Well, we have made it to December and the Holidays are fast approaching, so during this month, on FanFiction Fridays here at Rob Attack, each week I will try to include at least one Christmas rec for your Holiday reading pleasure. This week my Christmas rec will be a O/S and my last rec of the week.
This 29 chapter Drabble story is a true Drabble with each chapter being exactly 100 words of lemony hot, amusing literary goodness. I had the honor of being JA Mash’s Beta for this story and I have to tell you I loved every minute of it. The ‘not so’ Secret Life of a Security Guard is so much fun to read, and I can guarantee that by the end of this sweet story you will never look at an elevator the same way again! 😉
One of format aspects that I felt worked so well in The ‘not so’ Secret Life of a Security Guard is the way it is told from both “Her POV” and “His POV”, so we get to see what’s going on in both the main characters pervy minds; which is quite enlightening for the storyline, especially in this concise Drabble format. Each chapter gives you clues at to “the big picture”, but you will be kept guessing for a while and if you are nervous or unsure about Edward’s scruples, please read JA Mash’s FF. net profile notes!
The story starts out in an informative “Her POV” and stays this way for the first five chapters:
Today is my first day here.
I know you’re watching for me, and waiting.
I’m looking for you too.
It’s been too long for both of us.
I picked out my clothes just for you today, because I know what my heels do to you.
I feel the heat from your gaze as I get closer.
I don’t even look up when I walk past, I can’t.
Once in the elevator I breathe out a sigh of relief.
Now, I just have to avoid the lobby for the rest of the day.
That’s going to be easier said than done.
Then we switch to Edward, “His POV”, and we learn he is a Security Guard in an office building; and from “her” first day on the job, as she walks by his station, he watches “her” and describes in detail what this really does to him:
Every day you walk by wearing a sinfully sexy skirt, and those sky-high fuck me heels.
My cock jumps at the sight.
“Fucking tease,” I mutter, taking a drag from my smoke when you walk past.
I continue watching.
It’s been eight days of this.
Eight days of the teasing, seven weeks since I’ve had sex.
I turn away from the sight before I lose control and act out my desires.
I take another long drag from my smoke, and stub out the cigarette.
Tomorrow I will finally talk to you.
Tomorrow, you’ll finally know how I feel about it.
I love it! Oh but this pervy Edward will grab your interest and keep you enthralled as he continues to fantasize……like when in chapter 8 he asks, “‘I wanna give you my cock, will you let me?’” Enjoy!
Summary for The ‘not so’ Secret Life of a Security Guard: “Edward Cullen is a Security Guard… everyday he sees this woman in his building at work… he’s attracted to her… but there’s a problem… how long can he resist?
Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance – Chapters: 29 – Words: 5,988 – Reviews: 599 – Updated: 11-28-11 – Published: 11-26-11 – Edward – Complete”
As some of you know, I like to support and showcase new authors, from time to time, to give them a chance to have their FanFiction stories read. It’s a huge challenge to take one’s thoughts and ideas and put them into some sort of coherent literary form so they make sense to others, and when a new author does this well I think it’s very admirable.
Last Call just started posting on November 30/11, so since we only have a Prologue and one chapter so far I spoke with the author and asked her for a more detailed summary and a teaser for the next chapter, in hopes that I could really tweak your interest to give this intriguing new Romance/Drama WIP a try.
Bella is the only survivor, aside from the limo driver, from a car wreck that killed her new husband and both her parents on the night of her wedding, four and a half years prior. Because of her extensive head/brain injuries, she is now suffering from retrograde amnesia, where she can only remember some of her life’s memories, but not all of them. About fives years worth of memories seem to have been erased due to this condition, and of course it is within those five years that Bella knew Edward Cullen, who worked for her family at a vacation resort as their Cabana Boy (heehee).
Edward does not like Bella at all and thinks she is a really terrible person, even going so far as to describe her as, “…a raging, selfish bitch from the instant I met her until the blessed moment I didn’t have to see her face anymore.” But, circumstances have them reuniting now almost 5 years later and Bella will have a tough time understanding why Edward wants nothing to do with her and he is battling within himself to stay away from her, even though she doesn’t seem to be the villain he once knew.
Teaser for the next chapter:
“Well it’s a clever name anyway, The Four Seas. Cullenary Cuisines, Confections & Catering. Oh my gosh! Get it? Four letter ‘C’s? Oh, and his last name is Cullen! And he spelled culinary with his name instead of the actual spelling! Ha! This guy’s a trip!”
Rose chuckles, “Yeah, I get it. That is tricky. Ya gotta have a gimmick, right?”
“And we’re meeting with the owner?”
“Yup. Noon appointment with Edward Cullen…aaand here we are! That was easy enough!” Rose sings as we slow to a stop.
So, as you can see we have a full and exciting developing storyline to follow. I am so thrilled for Robsmyyummy Cabanaboy to have started her first fic and have total faith that if you give this story a chance, she will make it worth your while! Her aim will be to update once a week…so she’s thinking next Wednesday December 7/11 will be the next update.
Summary for Last Call: “The past she’s struggling to remember is the time he’d rather forget… Can they move beyond the scars and forge a new beginning together or have they missed their Last Call? AH, Rated M for language & lemons.
Twilight – Rated: M – English – Romance/Drama – Chapters: 2 – Words: 1,877 – Reviews: 114 – Published: 11-30-11 – Bella & Edward”
And, my Christmas rec for this week is a great little O/S I had the pleasure to Beta, called Elf by the very talented texasbella. I even found this manip and made a few edits to it for a little Xmas banner for Elf! *giggles*
Summary for Elf: “*Entry for TwInspirations Xmas O/S contest* Bella’s had a rough year and is ready to turn her back on the holidays until a chance encounter leads her to find someone to take care of ALL of her needs. Soft BDSM E/B *Not for under 18 readers!*
Bella decides, after a year of heart-ache and loss, that this Christmas she is going to lay low and just bake Holiday treats for the local shelter. But, when she delivers her thoughtful gifts, does she get more on Christmas Eve than just the satisfaction of helping those less fortunate? This is very well-written Edward and Bella O/S, which contains some smokin’ hot Soft BDSM, and if you choose to read this, just sayin’, you may wanna grab a clean pair of shamanties before hand! Merry Christmas!
That’s it for my recs this week, hope you find something you may enjoy reading. Please share what’s been owning you in the FanFiction world this week.
PLEASE NOTE: after next Friday, I will be away on a leave for a bit, so if anyone is interested in being a FFF Guest Reviewer during this time, please feel free to e-mail me at RobAttack1@hotmail.com with your expression of interest. Thanks! MC