Random Rita ~ When Edward is Taken Captive!

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Good afternoon, ladies!

WOW! What with all the fresh RobPorn comin’ out of that teaser trailer for The Rover, I haven’t read as much fanfic this week as I normally would have.

But, I DID come across this treasure of a fic by M7708 called True Nature!

TrueNature by M7707


An expert in vampire psychology, Dr. Bella Swan is assigned to the Institute’s most intriguing captive to date: Edward Cullen. But who is studying whom? AU

Rated: Fiction M – English – Suspense – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 12 – Words: 38,162 – Reviews: 1,607 – Favs: 1,079 – Follows: 1,179 – Updated: Sep 24, 2012 – Published: Jul 23, 2012 – id: 834948

It’s not marked as complete but it IS and I’m dyin’ for her to start postin’ the sequel she hinted at in her last AN!!!


A quite different fic where Bella helps Edward escape captivity is a one shot by Cris called Midnight Carnival!

Midnight Carnival by Cris


AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They’re starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort/Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 3 – Words: 40,813 – Reviews: 152 – Favs: 314 – Follows: 108 – Updated: Apr 6, 2011 – Published: Mar 17, 2011 – Status: Complete – id: 6831249

You’re gonna love both these fics, I guaranDAMNtee!!!

Happy Friday, y’all!


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Filed under Fan Fiction Recs, Rita01tx

26 responses to “Random Rita ~ When Edward is Taken Captive!

  1. susanpr

    Another captive Edward, still a WiP but totally addictive is Raum’s Snare. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8955111/1/. She updates every two weeks like clockwork, and is a great writer. You should check it out

    • rita01tx

      Thanks, Susan darlin’! Just read the summary and, although I haven’t gotten to any of Raum’s fics yet, this one looks like it will be a good jumpin’ off point!

    • xpreadmywings

      Morning girls! susanpr you took the word out of my mouth! Snare keeps you in your toes all.the.time and Raum is an incredible writer! IMHO her masterpiece *so far* is https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8592134/1/Carnelian-and-Ice – “A man struggling to escape from the darkness, and a woman who thinks she doesn’t deserve the light. How will an ice sculpture affect their lives?” AU with vampires *winks winks*
      Give it a try, I’m sure you won’t be disappointed! And she’s amazing to her reviewers, always responding back with poems *shamelessly fangirling*
      As for Midnight Carnival … well, it’s Cris eh? *Wisp anyone?*
      Hum … I had True Nature on my TBR list *thinking out loud* maybe I’ll upgrade it this weekend.
      Thx and sorry for being late I was out of town for pers … oops not my line LOL
      Happy weekend!

      • rita01tx

        Oh, Wings darlin’! Here I was playin’ eenie meenie meinie moe on my TBR and you just made it soooo easy to decide…Raum it is LMAO!

  2. dpennell007

    I’ll have to check them out. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4887478/1/The-Vampire-in-the-Basement was one of my favorites.

    • rita01tx

      *DOH!* Thanks for remindin’ me, dpennell darlin’! I probably forgot that one because they didn’t find out Edward had been held captive by scientists until late in the story! Gawd, I used to sweat bullets waitin’ for The Vampire in the Basement to update LOL!

      • edwardsvamptramp69

        Rita *SMACK*
        I JUST started The Vampire in the Basement since you kept talking about it last week or so and I JUST finished ch. 8 (Bella just gave him the first trial of antedote)!

        I know it’s not your fault, she did write this like 5 years ago, but now I know why he’s so wounded and traumatized.:(

  3. ClaireBamboozle

    Hi hun, glad to see you’re still bringing us lovely fic offerings
    As you know I’m quite fond of having our boy under lock and key, the thought of a captive Edward does unspeakable things to my lady bits. LMAO.
    Hope you have a great weekend, and it’s not raining on you in Holland like it is here 😦

    • rita01tx

      Oh, no you don’t, ClaireBear! You’re not allowed to have another plot bunny until you finish the one that’s got me by the throat right now LMAO!!! But, yeah…Edward at our beck ‘n call? I could sooo imagine that!
      So far, we’ve got gorgeous sunshine! Just don’t send any of that rain my way, thanks!

  4. One of the most touching FF’s I’ve read in a long time is “Please Rescue Me” by TheonlyKyla. Edward isn’t exactly held captive, but is in a mentally and physically abusive relationship, and doesn’t know how to escape. Of course, Bella rescues him. This is quite angsty, but wonderful!
    Sorry, I’m computer challenged, and don’t know how to link, but this is a great story! Read it!

    • rita01tx

      Thanks, Sus darlin’! As much as we fantasize about havin’ Edward under our control, takin’ pleasure from an unwillin’ person just ain’t cool!
      I have Please Rescue Me marked as “Read Next” on my TBR!
      Edward was a shy young man when he fell in love for the first time. He learned the hard way that love shouldn’t hurt, right? When Bella cames into his life, he was at the end of his rope. Can she really offer him salvation? Can he dare to hope?
      Rated: Fiction M – English – Drama/Hurt/Comfort – Edward, Bella – Chapters: 50 – Words: 77,266 – Reviews: 2,125 – Favs: 569 – Follows: 423 – Updated: Mar 21, 2012 – Published: Nov 21, 2011 – Status: Complete – id: 7569689
      I can’t believe I haven’t read more of TheOnlyKyla’s work, although I AM followin’ A Whisper of Chaos LOL!

  5. christa64c

    Nothing brings tears to my eyes faster than reading about our precious Edward being hurt, ill or abused. Though I must admit to having a few fantasies involving having him all to myself. *wink*
    I’ve read Midnight Carnival and found it to be delightfully creepy. A True Nature sounds fantastic and I’ll be reading it soon.
    Thank you for the rec’s!

    • rita01tx

      Well, a broken Edward certainly does bring out our Florence Nightingale side, doesn’t he, Christa darlin’? Fics that make me cry, either with joy or sorrow, make it all worthwhile! Those are the ones we get invested in so deep it’s like we’re there with them!
      So glad you liked Midnight Carnival ’cause it was a great introduction to Cris’s work! Can’t wait for Wisp to complete…I really wanna tackle that one!
      Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH. Ysar made me my banner!
      Rated: Fiction M – English – Hurt/Comfort/Drama – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 53 – Words: 273,277 – Reviews: 10,373 – Favs: 4,284 – Follows: 5,939 – Updated: Jan 22 – Published: Apr 23, 2012 – id: 8051177

  6. Oh my gosh, Rita, you’ve been bringing us pure gold lately! I’ve been working my way through “Waking Up” that you rec’d a couple weeks ago, and I just LOVE it. I’m rationing by reading slowly so I don’t get to the end too quickly, even though she’s killing me with suspense on what is going to happen! I also know (and understand why) it isn’t finished, but I don’t even care – what’s there is totally worth it.

    Now “True Nature” has rocketed to the top of my TBR list – sounds fascinating. This one was new to me.

    I haven’t read “Midnight Carnival” yet, but Cris’s other fic, “As Children After Play” completely owns me. She posts very slowly, but there was a new chapter just a couple weeks ago (not to mention there are over 300K words already). Hot, sweet, protective, impulsive vampire Edward … le sigh. As she warns you, some of it is hard to read (due to subject matter), but oh so worth it.

    Thanks, too, to susanpr and sus for their endorsements of “Snare” and “Please Rescue Me”. Both have been on my TBR list for a while, and are moving up fast thanks to your comments. Is it possible to have 50 fics at the top of your list??

    Happy reading, everyone – once you tear yourself away from The Rover pics, anyway…

    • rita01tx

      Oh, Renee darlin’! I’m so glad you’re likin’ Waking Up! Now you understand why I read it over and over again! So good!!
      As Children After Play is already on my TBR but I’ll move it up to the top on your rec LOL!
      Have a great weekend! MWAH!!!

  7. eewee333

    Interesting recs this week, but I’m always looking for different takes on B&E. I remember reading a story years ago where Edward is held captive at a research facility and Bella helps him escape, but I can’t remember the name of it! I’ll keep looking. I just remember it was really good. Hugs to you all!!

    • rita01tx

      There was a fic called My Mate by Different-Kind-of-Vamp but it’s been pulled and I don’t have a pdf of it.
      Summary: Edward is an 89 year old vampire that gets captured by scientist. They do research on him. Then the scientists capture another vampire, a female.
      Complete – 28 chapters
      The thing about this fic was that English was not the author’s mother tongue and, although she did the best she could, it was very difficult to keep readin’! That bein’ said, her plot and descriptions of Edward {7 feet tall and extremely powerful!} had me hooked…for awhile.
      Don’t remember for sure if it’s Bella who helps him escape, but I believe so.

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