It’s FanFiction Friday again and we’re into Horror Month here at Rob Attack, so each week this month I will try to recommend at least one Horror/Supernatural/Vampward TwiFic. I even made a sexy Vampward banner…. *Damn he’s gorgeous!*
Blinkie By Raum
Now, for anyone not familiar with Savage’s writing, you may want to read this A/N warning:
“Tempt My Tongue
Summary: Bloodthirsty vampire Edward Cullen has but a single goal in his pointless existence – lose his virginity with a human. He will stop at nothing to entice the unusual girl he saves in the street, but can he claim her body without killing her?
Angst, Drama, Horror, Romance, and a touch of Humor as well.
This is EvilStalkerVampWard at his (un)finest.
Rated M for dark themes and smut.
Please read – especially if you are new to my stories! This is the only warning you are going to get!“
See Savage’s Blog Fiction With Teeth for further warning information.
That all being said…..I personally love Savage7289’s writing, she is bold, unique and extremely creative. Her stories are a literary pleasure to read and I believe that Tempt My Tongue will be no exception to this description, especially once Bella enters the picture.
The first chapter is intense as Edward seeks out his next victim in a club. He is on a quest to lose his virginity, but this may be without merit because he must do this without killing his conquest first. After he convinces her to leave with him and go back to his hotel room, this is where the intense battle commences, as his Vampward instinctual desires fight to overpower his sexual desires – which one will win?
From Chapter 1
Kissing is extremely difficult, and I am often unable to move past the act. The membranes inside the mouth…so thin…so full of blood…
As her mouth comes into my field of vision, I run my cool tongue over my own lips. I wonder idly if such action dilutes the taste of venom or increases it. I dip my head down slowly, making sure I do not inhale at the same time my lips touch hers.
Her mouth is so warm, and her breath fans over my face. It’s almost too much for me to bear, and I have to back off somewhat to force control over my body before I try again. Our lips and tongues touch, and there is so much moisture and the near taste of blood in my mouth – it’s just right there –barely under the thinnest of barriers behind her thick bottom lip. My tongue drags slowly over her lips, and her hand grips the back of my head as she tries to pull me closer to her mouth.
She might as well just open a vein for me.
I pull back, my eyes wide and staring down at her. Her pupils are dilated and her chest rises and falls with her rapid breaths. I watch her eyes as they scan down my chest. Her fingers follow, and she traces the defining lines on my abdominals. She decides to reach for my cock, but I can’t let her do that…not yet. I shift back on my knees and out of her reach.” ——————-
A/N: “I plan for this to be a full-length story eventually, but this is really just the “teaser intro” to (hopefully) pique your interest and get you thinking about it. Once Unexpected Circumstances is complete, I will post chapters for this story on a regular basis. I have not yet decided if chapters for this will be posted on a weekly (normal sized chapters) or daily (itty-bitty chapters – what are we calling these now? Drabble fics?) schedule, but posting will be on a schedule of some sort (as real life allows).“
Considering we are coming up to the release of the Breaking Dawn Part 1 movie next month, I thought this was a neat little short story to read. It encompasses an alternate ending to the Breaking Dawn storyline, taking us into the Horror realm. Monster deals with what happens to Edward after Bella actually dies giving birth to Renesmee.
I enjoyed the plot, it is quite original and has a neat twist towards the end of the story; and definitely a creepy Edward! *shivers*
Quote from O/S – narrated in 3rd person:
“It was his fault Bella died. It was his child that kicked her apart, after all. His smile fell for a brief moment as he recalled scarlet blood on white skin. But his façade was back up as quickly as it had disappeared.
“Hey, Mia,” he said. “Do you want to come into the woods with me?”
The girl nodded and walked until she was standing next to him. They both knew that the woods were a big hookup spot for most teenagers in the area. But that’s not why he was taking her into the dark abyss of trees.
The woods provided sufficient cover for what he was going to do. If he took her in deep enough, nobody would hear her scream.
And she would scream.
He took her elbow, causing her heart to speed up dramatically. He dismissed it and began walking her at a human pace towards the beckoning darkness of the woods.” —————————–
Summary for Monster: “Edward is a vampire. Plain and simple, cut in stone. And he’s not a good vampire, either. So every Halloween, he chooses his victim from people who have trusted him for the last year…
Twilight – Rated: T – English – Angst/Hurt/Comfort – Chapters: 1 – Words: 3,518 – Reviews: 12 – Published: 10-12-09 – Edward – Complete”
*Update 13/11/11 – NOTE: It has come to my attention that this rec has been deleted from FF.net but is now available in Google-documents, so the links below have been updated to reflect this change.*
I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this as a WIP, but it is now Complete at 19 short drabble-type chapters. The story is told from mostly BPOV, but we do have some EPOV, which really adds to the intensity of this Romantic storyline and the character’s UST.
From Chapter 4 – BPOV:
“”Bella, you’re still awake?” you ask quietly. Your husky tone makes me shiver. “What are you doing?”
“Reading,” I say breathless as I grip the book tighter.
Your nose skims along my ear, and you quietly chuckle. “Is that so?” I slowly nod.
Your hand slides over my shoulder and down my arm. My eyes flutter.
You remove the book from my shaky grasp and toss it on the other end of the sofa.
My heart and breathing speed in anticipation.
You gently sweep my ponytail to the side and begin to unzip my top in the back.
I don’t have the courage to say no. I know my cheer top zipper stops half-way down, so you can’t completely remove it alone.
Then I wait for your next move.
You gently rub my shoulders, asking how your son behaved. I tell you he was good.
Your hands dip and glide over my collarbones, stroking tenderly back and forth.
“Relax,” you whisper in my ear. “I won’t hurt you.”
I believe you and I try, but the sensations running through my body are too strong.
Your hands continue, inching lower until they brush across the tops of my breasts. My core aches with need.” —————————
*fans self* This Fic is so well-written with wonderfully pervy characters that will have you smiling and maybe even a little turned-on! 😉 I can’t really give much of a story synopsis because of the way the story is presented with short, concise chapters in a developing drabble-type format; if I do I will ruin all the fun you’ll have reading it.
I will say though that Gropeward is pretty hot and a naughty, pervy Daddy and I loved him and Cheerleader Bella. I’m certain you will enjoy Gropeward as much as I did.
Summary for Seven Weeks: “Edward is the single dad. Bella is the new babysitter. Full *DISCLAIMER* inside. Rated M for content. AH
Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance – Chapters: 19 – Words: 13,946 – Reviews: 1233 – Updated: 9-28-11 – Published: 9-19-11 – Edward & Bella – Complete”
Seven Weeks in g-docs.
So, three recs this week, I hope I have something up there that you will enjoy. Please let me know what’s owning you in the FanFiction world and Happy FanFiction Fridays my friends. xx MC