Random Rita ~ Friday Feature Fics!

Wet Rob Avi

All right, ladies!

Here’s what I need you to do! Go treat yourself to a decadent bubble bath, shave {or wax} your legs and bikini line, put on your sultriest make-up and fluff your hair!

Now, dig waaay down deep to the bottom of your lingerie drawer for that set you keep for “special occasions,” pick out a sexy dress to go with it and grab your highest stilettos!

Well, hurry up…I’ll wait!

*Tap foot!* *Check watch!* *Whistle tunelessly!*

Ready? Good ’cause we’re gonna be visitin’ some high class sex clubs tonight *Wicked Evil Cackle!*

OH, AND ANYONE UNDER TWENTY-ONE, PLEASE EXIT STAGE LEFT RIGHT NOW!!!

I refuse to be held responsible for corruptin’ your innocent little minds!

Rob Attack

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11172220/1/That-Night

Edward has a fantasy that his wife Bella is going to help come true with the help of Riley and Garrett. Explicit Language and sexual situations . O/S entry for Twikink 2015. Please be warned. **** I’m going to have a go at extending this, we’ll see where it goes ****

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 64 – Words: 204,789 – Reviews: 364 – Favs: 147 – Follows: 194 – Updated: Nov 7 – Published: Apr 9 – Status: Complete – id: 11172220

Even though I’ve read a lot of kinky shit since discoverin’ fanfiction, I still wasn’t sure quite what to make of That Night after readin’ the first chapter, which was the one shot entry for Twikink 2015! Seriously, Edward’s fantasy has a high squick factor…take it from someone who’s read The Red Line AND its sequel LOL! However, after scratchin’ my head and shruggin’ *whatever floats your boat,* I read on and damned if this story wasn’t very well thought out, presentin’ amazin’ insights into the pressures of decidin’ just what you will or won’t put up with to save your marriage!

“You know we haven’t talked at all since the other night, If you have changed your mind and want to leave it as a fantasy that is your decision, but don’t let it come between us please”. She rose up on her elbows and turned to look Edward in the eye, “Whatever is bothering you we can work out, so are you ready to talk?”

Edward looked at his wife and realised just how much he loved her, she was prepared to do this for him, to make his fantasy a reality, yet he was the one who was struggling with what could happen. Edward encased her in his arms and manoeuvred them so she was sitting on his lap.

“Sweetheart, I have done nothing but think about it, I can’t concentrate on anything else to be honest , I want so much to make it happen but not at the cost of our marriage, or upsetting you and I realise what I am asking you to do could be just that” At that point Bella knew she had to interrupt Edward and stop the train of thought he was going down, he had to know that whilst this was his fantasy she wasn’t totally opposed to the idea and had been giving it a lot of thought recently.

“Before you say anything more I have been considering how to make this work, I know we both agreed that I couldn’t go out and pick up some random guy but what about another option?” Bella asked

“What do you mean?” asked Edward

“Well how about if we ask someone we know and trust, and I’m not talking about Ben or anyone we see every day obviously, but do you have some old college buddies you keep in touch with that you could trust with this? Actually, the more I think about it, it would be easier for me if I didn’t know the guy. We need someone trusted though then we would both be more relaxed.

Edward looked at Bella as though she was out of her mind and for a split second Bella really thought that she was pushing this too hard and he didn’t really want to go through with it. Just as that thought had floated through her mind she watched the expression on his face change from shock to surprise, to confusion and then to settle with the look Bella knew meant he had come up with an idea that he knew was workable.

“You are such a clever girl, I love you so much, and as usual you have just solved everything” Edward exclaimed as he kissed her full on the mouth. “I have to make some phone calls, stay here and I’ll be back shortly”.

What Bella didn’t know was that Edward’s latest job as an up and comin’ architect had been to design an exclusive sex club for his college buddies, Riley and Garrett!

“Thanks to your amazingly talented husband, we were able to get permission from the city to erect this beautiful room. As you can tell it’s fully heated and air conditioned and because of how your husband has designed it and with a few clever interior design tricks we can do anything we want up here. The room is not actually overlooked at all so this is a clothes free zone.”

“Everyone who comes up here will undress behind that screen and leave their clothes in the cabinets. They are then free to do as they please, with whomever they please – you can see we have a couple of hot tubs, showers, seating areas and large play areas. We are hoping this will appeal to the exhibitionists, the voyeurs, the swingers and the naturalists, even just the naked sun worshippers.” At this Riley laughed and patted Edward on the back.

“This is amazing Edward, I am so proud of you” I said as I reached up to kiss him on the lips and gave him a hug. Who knew my husband was such a talented architect? I really should pay more attention to his work.

Inevitably, during one of their many explorations of the club, Bella discovers her own kink but you’ll have to read to find out what it is LMAO!

This fic absolutely will not be for all of you and that’s okay! If you try it and don’t like it, fine…just don’t flame the author or leave her hateful reviews!

If you DO enjoy the workin’s of Alicia’s wonderfully pervy mind, leave her some love from Rita!!!

ps: Thank you, Donna, for introducin’ me to this fabulous author! MWAH!!!

~oOo~
Rob Attack

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11577904/1/Deprivation

Edward is deprived of Intimacy, his love of anonymous sex growing old, Bella is deprived of a satisfying love life but her friends think they have the answer to that. Follow their lives as fate keeps them apart or does it ?

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 13 – Words: 20,053 – Reviews: 103 – Favs: 75 – Follows: 157 – Updated: Nov 12 – Published: Oct 25 – id: 11577904

What’s worse? Bad sex or no sex at all? This the age old question plaguin’ Bella and Edward!

Bella:

I really shouldn’t be concentrating on the ceiling but it’s my own fault because I really expected things to be different this time. I don’t know why I’m surprised; the last time I let him come home with me I redesigned the colour palette for the living room and decided on the pattern and fabric for my new curtains while he was ‘worshipping me’. His words not mine. I know I sound like a nasty ungrateful bitch, but I’m really not. 

I’m horny, frustrated and confused and if I’m completely honest, lonely and scared that I’m going to go through life on my own with a vagina that has healed up.

Edward:

“Oooohhhh, OOOOHHHH,OoooHHHh”

Oh Fuck! She’s a moaner. I can’t stand it when they moan and groan and make stupid noises. 

“Aaahhhhhh, oh baby yes yesyesyesyesyes”

Oh shit that does it, I need to finish and finish quick or Ed Junior is going to stop wanting to play. I increase the speed and grab her hair to pull her head back. If I do it hard enough she may shut up and let me finish in peace. 

Just as I start to straighten my pants she turns around to face me and I think… here we go I’m going to get the ‘I don’t usually do this type of thing’ or ‘I’m not really that sort of girl but…’ I wish they wouldn’t bother. 

“I’m just going to go and clean up sweetheart, I’ll see you back at the bar” I said as I made my way away from her toward the area of the restrooms. As soon as I’m out of her sight, I turn around and make my way, using the crowd as cover, back to my friends.

The waitress brought us our drinks and I knocked my scotch straight back and picked up my beer. I needed to change, I couldn’t keep doing this. I just felt empty and annoyed at myself as soon as everything was over, and even the thrill of it wasn’t like it once was. The buzz from the alleyway was already long gone.

Bella finally breaks down and confides in her friends who immediately make up a short list of possible partners who they believe would give Bella what she needs…Edward is NOT on that list even though Emmett has joined the conspiracy and is puttin’ forth names, too!

Still a WIP at 13 chapters, Edward and Bella are still unaware of each other but, with both of them in the same sex club for different reasons at the moment, I’m gnawin’ my fingernails to the bone waitin’ to find out what happens next!

~oOo~

Rob Attack

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11562555/1/No-Strings-Attached

I got the rundown before I ever stepped through the doors: everyone is anonymous, no strings attached, no questions asked, and what happens in the club stays in the club. I got it. I thought it wasn’t going to be a problem, but then I saw her. AH, ExB, M for lemons and language

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Drama – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 8 – Words: 20,215 – Reviews: 768 – Favs: 602 – Follows: 1,007 – Updated: 2h ago – Published: Oct 16 – id: 11562555

My name is called, and my body tenses. A blindfold covers my eyes, and my remaining senses are called to action. The mixture of smoke and perfume in the air assaults my nose while the taste of whiskey still lingers on my tongue. My skin tingles with excitement as my ears focus on the voices of the women in the room.

I’m led onto the stage and introduced to the crowd. Cheers and whistles greet me, causing confidence to overshadow my nerves. My guide, Tina, helps me slowly turn in a circle, making a brief stop to show the audience my backside. Again, the women sound appreciative.

There’s a hum—an energy—that takes over the room. I lick my lips and let out a deep breath, ready for action.

“Let’s start the bidding at fifty dollars,” Tina announces, and the crowd erupts.

I don’t pay attention to the numbers being shouted, but there seems to be a bidding war going on. Finally, someone is declared victorious. The applause is so loud I’m caught off guard momentarily when Tina places my hand into the hand of the winner. The warm, soft skin that surrounds my own puts me at ease, and I gladly let the woman lead me down the front steps of the stage. Voices shout words of congratulations and encouragement as she takes me through the crowd and away from the noise.

When she stops abruptly and pushes me against a wall, putting her lips to my ear, my dick stands at attention. “I can’t wait to get my hands and mouth on you,” she growls softly, and her warm breath on my skin makes me ache for her touch.

Needless to say, this woman rocks Edward’s world and he moves heaven and earth to find out who she is and how he can get his hands on her again!

~oOo~

And now for somethin’ completely different! No sex club in this story but an Edward so dark, he manages to pull the wool over everyone’s eyes!

Rob Attack

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11507600/1/Bitter-Sun-Rising

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn’t return Bella’s crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader. AU, AH, E/B, HEA.

Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Adventure – [Bella, Edward] – Chapters: 26 – Words: 52,704 – Reviews: 608 – Favs: 335 – Follows: 617 – Updated:21h ago – Published: Sep 15 – id: 11507600

“Jacob’s not a bad person,” Leah retorted. “I know him pretty well. He’s just—I was thinking it’s time for Bella to find another guy to like. Someone with a better reputation, who’s not always getting into fights.” Leah stopped to scan the lunchtime crowd. “Someone like…” She spotted a tall student with his arms full of books emerging from the crowd. “Like Edward Cullen. Senior class president, straight-A student. Now there’s a guy who’s not a troublemaker.” She grinned at me. “And he’s awfully cute too.”

We scrutinized Edward as he walked across the courtyard. “Mmm,” said Jessica. “Those glasses make him look like too much of a nerd. But he’s got nice hair,” she conceded. “Dresses well too.” She got a gleam in her eye. “I bet it would feel nice to run your hands through that thick hair!”

I frowned and licked some jelly off my finger. “He is good-looking,” I agreed. “But I think my fingers would make his hair too sticky. And Leah, I don’t know if I even want to think about anyone else. I’m too busy with my job at the bakery anyway. I don’t want to get involved with anyone.”

Edward finds himself attracted to Bella and she does like him but instinctively senses that there’s more to him than meets the eye!

James knocked Jacob to the floor and said something with a sneer on his face.

Jacob, his face red, leaped up and decked James. I stopped eating, my eyes on the fight. Edward continued to eat his lunch, ignoring the two brawlers.

“Edward, you don’t seem to be interested in this fight,” said Jessica.

He shrugged. “Displays of brute force don’t interest me.”

I blushed and looked away from the fight. Jacob and James were kind of brutish, punching each other that way. I snuck a glance at one of Edward’s long, slender hands, and couldn’t imagine it balled into a fist. No, a hand like that was made for something else, something far more graceful. I could imagine him playing the piano, running his fingers over a stringed instrument… or a woman’s skin. I imagined those hands stroking my cheeks, sliding down to caress my throat, fingers resting gently on my pulse point. I swallowed, eyes closing, and those long, delicate fingers slipped around my throat, pressing me against the wall. I gasped and met his dark eyes inches from mine, something unspeakable in their depths. His hands tightened around my throat. I tried to pull his fingers away, but they were so strong. It became hard to breathe. His eyes bored into mine, his expression suddenly full of regret and sadness. My vision started to darken…

I shook myself and forced myself to focus on the lunch table in front of me. Another one of my moments of distraction, but a chilling one this time. It wasn’t unusual that I would have little flights of fancy in the middle of the day, but why would I have such a disturbing fantasy sequence about a harmless nerd like Edward? I really needed to learn to focus better.

Edward was still talking. “Deadly force is far more effective when used subtly and with finesse.”

I blinked and the other girls nodded.

Hope this makes up somewhat for my absence!

Happy Friday, y’all!

Rita

Night Raider

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50 responses to “Random Rita ~ Friday Feature Fics!

  1. bevey99

    On the subject of smut ‘;-] Just read Liberation by Capricapra OMG
    Liberation By: capricapra Complete
    Bella Swan is a confident, high-achieving businesswoman, but when it comes to the opposite sex, she’s rather nervous. Enter sexy, suave, charismatic restaurateur Edward Cullen, who seems to have a way of getting to let her guard down. But is he really as smooth as he seems? Originally an entry for the DTE Contest
    Reading No Strings Attached, JiffyKate always delivers, and this right at my front door in DFW.
    One more rec, this is an older fic but it is incredible. Some of the best writing I’ve read in forever, it just moved into my top fav fics of all time. One Day by RueforRegret
    One Day By: RueforRegret complete
    Over a quarter of a century separates single-mother Bella Swan from her hormone-riddled adolescence. Watching her teenaged daughter navigate her way through various rites of passage, Bella can’t help falling prey to nostalgia. “One Day” brims with steamy reminiscences of first love and traces one woman’s mid-life attempt to reclaim it.

    • rita01tx

      Great recs, Bev darlin’! I’ve read Liberation but I still need to sink my teeth into One Day…thanks for remindin’ me of that one!

    • rita01tx

      And while I’m at it, here’s the link for One Day by RueforRegret
      https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9147787/1/One-Day
      Over a quarter of a century separates single-mother Bella Swan from her hormone-riddled adolescence. Watching her teenaged daughter navigate her way through various rites of passage, Bella can’t help falling prey to nostalgia. “One Day” brims with steamy reminiscences of first love and traces one woman’s mid-life attempt to reclaim it. ExB, AH, mild angst, M-Rated 18 & over.
      Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Angst – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 36 – Words: 127,899 – Reviews: 2,577 – Favs: 1,204 – Follows: 1,572 – Updated: Oct 28, 2014 – Published: Mar 29, 2013 – Status: Complete – id: 9147787

    • rita01tx

      and for Liberation by Capricapra
      https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9647653/1/Liberation
      Bella Swan is a confident, high-achieving businesswoman, but when it comes to the opposite sex, she’s rather nervous. Enter sexy, suave, charismatic restaurateur Edward Cullen, who seems to have a way of getting to let her guard down. But is he really as smooth as he seems? Originally an entry for the DTE Contest- now to be continued as a multi-chapter fic.
      Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 17 – Words: 62,406 – Reviews: 739 – Favs: 847 – Follows: 879 – Updated: Dec 15, 2013 – Published: Aug 31, 2013 – Status: Complete – id: 9647653

    • Bev, One Day is amazing and definitely one of my favorites. I simply loved it. So, so much! Am I gushing? Yes, yes I am. I just connected with this one. It still resonates. One day I must go back and reread it. Rita, darling, don’t let this one get lost on your list.

      • rita01tx

        I’ll put a special mark beside it on my TBR, Kay darlin’!

        Oh, and in case you guys didn’t see my note on a previous post, I recently came across a pulled fic by Walkingwithgiants called
        “I Love Mr North!”
        Rose drags Bella to a porn convention so she can meet porn star Emmett. Bella literally runs into Edward who is also a porn star but she has no idea…she just comes to love him as a “normal” person.
        When she finds out, things get real complicated real quick LOL!
        Damn good read!
        Let me know if you’d like to have the pdf…Zveka already snatched up her copy LOL!

        • Oh, I have I Love Mr. North, and the outtakes, but I haven’t read them yet. Must push them to the top of the list.

        • bevey99

          Hey sweetie, I’ll be happy to take a copy. Sounds yummy.
          There was another fic out there, never completed, about Bella being convention co-coordinator and booking a porn convention every year. And, yes Edward was there a a vendor for an Adult Toy Store. Can’t remember the author or the name of the fic.

          • rita01tx

            That would be Conventioneers by Catastrophia and I would be overjoyed if she ever got around to finishin’ it but none of her stories has updated since November 2013 *sigh!*
            https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7754001/1/Conventioneers
            Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she’s never seen and a man who’s very comfortable in it? Rated M for lang and lemons
            Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 6 – Words: 23,507 – Reviews: 1,048 – Favs: 1,318 – Follows: 2,020 – Updated: Jul 9, 2013 – Published: Jan 19, 2012 – id: 7754001

            ps: You have mail!

  2. dpennell007

    Deprivation has a subtle humor to it as opposed to That Night which was a little angsty. I like her writing style. Nice banners by the way! You’re not just another pretty face.

    I recently finished Love In My Box which was pretty funny. I’m on my phone so I don’t have a link. Welcome back!

    • rita01tx

      Another classic I’ve never gotten around to readin’, Donna darlin’! *facepalm!*
      Love In My Box by Cosmoandmarvar
      https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5782455/1/Love-in-My-Box
      Bella’s an intellectual free spirit and Edward is a reserved, slightly geeky med student. They have a brief, but intense encounter on Sp Brk in Miami. Can they find true love through emails? There will be lemons and laughs. Look who’s writing this!
      Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Edward, Bella – Chapters: 27 – Words: 147,894 – Reviews: 8,829 – Favs: 5,586 – Follows: 3,860 – Updated: Jan 29, 2011 – Published: Feb 28, 2010 – Status: Complete – id: 5782455

  3. Rita, you’ve hit my need for a new fic right on its kinky head! Woo hoo!!!

    • rita01tx

      Hi, Christa darlin’! Yeah, I figgered I couldn’t possibly be the only one who enjoys kinky fics, especially when there’s more meat on the bones than just lemons…hot as they are *phew!*

  4. I saw your post yesterday, and was so excited, but then turned on the news and just was horrified and devastated. My heart hurts for all those lives stolen, for the love one’s left to mourn, for all of France and humanity. Dear, dear zveka I pray you and your dear ones are all safe. Rita, please forgive me for bringing the outside world into this wonderful place of escape. Many of us will crave an escape, a break from the stress and horrors of the outside so I am so glad your post came through this week. I just love Bev’s rec and it actually made me smile this morning remembering some of the story. I don’t remember it all, but I do remember the feelings I felt reading it. So thanks ladies for the smile today. As a coincidence, I am right in the thick (*snickers*) of reading That Day. I’m up to the chapter where they go to the club’s grand opening. I, like you, wasn’t so sure about this one. The first chapter almost saw me flounce, but enough of me must have been intrigued to see where the story would go because I’m on chapter 20. Still not sure about ol’ freaky Edward. He’s sexy, but a bit special. That’s a new kink for me. Admittedly, my kink imagination is so limited, but really-I found my eyebrows getting a work out. Now targeted at the club, I’m even more curious where this couple is headed next. I’ve updated my list with the recs mentioned today that I don’t already have. I finally got to FluffyLiz’s Out of the Corner of my Eye. I have a soft spot for Liz. She pretty much introduced me to fan fiction. I am following along with two-TWO! WIPs (HORIZON and of course Red Dawn.) Huge for me.

    • rita01tx

      C’mere, sweetheart *BIG HUGS!* Hell’n we wouldn’t be human if we didn’t feel gutted by the terrible events in Paris! Obviously, the perpetrators WEREN’T human but soulless monsters! You know, it doesn’t say the 27 virgins they’re promised are actually female! It would serve those homophobic IS bastards right…may they rot in Hell, but I’d still feel bad for the poor virgins!

      Glad you trusted me enough to read past chapter 1 of That Night, Kay darlin’ LOL! The mental twists and turns Edward and Bella take to adjust and accommodate each other’s expandin’ sexual horizons intrigue me almost as much as the actual kinky fuckery LOL!

      Aaah, Red Dawn! Anxiously awaitin’ the big werewolf smackdown!!!

    • Thanks Kay… all my family and I we are fine, I don’t live in Paris …. spend my weekend calling friends who live there or their kids live there 🙂

      • rita01tx

        Oooh, Zveka darlin’! *HUGS!* I love it when you bring me new authors! Just now put TwistedKey on author alert *fist bump!* Haven’t read Start Over yet but I’m enjoyin’ the hell out of Without A Smile! What a sweet, funny, romantic fic *squeee!* I love this Edward AND quirky Bella is such a sweetheart LMAO!

        • well hugs are always welcome Rita 😉
          Did you read RedEyedEdward Contest ?

          • rita01tx

            Every single entry this time, Zveka darlin’! Our authors certainly outdid themselves turnin’ Edward into a red-eyed devil LMAO! I missed the vote but I would have had a hard time choosin’ anyway! Still, if I was forced, I’d have to say Mate by Sheviking was my overall favorite!

            • Ah Mate is excellent! all of them are excellent. She won public vote 🙂 and she will add one or two chapters 🙂
              I love Monolith by NewTwilightFan ( new author for me) and she will write more too

              • rita01tx

                Oh, believe me! I have them ALL on alert…just in case LOL!

              • dpennell007

                You should try Resurfacing by NewTwilightFan. It’s pretty short, and I really enjoyed it. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10132963/1/Resurfacing

                Resurfacing
                By: NewTwilightFan
                Bella is anxious to finally meet the object of her desire: handsome, wealthy, enigmatic Edward Cullen. After almost three years of talking and teasing via e-mail, text and phone calls, is she truly ready for something real?
                Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 14 – Words: 50,931 – Reviews: 554 – Favs: 725 – Follows: 652 – Updated: Nov 5 – Published: Feb 22, 2014 – Status: Complete – id: 10132963

                Duplicity and Monolith were my favorites in the contest.

      • So glad to hear that all your dear one are safe. Zveka. My husband’s cousin and her daughter were in Paris. Thankfully both are safe, as well.

  5. Thank you for the hug. Holy smokes, I just finished the club chapter. Phew! Can’t wait to read about their discussion afterwards. Bella seemed a little shell-shocked. I think she may have freaked herself out when she stumbled upon what I’m guessing is her kink. Oh, and Red Dawn is da bomb. It’s agonizing waiting for updates. I’ve read the entire thing twice.

  6. You crack me up, Rita. “Edward’s fantasy has a high squick factor…take it from someone who’s read The Red Line AND its sequel LOL!” True dat!
    I probably read the contest one-shot, but I’m amazed that she was able to expand it out to 64 chapters and 200K+ words. From your review it sounds like she gave it some real substance. I’ll have to check out her “wonderfully pervy mind” in this story as well as the WIP you mentioned (because unlike some people I ain’t skeered of WIPs).

    And then holy crow! Bitter Sun Rising really sounds interesting. Loved this line: “Displays of brute force don’t interest me.” Followed by Bella’s little trip into fantasyland. Oh yes.

    So let’s see, what have I been reading? As I mentioned to Zveka in an earlier thread, I was blown away by “Infinite Visibility” by TheFicChick. This is a Twilight/Remember Me crossover that has no doubt been discussed on this blog, but I just got around to it. I haven’t been so deeply absorbed in a story in a l-o-n-g time! I would never have believed that these two worlds could be melded so seamlessly … or that I would have loved Tyler/Bella so very much. As a storytelling achievement I’d have to compare it to “Beyond Time” by TKegl – both of them keep you wondering “where is she taking this?” but you’d never dream of hopping off the train. I can’t say much about it for fear of spoilers, just READ IT!
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9198986/1/Infinite-Visibility

    I’m loving another WIP that I heard about from one of your commenters, She Tames the Beast Within by DeJean Smith.
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11166253/1/She-tames-the-beast-within
    A wonderfully imagined medieval (!) setting, with ordinary peasant Charlie and Bella, plus interesting relationships among the Cullens. And the heat between B&E … whoa.

    There was an unexpected “new chapter” update on “Choices” by Twilover76 – after a 20-month silence! (I love it when that happens…) I had not actually started this one, it was just high on my infinite TBR list, but since it came back to life I decided to pick it up. The trick on this fic is to get past the first 5-6 chapters that set up the variation from canon. After that, once she’s on a roll telling the story her way, it’s wonderfully satisfying. IMO opinion she fixes a lot of what I saw as weaknesses or missed opportunities in canon.
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7220545/1/Choices

    Bevey99 rec’d another story by Capricapra – I’m reading “The Fox”, which was an expansion of her entry for the “Taste of the Forbidden II” contest. At least read the contest one-shot – I love me a smart Bella.

    Thanks all of you for piling on the recs for “One Day”. It has never quite passed the threshhold to make my TBR list, but now it has! Oh, and Rita, please do send me the PDF of “I Love Mr North”. Sounds excellent!
    I loved your plot bunny idea too.

    I’m going to quit there so I don’t overload the link threshhold. Welcome back, Rita, I’m always happy to hear from you!

    • rita01tx

      Well, three links did land you in the naughty box, Renee darlin’ LMAO! Luckily, moderation is just the click of a button so no problemo!
      Thank you for the great recs and back pats! Don’t know what I’d do without everyone’s encouragement and especially your enthusiastic participation *HUGS!*
      Except for The Fox, which I love love love, I haven’t gotten around to any of your recs yet although they are on my radar *sigh!*
      Oh, and check your inbox…Mr North is on his way *wink!*

    • Hmm, I’ve never read The Red Line. Guess I should bump it up my list? She Games the Beast sounds fab.

      • rita01tx

        *Gasp!* Youz a real live Red Line virgin!?!?! Oh, Kay darlin’! It is a MUST READ…well, if you can handle major angst! The first paragraphs of the first chapter are branded onto my soul forever:

        No kid ever stands up on the stage at school and says, “I want to be a whore.”
        Back then, I used to say I wanted to be a doctor. My friends would say cop, fireman, soldier…those are nice dreams too. But this is the real world…and dreams just don’t come true. I know that now.
        I am a whore. My name is Edward. There are no last names when you’re a whore so I am not a Cullen right now. It’s time to punch in for work.
        Every night I get to be a cop, a fireman, a soldier, Tarzan…in a way.
        I enter from the back door, to this huge establishment called “Fire”. It’s a club for women, there is no man’s night, there are no gay clientele allowed in. That’s the one thing I’ve never done and at least I have that to cling onto.
        I am for women only. And that is no small boast. And don’t be fooled. It’s not only young, beautiful women I see. All ages, young, middle aged, even senior citizens pursued me here. I am always good to all of them.
        I figured women would be soft and gentle with me. I figured wrong.

  7. Thanks Rita for rec’d, I didn’t read any of them, love a lot Mr North 🙂 thanks again
    Choice is excellent and so different Bella and Edward than in the books 🙂 and She tame the beast is wonderful 🙂 love a lot her Bella
    I read some wip

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11341822/1/Start-Over
    One and a half years ago, I’d made a mistake, one that I’d immediately regretted. It was time to correct it now. I’d been given a second chance and I won’t let it go. This time, I won’t let her go. AH, EPOV
    Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 19 – Words: 72,767 – Reviews: 431 – Favs: 362 – Follows: 699 – Updated: Nov 14 – Published: Jun 27 – id: 11341822
    this story miss just epilogue and it’s EPOV, her others stories are great too

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11278440/1/Without-A-Smile
    “I hardly slept last night as it was. Mr. Cullen ran out of the office shortly after I stopped and I thought about boxing up my things but decided to wait until I was officially fired before doing anything rash.” “You mean rash like breaking out in a song-and-dance routine in front of your boss?” Rosalie snickered.
    Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Humor – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 25 – Words: 42,837 – Reviews: 1,213 – Favs: 554 – Follows: 1,176 – Updated: Nov 7 – Published: May 29 – id: 11278440

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11470212/1/Number-Our-Days
    Bella Swan is a time traveler, drifting between the past and present. Can the Cullens help her find the cure before time runs out?
    Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Adventure – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 13 – Words: 39,617 – Reviews: 194 – Favs: 106 – Follows: 185 – Updated: Nov 12 – Published: Aug 26 – id: 11470212

  8. rita01tx

    Hey y’all! Many years ago, I tried to read a story about vamp Edward gettin’ snatched and put into a habitat for observation. After Bella is put in there with him and they turn out to be mates, they escape to make their way back to the Cullens! It was so badly written that I never finished readin’ it even though I loved the plot and you know it had to be bad for me to flounce!
    GOOD NEWS! Someone adopted that fic and cleaned it up to a more legible version! Since I’m never gonna feature it…the writin’ still needs a bit of work, I’m just gonna link you up here in case you wanna give it a try!
    My Mate Saga by Alynelovesyou
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8714595/1/My-Mate-Saga
    Vampire are Different. Edward is a 149 year old vampire, captured by humans to be tested on. He’s lonely and craves to have a mate of his own. What if the scientist capture a very beautiful female vampire? What if she’s the girl haunting Edward’s Dreams? Follow them on the adventure of getting back home and being a new mated couple. RE-WRITE OF THE ORIGINAL.
    Rated: Fiction M – English – Romance/Adventure – Bella, Edward – Chapters: 28 – Words: 100,829 – Reviews: 1,236 – Favs: 1,238 – Follows: 653 – Updated: Oct 21, 2014 – Published: Nov 18, 2012 – Status: Complete – id: 8714595

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