made to your specifications, which of these would your heartthrob be?

NOLEBUCGRL'S  OPTIONS

Or do you have a favourite -ward / Rob of your own you’d like to share?

Hmm from those pics, I’d go suave Rob, which is also more of a CEO Rob.  Though from my stories, you know I most prefer Sportswards, not that he’s played one :)

*Quarterbackward made by Caius09*

*Quarterbackward made by Caius09*

Thank you so much for revealing your deepest, darkest secrets. They are safe with us.

;-)

Now, do you have a rec you’d like to share? Tell us the name of the story, the author and why you think RA readers would love it.

I love a bunch of stories, of course.  My current fave is probably Wisp by Cris.  It’s well written, different from any other story I’ve read and it tugs at the heart strings, featuring a Bella that’s been through unspeakable trauma and an Edward that takes her in and tries to reach her.  Very uplifting, sad and sweet at the same time.

*made by Ysar*

*made by Ysar*

Wisp ~ Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH. Ysar made me my banner!

Rated: Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort/Drama – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 36 – Words: 184,645 – Reviews: 5,710 – Favs: 2,921 – Follows: 4,215 – Updated: 12-31-12 – Published: 04-22-12 – id: 8051177


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8051177/1/Wisp


http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=6468

Thank you Nolebucgrl for sharing your deepest, awesome thoughts with your hungry public.

Touchdown with us and a few highlights from her team of fabulous fics; head over to her profile for more.

  
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1901714/Nolebucgrl

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*Review by Wiltshire Glo*

A Taste of Innocence by Nolebucgrl

*made by Ms. Ambrosia*

*made by Ms. Ambrosia*

A Taste of Innocence ~ Edward Cullen longs to taste the blood of an innocent. He meets Bella Swan. Will desire for her override desire for her blood, or will he take both?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Humor/Romance – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 31 – Words: 217,044 – Reviews: 3,192 – Favs: 2,181 – Follows: 1,185 – Updated: 01-26-12 – Published: 09-30-09 – Status: Complete – id: 5412456

Edward is a predator, a vampire justifying his killing by clearing the streets of the dregs of society. But tonight is different, tonight he wants to taste innocent blood, feed on purity and enjoy the mayhem that ensues after his victim is missed for once…and so A Taste of Innocence begins. However, after just one evening of being charmed by student Bella and her sweet innocence mixed with a touch feistiness, Edward can’t let her go and decides to keep her!

What starts as a dark tale rapidly flips to shock and hilarity as Bella awakens and doesn’t behave quite how he’d imagined she would..

“I said that I’m not going to kill humans so you’d have to find another way to feed me.” Fuck, I had heard her correctly. What had I done to deserve such a contrary woman? Well you took an innocent girl’s life, did you expect her to just say thank you and fuck you into oblivion? Yes, stupid fucking inner voice, I expected exactly that.”

Edward really is clueless but completely smitten. His arrogant ways are quickly levelled by a determined Bella who introduces him to a whole new world-including tv vampires, and her slightly off-centre view of life. He grouchily caters to her every whim.

Okay, so, here’s the part where I admit that I’m rarely tempted to read Vamp fics. I know, quite the confession for a Twilight fan! But Nolebucgrl really gives us a great view of their relationship deepening and their trust growing; giving us lots of laugh out loud moments along the way. There were so many quotes or insights I wanted to include, but it would just spoil the story to know too much more!

If you haven’t read it before or usually choose AH over AU, do yourself a favour and read A Taste of Innocence – if you have read it before, revisit it just to remind yourself how humour should be written. Nolebucgrl has the lightest of touches and never has to try too hard to have me laughing.

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*Review by Cared*

Sideline Collision by Nolebucgrl

*made by Ooza*

*made by Ooza*

Sideline Collision ~ A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field? Rated M.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Edward & Bella – Chapters: 31 – Words: 189,264 – Reviews: 11,124 – Favs: 5,528 – Follows: 5,959 – Updated: 12-23-12 – Published: 02-15-11 – Status: Complete – id: 6749059

Edward is not known as Cockyback because he has some weird medical condition.  No. He earned the title, as he is a quarterback with attitude; he is just as skilled off the field with the ladies as he is on the field with the ball.

Bella is a determined, feisty, fun loving girl with a great sense of humour.  When she collides with Edward on the sports field, her reed tip is broken (that is not a euphemism), the nickname Reed Girl is born, and they are soon playing a very different game.

I’ve always been an Edward/Bella girl, *come closer as I lower my voice* while this Bella is a sweetie, the connection that makes me ooh and aah the most, is to be found in the Edward and Rainbow relationship. I snicker at how possessive Rainbow is of her Edward, while cute is the only word for him, especially when she rides on his shoulder.

Rainbow may be a kitten, but she is still a woman female and falls under the same spell as the rest of us with this sweet, pussy-whispering Cockyback. Before long, Rainbow has Edward eating out of the palm of her hand, err… wrapped around her little finger, err… catering to her every whim.

Nolebucgrl has written an eclectic supporting cast.  There is the most unusual and mostly stoned Jasper, a grandmother from hell known as GrandMonster, and a hilarious moustached fan-girling Charlie.

If you want a fabulous read with enough hot lemons to cure a cold, witty dialogue, clever plots, cuteness to make you sigh and romance to make your swoon, look no further than the award winning Sideline Collision.

*Rainbow*

*Rainbow*


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6749059/1/Sideline-Collision

 
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=11066

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*Review by AllyVera*

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl

First & Ten ~ Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league’s biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Bella & Edward – Chapters: 54 – Words: 369,465 – Reviews: 14,136 – Favs: 7,533 – Follows: 4,884 – Updated: 09-05-12 – Published: 04-06-10 – Status: Complete – id: 5874934

Straight off the bat (or should I say ball?) I will tell you I knew nothing about American Football – nada, zip, zilch, didley squat – when I first read First & Ten. But you know what? Even if you don’t know a damn thing about the NFL, you still fall in love with this story, and by story, I mean Edward – a.k.a the original and best Quarterbackward (and yes, Cockyback comes in a very close second).

The very first chapter of First and Ten we meet Bella, a sports journalist who has been that very day promoted to reporter.  Her very first interviewee?  None other than the Quarterback for the Arizona Cardinals, Edward Cullen.  Here are Bella’s thoughts heading into that interview..

“Edward Cullen was the hottest quarterback in the league, both on and off the field. He averaged 350 yards and three touchdowns a game, and that was usually on an off night. He was built like Michelangelo’s David, ripped and chiseled as if molded by the Gods themselves. I mentally scolded myself for sounding like a ridiculous fangirl but I couldn’t help it and I certainly wasn’t alone. The Cardinals had sold out every single game since they drafted Edward Cullen three years ago…

…His movie star good looks were just part of the package of course, but they were a very attractive part indeed. He was 6’4″ tall with piercing green eyes and riotous hair that was a mix of browns, reds and even some blond. His face was impossibly handsome; chiseled cheekbones, a jaw that could cut glass and lips that were incredibly bitable. And his smile…his smile lit up a room. He exuded charm and charisma and was an interviewer’s dream.”

All together now…  *SIGH*

First & Ten’s Bella is very special, she has that gorgeous mix of everyday girl and intelligent savvy reporter, I love how Nolebucgrl has given her traits like her filter (or should I say, lack of filter) that blurts out the funniest things in front of Edward, her affection for her mad best friend Alice, and best of all, her passion for her job and the sport she loves so much.

I can’t go any further without mentioning Emmett.  Emmett has always been one of my favourite characters, but F&T Emmett is my favourite fan fic Emmett – no competition! Some of the things he gets up to had me rolling in laughter! Actually, the full cast of characters in F&T are epic – hence the reason, *whispers* I may have re-read it several times (please, don’t judge me).

First & Ten is one of those stories that will make you happy, it is so fulfilling, beautifully written, and for me, educational.  I can now sit down and watch the Super Bowl and tell my DH what is happening – thanks Nolebucgrl!!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5874934/1/First-Ten

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*Review by Gingerandgreen*

Words With Friends and Words With Strangers by Nolebucgrl

*made by Barburella*

*made by Barburella*

Words With Friends ~ Bella Swan has a major crush on a major star, Edward Cullen. They have an obsession with the same game. Can they connect through Words with Friends and become more than that? Rated M.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Humor – Chapters: 61 – Words: 347,862 – Reviews: 18182 – Updated: 7-25-12 – Published: 4-16-11 – Bella & Edward – Complete

Words With Strangers ~ EPOV Companion Piece to Words with Friends. Movie star Edward Cullen is done with women and focused on his career. A stranger reaches out to him via Words with Friends. Will her words change his mind?

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Humor – Chapters: 51 – Words: 301,961 – Reviews: 12881 – Updated: 7-25-12 – Published: 7-13-11 – Edward & Bella – Complete

Words with Friends and its companion piece from EPOV, Words with Strangers, could have been written expressly for Rob Attack readers.

I reviewed these sweet, sexy stories way back when they were baby WiPs (for another site), and my love for them both has not diminished since then. They are such a delight to read – a little bit of happy escapism from the ups and downs of daily life. Nolebucgrl’s gentle humour, her optimism and her belief in the power of love – whatever medium delivers it – washes over you until you feel as though you might actually be able to tackle the laundry at the end of a full day’s slog, after all.

Bella Swan is an ordinary girl studying to be a teacher, avoiding bad dates, recovering from a nasty breakup and entertaining her friends with her relentless passion for one swoon-worthy Edward Cullen, Hollywood’s hottest movie star. (Ring any bells?)

Being the dedicated fan she is, Bella’s analysed every word Edward ever said in public. (Sounding familiar yet?) She gets so good, when he reveals that he plays WWF in a TV interview, she guesses his user name. He takes her challenge, they play, and the result is the most entertaining long distance romance you ever read.

Somehow, Nolebucgrl manages to make Edward and Bella’s instant connection over first WWF, then email, texting, phone, Skype – you name it – utterly believable. Despite being worlds apart, you just know these two are going to make it to their kinky HEA. Come to mention it, you are convinced from the start that the incredibly strong supporting cast are going to get theirs too, however unlikely it seems for poor Alice. Ah, poor Alice. *smirks and winks*

Read and dream, or re-read and dream; vicarious pleasure never felt so good.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6910604/1/Words-with-Friends


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7176635/1/Words-with-Strangers

We want to thank Nolebucgrl for being a great sport!

STOP THE PRESSES - we have a very special annoucement… Our very own Midnight Cougar came second in the Fandom Choice Awards for Excellence in Editing!  Congratulations, Midnight Cougar – well deserved!

Congratulations, MC!!

Congratulations, MC!!

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FanFiction Fridays – Recs for June 1/12

Isn’t this incredible?! Absolutely gorgeous! Oh Edward!! *swoon*

*I’m not certain who made this, but if it’s yours please let me know and I will credit you here accordingly.*

So yeah, Happy Friday indeed! :D I had to share that Edward through the Saga banner I saw on Facebook because I think it’s just stunning! H00r down! *fans self & clears throat* Okay, onto business, where was I, oh yes, fanfics to rec, right, well today I have  1 wicked WIP rec for you, and the lovely Cared is joining me with several of her own – 1 WIP and 1 complete. Please enjoy!

This week I stumbled upon a new WIP by the ever-talented SydneyAlice, it’s entitled Moments. Posting began on May 19th and so far we have 5 chapters with over 1100 reviews, and WOW, such a powerful story already. Moments starts out with a punch, dealing with some serious issues in the storylines and the emotions she sets forth through these characters are incredible! I am completely captivated!

*made by twistedinmasen*

Summary for Moments: “She’s a college student working toward a dream. He’s a man walking away from the only dream he’s ever known. There are moments that can change your life forever. This is their moment.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Hurt/Comfort – Chapters: 5 – Words: 11,203 – Reviews: 1117 – Updated: 5-30-12 – Published: 5-19-12 – Bella & Edward”

As the story begins with the first gripping chapter, we learn of the realities of Bella’s life, with her hard at work in a “greasy diner” as a way to finish putting herself through her senior year of college. It’s just a normal, busy night at the restaurant, soon to be closing time, or so Bella thought, until her last, but certainly not least, customer, a “beautiful disaster” as she describes him, walks in…

I glanced at my watch and sighed with relief. It was nearly closing time, and my tired body was ready for a bubble bath and a glass of cheap wine. With renewed energy that only comes at the end of my shift, I grabbed a rag and began to wipe the counter. The place was blissfully empty, which would make closing that much easier.

Ten minutes. If only the customers will stay away for ten more minutes.

But no, the universe was cruel.

At five minutes until closing time, he walked in. Without a glance toward the tired waitress desperate to lock the doors, he found a stool at the end of the counter.

Sighing, I grabbed the coffee pot and a mug before making my way over to him.

“I’m afraid the grill is closed,” I said in apology. “It’s nearly closing time, and all we have is coffee and pie.”

The man said nothing. He simply stared ahead with glazed eyes as I poured a cup of decaf. His rude silence gave me the chance to really check him out. He had a wild head of bronze hair and the kind of sculpted cheekbones you’d expect to see on the face of a runway model. His eyes, as lifeless as they were, were a beautiful shade of green.

Despite all of that perfection, he looked like absolute shit.

His clothes looked as if he’d slept in them—for about a week. The wrinkled dress shirt had been white once upon a time, and a dingy tie hung haphazardly around his neck. His slacks were torn at the knees, and his leather shoes looked as if he’d stepped into the nearest muddy puddle.

On his wrist, was a Rolex.

Weird.

I cleared my throat. “Can I get you a slice of pie? We have apple and, I think, one slice of cherry.”

He finally looked my way, and the intensity of those eyes pierced through me.

Beautiful green and painfully cold.

“Your name is Bella?”

The question surprised me, and quite frankly, scared me a little. But then I remembered I’m a waitress, and wearing a name tag is part of the gig.

“Yes, I’m Bella.”

He nodded once, and that was the end of our conversation.

I finished closing up and tried not to stare at the beautiful disaster sitting at the end of the counter. He must have money, if the watch on his wrist was any indication. Why would he be dressed as if he spent his nights sleeping in a cardboard box in an alley?

After gathering dishes, I headed back to the kitchen….

 I made my way back out front, expecting to see the handsome homeless man sitting at the counter.

To my surprise, he was gone.

I walked to the end of counter, and that’s when I saw two things that made me stop in my tracks.

A full cup of coffee.

And his Rolex.

Nice tip, eh? And why would someone who looked so destitute leave his Rolex for a tip? Well, Bella will soon find this out… She finishes cleaning up the diner and heads home on foot in the frigid mid November air in Seattle, just hoping for that warm bath and some relaxation after her busy school and work day, but those hopes are shattered when she stumbles upon her mysterious last customer again…

I pulled my jacket tighter around me and quickened my pace toward my apartment. It wasn’t a long walk between the diner and my place, but the cold temperature made it seem like miles. I was just making my way across the Washington Street Bridge when something caught my eye.

A man was standing along the barrier of the bridge, looking down into the frigid water below.

Without a backwards glance, he placed one leg over the edge, and that’s when I recognized him.

I screamed.

His head jerked up, and there, under the lights of the city, my eyes locked with the beautiful man who’d left his watch on my counter.

And he was going to jump.

*GASP* Yes, my friends, that is exactly where I am going to leave you because you’ve just read most of chapter 1 and it’s so worth reading the remaining defining Moments between Bella and Edward for yourselves. SydneyAlice is updating quite regularly and she says, “As of now, I plan to update weekly. Maybe more, depending on my schedule. As some of you know, I’m working on my first novel, so that’s keeping me super busy, but I’ve missed you guys and wanted to write you a little something. It won’t be super angsty, although it starts out a little dramatic. If you know me at all, you know how it’ll end. If you haven’t read my stories, I’m a happy-ever-after kind of girl, so trust me.”

I’m confident this will be another of SydneyAlice’s fabulous stories, and if you choose to read Moments, I know you will be as enraptured as I was right from this first intense chapter!


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8132007/1/Moments

You can also visit SydneyAlice’s Blog for more information: 
http://sydneyalice5.blogspot.ca/

xx MC

******************  Cared ******************

I love to read contest entries and fandom gives back submissions.  It grants me the opportunity to read genres and pairings that I would not normally consider.  More than that, through those one-shots, I have found some truly wonderful authors.  Even better is discovering that a great one shot has been extended.  Volition by Rochelle Allison, and She Gives Me Religion by Liz Lemon Bennett, for example, both started life as one shot contest entries and are now fabulous full-length fics. Let’s have a quick look at some lovely stories that started as one shots.

A Promise Kept by Cullen312 was an Age Of Edward one-shot that has been turned into a Novella.  It began posting on 10th April 2012, to mark the 100th Anniversary of the maiden and only voyage of the Titanic.  It’s now five chapters in and is also told in alternating EPOV and BPOV.

Summary for A Promise Kept: “Edward Masen, Earl of Whitmore, never expected to fall in love but then he meets beautiful American, Isabella Swan. Set in the midst of one of the greatest maritime disasters in history the odds are stacked against them. AH-Set in 1912.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 5 – Words: 43,722 – Reviews: 154 – Updated: 5-26-12 – Published: 4-10-12 – Bella & Edward”

We meet Edward Masen, the dashing and handsome Earl of Whitmore while in a foul mood at the prospect of spending Christmas fending off the unwanted attentions of an American heiress, presumably in search of a title.   Neither acquiring a title nor finding a husband, hold any interest for Ms. Isabella Swan, a delightful plucky and modern woman for 1912.  As Edward soon finds out, there is much more to Isabella than this slightly stuffy Edwardian Edward could possibly have imagined.  She is completely unlike any member of the opposite sex he has previously met.  The poor man doesn’t understand what is happening to him as he falls helplessly under her spell.

After that it didn’t take long for the conversation to pick up and it turned out that Miss Isabella Swan was both well educated and well spoken. She easily fell into conversation around us and actually had insightful words and ideas to add.

I also noticed that she didn’t seem out of place at a formal English dinner. I’d seen many an American heiress fumble her way through dinner and commit several faux pas in my past dining experiences, but Miss Swan didn’t seem out of place or even the slightest bit nervous.

I would never admit it, but by the time dessert was being served I was intrigued by Miss Isabella Swan.

After our meal was finished, we made our way into the parlor hall where the tree had been set up for us to decorate. As our party made its way in there, I kept track of where Miss Swan was in hopes of having a little more time to observe and converse with her.

It wasn’t hard to find her once I entered the hall and saw her talking quietly with Alice and Jasper.

Of course Alice would be drawn to her. Alice was easily the youngest in our family party and always in search of someone new to chat with and befriend. I couldn’t help but smile as I saw them conversing together with ease.

“Edward, we were just telling Miss Swan about the events planned for the evening,” Jasper said.

“Yes, and it turns out Miss Isabella plays piano and does a little singing,” Alice said with a delightful smile on her face.

“I don’t do either particularly well,” Miss Swan added quietly with a blush.

“I invite you to join us later, if you feel so inclined. I also invite you to take your turn at the piano, as well,” I said. She looked at me with another shy smile and I couldn’t help but return it.

The festivities began shortly after and we all talked and enjoyed each other’s company as we trimmed the tree. I found myself staying close to Miss Swan and on more than one occasion I helped her place an ornament when she couldn’t reach the branch she was reaching for.

“Thank you,” she whispered quietly before turning around to face me.

“You’re welcome,” I added with my own whisper and smile. She was very sweet and I liked the way her voice sounded when she talked not to mention how pretty she looked when she smiled.

My intrigue grew.

As the author says, A Promise Kept follows Edward Masen, Earl of Whitmore as he meets and falls in love with American heiress, Isabella Swan.  Just after their wedding and honeymoon in England they travel to America to introduce Edward to Bella’s American family and friends.  With a voyage on The Titanic, their married life will be anything but plain sailing; there are icebergs ahead. (Sorry I couldn’t resist it.) Will Edward and his bride be among the survivors?  I know that I’m hoping so.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8012135/1/A_Promise_Kept#

Edward Masen, Earl of Whitmore, never expected to fall in love but then he meets beautiful American, Isabella Swan. Set in the midst of one of the greatest maritime disasters in history the odds are stacked against them. AH-Set in 1912.

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 4 – Words: 35,686 – Reviews: 131 – Updated: 5-1-12 – Published: 4-10-12 – Bella & Edward

Author blog -
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The Harvest of Avarice by Emmamama88 caught my eye in the Age of Edward contest.  To be entirely honest, it brought a tear to my eye too. Grant you, while that’s not necessarily a bad thing, I happened to read this story on my phone while at the hairdressers!

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Summary for The Harvest of Avarice: “*Entry for Age of Edward 2012* Meet Edward Masen, one member of America’s ‘Greatest Generation’. “…just as fire tempers iron into fine steel so does adversity temper one’s character into firmness, tolerance and determination….”

Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Angst – Chapters: 6 – Words: 20,145 – Reviews: 104 – Updated: 4-25-12 – Published: 2-4-12 – Edward & Bella – Complete”

It’s hard to say much about this interesting story without giving the intriguing twist away.  It opens in 1944 on what Edward calls one hell of a strange day.  He meets an elderly gentleman and tells a story that takes us back to St. Louis and Edward’s childhood during the depression era. The unfortunate financial circumstances of both their families throw the young Edward and Bella together.  Edward is charming and Bella is sweet and while still in high school, they fall in love.

Talking about twists, Emmamama88 based this complete short story on the film that her character Edward, an actor, played in one of her other stories, Virgins and Villains.

You are perfect,” she whispered, “at least in my eyes you are.”

I looked into those eyes, and suddenly everything became clear. I was in love with her, and had been for some time. Probably since the day we met. I allowed my gaze to drift downward to Bella’s lips. The urge to feel those lips pressed against mine was overwhelming, and I’m ashamed to say that I acted upon that urge without a second thought.

I grasped her arms, pulling her to me, and brought my lips to hers before melting into the soft warm kiss. The feel of those lips against mine was heaven and I knew that I wanted this forever. When Bella sighed ever so softly, I was abruptly made aware of my inappropriate behavior and immediately pulled back, barely able to look her in the eye. “Oh Bella, I apologize. What must you think of me…”

Bella looked at me curiously. “Edward, what are you talking about?”

“I am so sorry for my ungentlemanly behavior. I hope you know I’m not the sort of fellow to go around stealing kisses.”

Bella smiled; amused. “I should hope not Edward. Have you kissed many girls?”

My mouth fell open in surprise. “Why no, of course not.” I defended before adding in a whisper, “You are the first.”

“Well then, you haven’t stolen any kisses, because I gave that one of my own free will.” Her smile was so happy and bright that I couldn’t resist smiling along with her, and kissing her again for good measure.

This is not just a story of a young Edward and Bella falling in love.  This is a story about what happens when life takes a turn you do not expect and would never willingly choose. What I love most about this The Harvest of Avarice is the lesson that evil, war, distance or time cannot destroy or diminish true love.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7804588/1/The_Harvest_of_Avarice

*Cared*

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Have a wonderful week! Midnight Cougar

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